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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Hayyeee😳

this was beautiful...so sweet one...

swayam's way of narrating was tooo good...

and ani u really suck in giving cmts rights??😆

bdw thanks for the pm, for letting me know abt this os...

it was a nice experience...and end i loved that...sharon the most beautiful girl in the planet...

u should write more dear...

would love to read... :)

Keechu ;)

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Shradha

@ShradhaP13

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Wow

Its beautiful, awesome sorry i dont have much words to describe but

👏

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VReSh

@VReSH

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

This is Amazing... So Good.. Loved it... Have this Smile on my face after reading... is so Sweet n so Nicely written... At the second last para, i thought they eparated but at the last i was like 😃

Very Nice Ash👏

keep writing more 😊

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anjuvrushan

@anjuvrushan

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Hey,its soo beautiful os...swayams pov written very well...really loved it...this is ur first os nd u hav done it very well...keep writing dear...would love to read more frm u...

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sanchiswaron

@sanchiswaron

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

This one is so good :'(

Loved it

Would love to read more on this

Continue😆

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Suhana

@Summer_Rain

Sparkler

+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Hahaha so strangee dude..u nvr told u write pretty well .this is indeed beautiful piece of work ..keep writing :)

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Aneesha

@aneesha93

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Awww... such an adorable and sweet OS😛. Keep writing

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

omg

beautiful

super awesome

loved it

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

aaawww dis is so cute ❤️

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@--lavanya--

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

wow ..yaa ..
very nice..

beautifully written os ..

it's very less that os are on swayam's POV...

well done ash ..!

i'll love to read more from you..

do PM me your other works...
and if possible do write more on swaron...😃

thanx ani for pm..

All the best ..!!

Lavanya