SwaRon SS : Is it love? Chapter 9 Updated. - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: mythreyii

Heya
A great start prologue seems interesting and looks afresh
U write really well
Amazing start eager 4 d chaps coming our way
Do continue

I'm glad you liked it :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SHA_85

Loved prologue
its seems interesting
SwaRon fighting starts from schools and now poor sharon (who use to think he can't be anything is now owning company) has came for job and he is boss
i love to read this
plz do pm me

You gave a lot of thought :)
Thanks :D
Will PM you :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

interesting concept... update soon... looking forward.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deeksha02

amazing concept ...
eagerly waiting to read 1st chapter ...
plz continue soon

I'm glad you liked it :D
We are continuing :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 1


'My god! I'm really scared for today's exam. I've revised thrice but if its not enough. Oh my god! If I get a B and NOT an A. I'm so screwed' muttered a girl of age 14 sitting in her car in the back seat being driven by her driver to her school.

'Guys look, its Topper! Hey topper!' A boy screamed out honking his cycle and his friends hooting. 'Moron's' the girl flared up with anger shouted at them and closed her window and requested the driver to race the car as she wasn't in the mood to spoil her day for some brats who didn't have manners.

Few hours later the girl came out of the examination hall with smiling faces talking to a friend of hers 'Sharon you look really happy? The paper was so horrible for me!' The friend spoke.

'Well it wasn't that bad, but there is always scope for improvement'

'Really? And your scope of improvement would be getting half more mark to make a 100. Right topper?' Sharon heard that irritating voice again. She looked back to find him standing behind her with his gang laughing.

'Such a jerk!' She thought. 'Topper, don't get angry! I'll never stop calling you that, even you know it' said the boy with a wink and a smile as though he has achieved 100 marks in his math paper by teasing her and irritating the poor soul.
'Well, yes I'm a topper. I'm at least sure I'll get some where in life, but you, uh, let's not even try thinking!' She retorted angrily. 'Well that's really nice to hear. I'm glad that you will be at the top of this world' there was a sense of genuineness in his tone. 'Swayam let's just leave before you're murdered' called out his friends laughing. He smiled at her and left. Sharon felt nice seeing that smile.
'Are you gaping at swayam?'. Her friend asked in a sense of shock. 'In your dreams' replied Sharon who actually was gaping and now fumbled after learning she was caught. Her friend thought not to push so just left it that way.
On the other hand swayam while walking away was smiling to himself remembering that cute face of Sharon when she's angry and irritated only because of him. He had that sense of pride when she got angry due to his antics. It was now a daily affair of them to have an argument. But when they thought to themselves about it in there alone time they always smiled.
They were just 14 years old, expecting them to understand some feelings was not appropriate. So they were always in the delusion that they were meant to be tom and jerry for life and nothing else.



Edited by --Ana-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
wow it such an awesome chapter

loved it but try to give long updates ...
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Awww.. Swaron as kids. It was such a cute update. Loved their arguments. Nicely written
Thanks for the pm


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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Nice Ana, very well written. Loved it.
Love,
Shirisha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Chotu sa upd
but there was lots of amazing thing in this
old me memories came back
like HEY TOPPER remained me HEY SHARON wala scene and somewhere same react he got from her and then the after exam convo (whenever he say something she go in dreamland) he got back but she gaping him and the last one after going to there own way think about other one and smile (bas different is here only he is teasing her not being lover boy )
Ana and astha Amazing upd bcz
you remind me all old memories
Edited by SHA_85 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Hey nice chapter.swaron is such tom jerry.loved it .thanks for pm. 😃

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