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Oh My God Neet!!!! You are such a phenomenal writer!...You have such a command over your writing!!.. This was incredible!.. And you're apologizing for delay, girl trust me anyone would wait willingly if you give us such amazing updates!!!
This story has come such a long long way ,all thanks to you!
Coming to the update, What can I say!..You amazed me totally with the way you wrote this part!..I loved each and every bit of it.
Swayam's inner turmoil was so well written. Finally I'm loving Swayam now.I'm so glad the awaited realizations have come forth.Doing wrong knowingly is one thing coz you may be aware at the point of time that you may feel guilty for doing it sometime and you convince yourself that you have your reasons but when that guilt actually begins to consume you,its a totally different thing than what you expected.It brings unbearable pain and repentance. And that is what Swayam must be feeling, in addition to the finally accepted deep love for his wife.
Sharon!...I just don't know what to say!.. Her being was nearly killed so brutally for one big mistake she committed. She is in desperate need of love and warmth .I sympathize with her so much that I wish I could run and hug her. Gosh your characters seem so real!!.. I have to remind myself that its just a story and not something happening in front of my eyes!.
Swayam and Sharon's moment was something that touched my heart immensely. "You scared me, Sharon" took my breath away and I could feel the intensity every time he said it to her. It was such an overwhelming moment, I wish it wasn't broken. Nevertheless I am sure you'll be turning that moment into something even better if that's even possible!
Swayam breaking all ties with Ruhi was like a breath of relief. Yes he has made some huge ,probably unforgettable mistakes but I'm happy he hasn't cheated his 'wife' whose earned the right and importance of being called one just recently. And the hell of a lover that Swayam is, I am sure she's going to get all the love she's been deprived of . Can't wait to see them together now ,and more importantly experiencing parenthood. Hoping that their princess will be fine soon and mark the beginning of a new dawn in her parents' lives.
Splendid work!!
P.S. My comments turn out to be too long!..Sorry if I bored you:P
Loads of love ,
Shreya
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