SwaRon Os ~ Under the mulberry tree

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Under the mulberry tree

The warm rays of sunlight swept across the sky ,painting it in the lightest shade of blue.They walked through the green grass fields holding hands,making their way towards the brown wooden bench under their favorite mulberry tree.

Licking off the chocolate at the corner of her lips ,she asked,
"Will we be friends forever?"

"Ofcourse we will" ,he said with all the innocent determination of his eight year old self, handing her his bar of five star.

"I already ate one of yours",she replied sheepishly.The white daisies watched them as he smiled back taking her hand in his .

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The glistening golden stars adorned the sapphire blue sky during a cold winter night.The westward breeze still flew by as they sat on the same wooden bench exchanging a word of silence.

"So there has been a request for your hand in marriage". He spoke finally looking closely at her.

"Is that why you are here? " So that's what you are going to do. Praise him away to glory to convince me to get married to the person I don't love? Isn't that what you always do to get me to agree? But I decline." she spoke as her eyes began moistening. Why was he making it so difficult for her? Is he a fool to not understand that he was the only one her heart always desired?

"You cannot decline before knowing him?" He reasoned.

"Its me who gets to choose" and with that she began walking away and he could very well hear the heartbreak even in her voice.

"No I'm not going to praise him, he's riddled with flaws."

She stopped midway and turned to him ."He is?"

He slowly nodded. "I have it on good authority that he's stupid and arrogant and obstinate, or at least he was until he realized what a fool he has been."

"But that's what I said about... you." She replied taken aback.

"Well shucks, that does sound like me.So though I'm not a perfect man I'm here, on one bended knee. This question now my heart ,which is in love with you demands,
Will you let me call you mine forever,Sharon?"

She couldn't believe the words she just heard.Her heart fluttered as the moment began to sink in slowly.
"Ofcourse...ofcourse I will Swayam" ,she smiled tearfully as he slid the ring into her finger and she crushed herself into his being.

Everything was the same still. The wooden bench,the mulberry tree belonged to them still. The white daisies watched them still. Only the ring in her finger now is what made all the difference.




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Wandering_mind thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello peeps!
So I'm here with a new Os after a long time.This was supposed to be a neutral Os but since I imagined Swaron while writing this ,I changed it to a SwaRon Os.You are free to imagine it on anyone you wish:P
Drop in your reviews ,please?

Love,
Shreya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this is truly beautiful 👏
a sweet heart-touching os 👍🏼
perfectly penned
loved it ❤️

P.S.- can I get PMs for ur further updates 😳 I m in love with ur writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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❤️Beautiful...You are an amazingg writer! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh Shreya, this was such a lovely piece of writing. Five star reminded me of Shantanu:) Nice title:-)
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is sooo sweet and beautiful ..
Mulberry tree is there..
Loved it
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey shreya
Short sime and a beautiful is

From their 8 year old to them getting married written in a simple and sweet language

Well last line was amazing everything was same...ring in her finger

Beautiful lines..well penned

P.S. he gave away his bar of FIVESTAR o reminds of vrushan. <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yet again a awesome simple and beautiful os di.. Loved it wholly and especially the proposal part and not to forget the five star part too i like the name very much keep writing more & more nd pm me thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waow Shreya 👏
This was such a beautiful piece of work
It was ❤️
Loved it ! 😃
Keep writing more n more ! 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was so cute <3

I loved the young SwaRon there. . .The way he gave her his whole chocolate bar :D

And the adult version reminded me of my own work, not that it held any resembelence but just because it was a proposal scene. . .You wrote it beautifully. Swayam chose a really romantic way of proposing Shron <3

Got no idea how a mulberry tree looks like but that I am going to google it up but I love the sound of mulberry :P

Lovely work Shreya!

Chitra <3

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