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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Very well written. Short, yet to the point. I enjoyed reading this; Sharon's point of view.

Cheers.

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Aayushi

@A.Green

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Wow its too good but short!

I loved how u portrayed her jealous but yet accepting her mistake nice👏

keep writing!

thnks fr pm..

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Aneesha

@aneesha93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

This OS is beautiful. You penned it real well

Thanks for the pm. Keep writing

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anjuvrushan

@anjuvrushan

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Really osme...you hav nicely written sharons pov...

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..RiSha..

@..RiSha..

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

its very well written piece

many emotions many thoughts in it

but glad that u dint drag it

the last line said it all

*_*

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see my username..:P

@__nidhi__

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

awesome os..!!

loved it..!!!

it was short but brilliant..!!!

do write more..!!!

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NUPUR AGARWAL

@--NupurSwaron--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Loved it...Sharon's POV was short n beautifully penned down

Awesome work n wil love to read more stuff on swaron track

Do write more...!!!!

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@--lavanya--

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

hey di ,
omg...how could i miss this wonderful piece of writing...👏

you are too good...
the way you penned down her pov..
the use of words...the framing of emotions...

just perfect...!!..

i want to read more...and more..

thanks for the link...

Lavanya