||SwaRon FF: Broken Wings|| - Page 29

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome chappy
Staphie is a nice girl.loved her

Swayam ...shopping for unborn baby was a treat,

But their dinner time conversation... Why why why

May be rey will help them out.

Thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read the whole ss in one go and gosh!...this was beautiful😛
I'm in love the way you write.
I just loved the way u penned swayam and sharon's "happy go lucky" times and "heartbreak" times.
Felt sad seeing sharon ... but then it's natural. Her insecurities are not wrong. And swayam... he is such a cute loverboy. But I also hate the fact that he is hiding the half truth😭
Anyways ... good going. Superb👏
Update the next one soon😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
Chitra
The update was I don't know gave me mixed feelings at one point the shopping part made me happy and at the end it all got spoiled..
Sharon wants to trust but is not able to and swayum is not ready to spill the beans and yet wants Sharon to trust him I will kill swayum now he has shared it with rey but not with Sharon
Shaarey are always adorable I don't know I like shaarey more than reyaam..
OK so u are in no mood to tell us what happened y?? Pls ya chitra next update me bata dena...
And Stephie us sweet...
That's very much true that Sharon loves swayum way much
Loved the update and I am waiting for u to unfold the mystery
BTW even I was a silent reader of ur ss I had mentioned it before but again I have read them no. Of times the most fav. Should be "you're my it boy" and " feeling it being yours" and I have commented in "cruel games" these are wonderful piece of writing u write so beautifully
Jus keep doing it love reading them all
And u have to solve mystery in next update till then am stalking the thread
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Posted: 10 years ago
As always u capture thoughts and emotions so well, I REAALY WANTED THAT SCENE WITH REY! MAN what an entry he made! SRLy DON't be afraid of length of ur writing! U write so well that I wish u were published! Loving the story but please more scenes with Rey! Can't wait!
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Posted: 10 years ago
I loved this update so much!!
Stepie and sharon have grown closer
And i am loving their bond
The shopping part was awsome
Swayam bought soo much!! ...after all he is an excited dad
Their convo however was sad
But i guess sharon is right
Swayam has hurt her soo much and is not clearing out things
He does not deserve to be forgiven that easily
Okay..so ray knows about everything
I hope we will also get to know in the next update
Plz update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

"I must tell you that my princess doesn't like you weeping so much. she gets hurt." aww

shopping part..it was really cute..nd swayam really adorable 😆 bt then again dining table convo 😭 swayam was really hurt..😭

Now Rey is in the story..dhamakedar entry ho chuki hai..And he knows that girl Amaira..😲he will help his better half Swayam 🤣(sorry😆...i guess i am missing Reyaam nd unka Dostana 😛)

update soon n reveal the truth

Edited by ujwalv - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
A VERY HAPPY DIWALI DII😃

sharon😒bt he did come(my luck he did and made all yours happy)
loved it small swaron scene swayam words were so consoling to her and too us too😊


Stephie my god she is amazing 😊
her teasing was 👏

shopping was highlight and swayam's excitement 😆
from this upd i think he is tooo happy with baby and became daydreamer
but the convo end was 😭😭

finally finally rey is there 😃 ab hoga khulasa bhot khush hu
rey knows what must be happen and he is going to help him

this upd was tooo good di 😊(and u askd me na wht hpn to me dengue was killing me bt knw am fine and celebrating diwali) once agn happy diwali
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Posted: 10 years ago
I havejust finished reading this FF back to back once again.😊 Beautiful FF. I just realised She has Photos of Amaira and Swayam in shirtless. " Swayam was lying shirtless with a girl half naked on a bed. In another photo they both were hugging. It had a series of photo in which Swayam was carrying a girl in his arms." I feel like crying now and the convo between Reyaam is not convincing.😭 I was so hopeful that it had to be Rey. I always Loved Sharey than Reyam.How can he ask Sharon to trust him blindly. How can you put your most important relationship in Jeopordy.
Chitra you have done such a fabulous work. wow!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update rey has came so now we can see wat is the truth. waiting for next part thankyou for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
just read 3 updates in 1 go... & its awsm... whos dat amaira girl.?? swayam se kya rishta hai uska.?? plz unfold soon... 😃

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