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Aneesha

@aneesha93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#371

No, no, NO... Why do you do this?? I loved the chapter. Have mixed emotions after reading it. Am really curious. Please update super FAAASSSTTT. I wanna rrreeeaaaddd further and know everything. Banner - lovely. Please be good for once and reveal the much awaited BIG TRUTH.

Thanks for the pm

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

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Posted: 9 years ago

#372

i so think ke dat PA of swayan is d culprit... hope u guys wl reveal soon...

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#373

awww swaron are so adorable
finally something good is happening
sharon is being normal
they r so cute
pia?? y im thinking she is a culprit n that photo wali girl is somewhere related to sharon
definitely there r two different stories
nice update

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mythreyii

@mythreyii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#374

Chitra totally unfair all u could tell us is pia is involved. I want to know the truth my mind is running all the possibilities already..
Well coming to the update undoubtedly it was amazing and light hearted.
Ur writing is clear and perfect. U behold a writing style that's beautiful.pregnant Sharon is a joy ride for her cute antics and demands also for what swayum does for her. Swayum's shock day is continued here too. I also liked the part when he stares at her baby bump and falls asleep and the next morning with their stares and his explanation followed by shock.
Swayum cooking Sharon's instructions..was sweet
The best part was reys phone call. How both went back to the incident and swayum very calmly said things and Sharon was silently listening and they are slowly coming close. Mellowing Sharon is bliss
Well at least get us close to truth in the next one. I have a feeling u will not unfold the whole truth in next one too..
Mythreyi

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Trupti Tamore

@VruShan_FanGirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
Exams. . .Stress! Stress! Stress Overloaded -_- Study babygirl!
I am happy you liked the update and the banner. For Swayam it was more like Shock Day.

finally chitra dii⭐️ is back with amazing update👏👍🏼 and i love it like always 😃❤️

I loved to imagine sharon in grumpy face 😆

poor swayam 45minutes se car drive kar raha hai but ice cream shop ka aata pata nahi but still going on bcz her wish is his command ,and jab try kiya toh aache khase glares mile😆

OMG !! did he really wake up that vendor in this way 😲

like seriously 🤣this guy has gone nuts in 45minutes

sharon ko bhi shock kar diya and hum bhi and poor vendor has no clue what the man is doing to him

finally she got her "Chocolate Ice-Cream!" 😊

swayam thought was who will belive she going to be mother soon but for i can't belive he is going to father in soon time ,the way he has act with the ice cream vendor that was crazyyy at least she is pregnant but swayam 😕

After ages both has spend so much time together happily not thinking about the situation 😊

swayam longing for his baby was something fabulously you have penned dii👍🏼

i really love that point in all chapter , he wanted to feel that feeling but still just for her trust he didn't

How can someone feel so familiar and so alien at the same time?🤣🤣what was this chitra dii 😆

swayam ko alien bana diya aapne toh directly ALIEN how is that possible

sharon's admiration was so😃 ,don't have words for it ,but she is also scared and swayam is not telling her truth ,he started giving explanation so scared of losing her trust which she have on her

and he wants to make break fast 😕par aacha hua sharon ko yaad aaya aur abhi dono saath me banayege

PHONE is ringing is big thing here

but love the way he make her understand wow 👏

loving the changes coming in there equation Dikhti nahi par ho rahi hain nazdeekiyan

rey ka dialogue wah wah amazing ha 😊

pia i want kill her because of her all this thing is happening 😡

chitra dii jaldi update karna next part plzzz

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prajana

@prajana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#376

Again a beautiful chapter!!

Their icecream hunt was really cute

Poor swayam had to shake that man out of his sleep

I really liked the way you added the phone scene here

Its like closing the loopholes

so pia is related to all this

i must say you have planned the story amazingly

and its keeping us glued to it

Update soon soon!!

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ROSE

@rose1998

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Posted: 9 years ago

#377

A very nice chapter👏

Sab kuch hai isme drama,confusion,love moments

Hats off to you for the amazing writer in you😃

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gofi

@gofi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#378

I so loved this part

Especially the cooking together vala part

But i really feel sad for swayam

He has not felt his baby even once in 6 months!

Plz i want one scene where swayam and sharon get to feel their baby together

Maybe pia clicked swayam and that girl's picturess

I wanna know badly..plz update soon

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#379

last two updates were d cutest one

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bhaumi_vrushan

@bhaumi_vrushan

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#380

Awww such nice chapter BT again new suspense pia mehra uska kya suspense hai plz reveal the suspense amaira n pia mehra soon... Finally Swaron ke bich sab thik ho raha hair.. Thank god... Keep writing u doing great job... Keep it up

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