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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#581

awsm updt. & i think sharon wl find d truth by herself. & wanna see dat pia suffers. Update soon.

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#582

Now that was one hell of a story. I came here after what say ages and I'm happy that I stumbled upon this writeup. Normally I read write-ups seldomly but very very rarely comment. The title was what gripped me and I thought I'll just read one chapter but here I am. I loved your style of writing, it is very engaging and keep me intrigued throughout. What I absolutely loved about the characterisation is I could very well relate to Swayam Sharon and SwaRon as a whole. They are so complicated as individuals but look how they complete each other that its funny at times. If both are left without each other then I'll pity and empathize with the people around them because these two are capable of making the people's life miserable. Jokes part the reason why I adore Swayam is he is too good to be true, so full of love, so loyal and so understanding and at times naive that I wish he always get what he deserves. I don't know why but I absolutely love to read when his character is portrayed in a manner which you have written. Gives a tuck at my heart to see him suffer like this but I guess we all are so used to see Swayam on the suffering side that it seems normal, like it's okay for him to suffer. I know it's sadistic to be like this but hey no qualms about the same, as we all know when you make Swayam suffer like it is when you see Sharon going all berserk and thereby give us a love story one of it's kind. You may be wondering how my comment is totally irrelevant as per the story but believe me when I say this, you portrayed small things of their characters so well that it just fits in well and reminds me why I fell in love with them and their love story.

Cheers to your writing.

- Rutu

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deeksha

@vrushan_deeksha

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#583

nice one...
after a long time swaron is getting closer... hope the truth comes out in the next update...

plz continue soon this time...

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prajana

@prajana

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#584

Awsome as always!😊

Its feels so good to see some light moments between swayam and sharon like any normal couple

You wrote it perfectly! Especially swayam not sleeping in his room yet..simple yet such meaningful thought behind it

But the ending!!

One u updated late

Second you ended on a bad place!

Now you owe a superfast update😆

And a long one too!!

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pri98.arora

@pri98.arora

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#585

Wow! This update was beautiful!

Those light hearted moments were bliss!!

Finally SwaRon moments.

I so so so loved when Swayam said that he would enter their room with their princess. It was so Swayamish!

And my fav moment from this chapter was-

"You know what I have kept in the extreme corner of our room? Two boxes of blue paint because you would need to repaint it." Sharon said smirking.

It was so cute😳

Also when sharon throws cushion at swayam when she's angry.

You pen down such small things so beautifully and it seems to be so real that I actually end up imaging them.

Beautiful it was.

Pls update the next part soon 😊

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Neet

@.writtenletter.

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#586

This chapter was a beautiful treat to read. I have to say Amira's presence in their life will be so interesting from now on to read. But like always u write Swayam and Sharon's interactions to perfection. I can't help but smile when reading it. I also love how u have made Steffy such an adorable part of their lives, its so endearing reading her lines with both Swayam and Sharon. Only request please update soon.

Neet <3

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gofi

@gofi

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#587

Finally you updated!

Nd it was amazing

Finally their bantering has returned

It feels so gud to see them fight over baby girl or baby boy

But of course amaira returns!

Eagerly waiting for next

Uodate soon😊

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#588

Happy for swaron..
Swayam is so emotional..
Now Sharon is gonna help him..
Nice
Amaira...again...
I am sure Sharon is gonna find something soon

Thanks for the pm