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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#271

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Trust me I didnt want to end it on a cliffhanger again but then it did. I intended to add the whole conversation between Rey and Swayam in this update but it was already too long 😳

And I gotta say a Big Thank You for the comments on last update. They were like the best lot I ever got ❤️

Lastly,Happy Diwali everyone.😊 Have a great Diwali and Prosper more 😊

Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 9 years ago

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A true Shantanu lover *_*

@--Ana--

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#272

Res

Unreserved

The way you described Sharon's emotions in this chapter, was really good. Sharon is really hurt. But swayam is also helpless. And this state of their definitely would lacerate any reader. That's exactly my state.

But saying so, I would even confess I love pain. So this is definitely a story for me. The way the story is taking shape, is worth an applaude. 👏

Well I think answers are going to be out in some time. So waiting for it. Awesome chapter di :) update soon ^_^

Love Ana ❤️

Edited by --Ana-- - 9 years ago

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i_yatharthk

@i_yatharthk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#273

what should i say when you already know

CLIFFHANGER...😡😡

jab rey ki entry tab hi i was like ...shit ab agla update...

but whatever you have written was fab...

depiction of Sharon's condition at the start was just perfect

then Swayam's those words for Sharon..."I must tell you that my princess doesn't like you weeping so much. she gets hurt."

happy highlight of the part...👏

and then their shopping...it was too good but the conditions...😭

and here comes a demand from me...I want this situation of Sharon's pregnancy nine months journey and of Swayam too from you as an ss or ff please its a request...

and then the statement by sharon on the dining table about their future...it just broke Swayam...was expecting Swayam's POV then in his study...but definitely you might have planned something tabhi itna obvious chiz skip kiya hoga abhi...

now want the next update soon di...cant wait for a long time...please di

thanks for the pm

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@--lavanya--

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#274

What a beautiful update Di 👏

"I must tell you that my princess doesn't like you weeping so much. She gets hurt."

This was the best one 😃

Like always a cliffhanger 😆 .. N I knw its weird ..but I love ur cliffhangers as they make ur update more interesting 😉

Sharon n Swayam's convo ...was so aptly penned down ...loved reading it ...

Swayam s excitement was truly adorable 😊

I'm commenting after 2-3 updates ...so sowiee ,..was tied up with studies 😔

And thank u so much for the PMs .

Happy Diwali 🤗

Love ,

Lavanya [n thnks fr complement on my name too ☺️]

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#275

Again ! Again 😡

U stopped at wrong place??

What should i do to you chitra??😡

I want to know this now...i cant even sit at one place ...😭

You know since that day i read this FF, this swayam and Sharon never left my mind. i was keep thinking about their fate...about those picture...what must have Sharon felt when she got the courier...i even want to kill that courier man 😆

Plzz update soon...i loved rey 😳

as they said before in the comments...i loved that line...

i told u, ur some lines are very catchy... 👏👏

Loved the whole update...

UPDATE SOON

I dont want swayam as a cheater...keep that in ur mind 😆

And plzz dont try to learn anything from my write ups and make urs bad 🤣

I do believe you 😉

Greeshma... [I dont like this name bcoz its so common here😆]

Edited by --Keechu-- - 9 years ago

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bhaumi_vrushan

@bhaumi_vrushan

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#276

Wow amazing finally swaron started talking with each other... Not more BT Lil bit at least talking... In dis chap I like swayam's excitement to shopping for his princess.. Just loved it... Again suspens who's amaira plz reveal the truth... I just like ur FF so much its lovely n awsm... Plz one req in next chap tag me in PM..plz love u keep writing...

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ROSE

@rose1998

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#277

Beautiful episode. You are an amazing writer. yeh toh mujhe kehne ki zaroorat bhi nahi hai. That's the beauty of this chapter.
Finally the truth is going to be revealed. Rey is in action.
Waiting for the next chapter.😃

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Aneesha

@aneesha93

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#278

Leaving the cliffhanger & the first part aside, I thoroughly enjoyed the update. The first part, I honestly don't enjoy people throwing stuffs here and there and hurting themselves. But yes, I loved the caring Swayam and that little conversation they had. I loved how Stephie teased Swaron. Man, there she was adorable than Swaron. Then, an excited Swayam shopping for his yet - to - be born daughter was sweet. Aww... He is one crazy, dreamy father. But the later conversation were Sharon said if she was going to be there or not. I sorta hated her for saying that to him.

& then comes Rey. All this while I thought Amaira was someone related to Rey. But guess I was wrong. Girl, you have a way of describing things & situations and I love it. Waiting for the detailed ReYam conversation. Hope the unanswered will be answered soon. Please, no cliffhanger next time. You end up giving a cliffhanger every time you don't intend to end it that way. So, maybe, you should think of ending it in a cliffhanger & it'll work the opposite. As usual, a lovely banner. Update soonish.

This is by far, the longest comment I have EVER given. I won't bore you next time with such long comments:-P.

PS: Happy Diwali to you too.

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Shreya

@Wandering_mind

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#279

This was a beautiful update!..I craved for a moment like that to happen between Swayam and Sharon!..Finally Sharon's living in a place much better than hell!..It feels so relieving to finally see Sharon a little less in pain!..The shopping part was awww!!..Swayam is gonna be an adorable father!.After this update I''m convinced you have still preserved the essence of Swayam's character totally which means that he isn't going to be a cheater in any way !..Thankyou so much for that!..Rey is surely going to play a major role in the mystery that's going to unfold I believe!..You left it on the edge again!. :(..but no problem..U considered my previous comment and gave us some moments I really wished to see between Swaron...Thankyou!!...Please update super soon!!!...

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#280

Reserved.

-edited.

I'm not going to shoot you for leaving the chapter at a cliffhanger for two reasons:

a) I do it a lot, myself.

b) People before me have already shot you. 😆

The start of the chapter was endearing. How Sharon sought comfort in Swayam, inspite of him being the one who left her in that state. The following paragraphs were perfect on the emotions,not too heavy, not too light.

You certainly know how to balance.

Yay, Reyaansh is in the story now. I can hope for a revelation soon, i think.

Cheers

Rhapsody,

Edited by Rhapsody. - 9 years ago