||SwaRon FF: Broken Wings|| - Page 39

Omg just realised u updated!! I loved it, every second of it. The longing when he watched her sleep was heart breaking. But then u topped it off even more with the phone interaction. That was just so beautiful that i can't even describe it. She was scared to pick it up and he wanted to reassure her, though as always u left the mystery at an all time high. The way you write their interactions is so endearing, silence mixed with love.

Originally posted by: gofi

Update!!😊

I will. ...soon :)

Cliffhanger :'(

Haven't read any of the chapters besides the first one and i liked it so yeah, not commenting, just posting so i can find this story in my posts when you update next.

I am gonna update few more chapters and then i'll comment. :)

Originally posted by: prajana

Waiting for an update!

Update is ready. I have requested for the banner too. As soon as it gets ready I will post :)

Originally posted by: tinku82

Now this is confusion aftr confusion...😕

but loved Swaron part...😊

Nice 1...

Confusion hi confusion hai Solution kuch pata nahi. . .solution jo mila toh saala question kya tha pata nahi. 😆 Sorry! Going Crazy I am. Stick around and I will clear all your confusions 😛

Originally posted by: mahak_28

Do u want ppl to die of anticipation bcz that's what u r doing :/ this was a very small update :'( pls pls update soon

No, if they die who is going to read this? :O You broke my heart Mahak it was Six pages on word, I normally write five pages 😳

I will update this soon 😊

Originally posted by: Rhapsody.

EDITED

The banner is amazing.

You know I'm tempted to just end the comment here, just like that. Kinda how you ended the chapter.🐷

But, well, I'll never do that. I liked this chapter and I love chocolate ice cream. I was having one while reading this chapter.🤣Poor, poor Swayam. I wonder if he'll survive the pregnancy. :v

I might be a teeny bit annoyed about the cliffhanger ending but I liked it. From Rey enquiring about Pia to her appearing at Swayam's doorstep, nicely done.

Waiting to read more.

Cheers

Solo

I would have killed you virtually of you had stopped there 🐷 Because I think I was very nice here, I gave a hint. 😳

The thing in bold You had me in fits 🤣

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Swayam literally shook that ice cream vender..
Hahah
Swaron moment was awesome..

But again confusion..
Update soon
Thanks for the pm

Can you imagine he actually did that! Mad person I tell you!

Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya

So now we have another person adding up to the already complicated mystery!...Although I don't know why I feel that Pia is going to be a help in resolving it instead of creating more confusions...don't know!...but definitely this has made the story more gripping but I'm so going to die of curiosity now!..😆 Start revealing now please!

Swayam and Sharon's relation is slowly turning better...Their love can be felt in everything they do or say!..End this distance sooner!..

"Sharon Shekhawat, yes that is my phone and you are my Wife and so whatever is mine is yours too."

These lines touched my heart!..Those words held such a deep meaning ..it felt so real..I fell for Swayam all over again for the genuineness with which he said those words!..It held pure ,unadulterated love for Sharon!...I actually became emotional after reading that part...yet I kept on reading it again and again..

You are such an amazing writer!...I can feel every emotion you try to express through your writing...and imagining it on Swayam and Sharon makes it all the more special!..Eagerly waiting for the next part..Please update sooner...

And yes I keep forgetting to comment on your banners!..They are beautiful and pefectly relatable!..

Do you know how maby times I came back to read and re-read this comment of yours? No you dont. Thank you so much for liking and supporting like this. For taking out time and commenting like this, this makes me feel that the fours hours I spent sitting and typing in front ofmy desktop was worthwhile. I am so glad you liked the update and thank you for mentioning banners ^_^ <3