||SwaRon FF: Broken Wings|| - Page 60

Originally posted by: .nerfherder

So, 'Amaira Strikes Back' eh?

This update was a pleasant one. Hah, the age old 'i want a boy-no! a girl' fight. It never looses its humor.😆

I pity Sharon, her husband ain't allowing her to do anything resourceful. I'd snap and kill someone too.🤡

Now that Swayam is in full force to 'destroy' Pia, I think its going to be fun watching him do so. I'm eager to see how you've planned this out. This and the Amaira story. I have full trust in you that you aren't going to make it easy for us or SwaRon. :3

Great writing, you've got a nice flow. I really admire that.

Update soonish!

Cheers

Nishi :)

Me first.☺️

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome update
awwwswaron scene wasso cute
swayam in action nice plan
Stephie knw amaira as a friend
hope so sharon is fine

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

Old Is Gold I say😉

Your last sentences are making me nervous!!!! Your trust in me brings tears to my eyes(Oh! Does it ring a bill?)🤣

Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya

Woah!!.. Finally an update!

It feels so good to see Swayam and Sharon being their original selves! It seemed like these seven months had changed them totally with so much distance and emptiness. Now that the distance has lessened to quite an extent, it kind of brings a relieved feeling even though the mystery is still not completely revealed. Their unending ,mad love is what defines them and after this part, with that love back, Swayam and Sharon feel so much familiar. Hopefully they continue to stay like that forever from here on.

Swayam,what can I say about him!..Does a guy like him really exist?..Inspite of knowing that Sharon is assured of his innocence in the trap he's caught into, he still did not enter the room. Sigh!!!..Sharon's so damn lucky, like REALLY!..

And I'm hoping its a princess too !😉

Sharon's insane acts was actually the most cute element of this update for me!.. Utterly cute!.. I don't know why but I couldn't help imagining Vrushika here..Had this scene been actually shot ,it would have probably got the maximum number of views!!.. I wish you were one of the members of the creative team! :(

The last part did raise questions. I couldn't have imagined that Stephie would also play a small role in this mystery. What is this Amaira all about?? Let it out now please!..For Sharon's sake please, I don't want their newly found happiness to be short lived ..Please!!

Surely 'Worth a Wait' chapter :)Awaiting the next one😊

P.S If possible please PM me the next time you update as I'd be a little inactive for a while but I don't want to miss out on this :)

Love,

Shreya

Originally posted by: mythreyii

Chitra

Amazing jus amazing..

This one was jus amazing...!!!!

I loved it as much as I loved the other updates.

There are too many favourite parts in this one..

Sharon screaming over the phone and swayum admiring her with intense and innocenteyes.. Very well penned..

Sharon has two blue paint box in the corner of their room is jus hilarious.

Which is all the more funnier is Sharon's complains on what she wants to do but is not able to do bciz swayum does not let her and she knows y he does not..

And the slow doubts raising inside sharon is making me curious on what is going to be her next step.

Well Stephie is real fun

Okk now Sharon is totally in mess with half story by her side.

This really is amazing update..

As I always tell u I can c things in front of my eyes reading ur words. Great one yet again.

Sorry if comment is small a little caught up