SwaRon Os ~ Under the mulberry tree

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Shreya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: crazyvaishu
this is truly beautiful 👏
a sweet heart-touching os 👍🏼
perfectly penned
loved it ❤️

P.S.- can I get PMs for ur further updates 😳 I m in love with ur writing

Thankyou so much Vaishnavi!! This means a lot to me. Yeah surely u will get the Pms:)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: swaronaaliya
Sweet os
loved it
thanks

Thankyou so much:)

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: SalmanShahidSm
❤️Beautiful...You are an amazingg writer! :)

Thanks!!! Means a lot 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: aneesha93
Oh Shreya, this was such a lovely piece of writing. Five star reminded me of Shantanu:) Nice title:-)
Thanks for the pm

Thank you Aneesha!! I'm glad you liked the title!

And abt the five star,well I am a VruShan fan so five star has to be one of my favorites! :P

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
This is sooo sweet and beautiful ..
Mulberry tree is there..
Loved it
Thanks

Thank you !😊 Glad you liked it:)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: mythreyii
Hey shreya
Short sime and a beautiful is

From their 8 year old to them getting married written in a simple and sweet language

Well last line was amazing everything was same...ring in her finger

Beautiful lines..well penned

P.S. he gave away his bar of FIVESTAR o reminds of vrushan. <3

Thanks a ton Mythreyii!!..I'm glad you liked my childhood sweethearts :D

About your Ps, I'm sure every Vrushanian just like u and me are going to think from that angle :P :P Thanks again:)

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Shreya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: sneharay
Beautiful and Sweet Os.. 😊

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: SHAhira-Swaron
Yet again a awesome simple and beautiful os di.. Loved it wholly and especially the proposal part and not to forget the five star part too i like the name very much keep writing more & more nd pm me thanks

Thank you so much!! I'm so happy you liked the title! Yup surely I will PM you :)

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: --lavanya--
Waow Shreya 👏
This was such a beautiful piece of work
It was ❤️
Loved it ! 😃
Keep writing more n more ! 👍🏼

Hey Lavanya!..Thanks a lot!! Glad you loved it :D

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
This was so cute <3

I loved the young SwaRon there. . .The way he gave her his whole chocolate bar :D

And the adult version reminded me of my own work, not that it held any resembelence but just because it was a proposal scene. . .You wrote it beautifully. Swayam chose a really romantic way of proposing Shron <3

Got no idea how a mulberry tree looks like but that I am going to google it up but I love the sound of mulberry :P

Lovely work Shreya!

Chitra <3

I'm so excited to see a comment from you!...And it surely makes me smile wider when its a long one! I am glad you liked it !..The proposal you've written was way too romantic so its a plus for me that my writing atleast managed to remind you of yours!

Thank you so much Chitra!!

Yeah even I really like the sound of it ,probably that's why I decided on it for the title :P