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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

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Part 1- scroll down to 3rd post
Part-2

Last Part+Epilogue

Edited by ms.impulsive - 10 years ago

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Priyanka Datta

@taani.priya1997

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

First of all welcome to the forum.

Yup I know as a member u may be senior but not as a writer.

So welcome as a writer.

A new writer.

Coming to update...it was beautiful.

A really good start.

Description was flawless...and framing of words were beautiful.

Concept begining was wonderful.

As u asked me in whatsup...The answer is perfectly ok.

Nothing to change.

Priyanka khub bhalo hoichae...darun...khub sundar lekha hoiche.

Edited by taani.priya1997 - 10 years ago

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Jasmine_ash

@Jasmine_ash

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

Piya awesome start

Welcome dear

Beautifully written

Loved it

Emotional start

That damn guy betrayed our princess

But y

Hope to see more

Thanks for pm

Pls next part soon :)

_/\_

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: taani.priya1997
First of all welcome to the forum.
Yup I know as a member u may be senior but not as a writer.
So welcome as a writer.
A new writer.

Coming to update...it was beautiful.
A really good start.
Description was flawless...and framing of words were beautiful.
Concept begining was wonderful.
As u asked me in whatsup...The answer is perfectly ok.
Nothing to change.

Priyanka khub bhalo hoichae...darun...khub sundar lekha hoiche.

Awww thank thank thank you so much di..
It means a lot...
So I'm not changing it..

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Jasmine_ash
Piya awesome start
Welcome dear
Beautifully written
Loved it
Emotional start
That damn guy betrayed our princess
But y
Hope to see more
Thanks for pm

Pls next part soon :)
_/\_

Thank you dear..
Yupp will continue it soon..