TaaRey TS--Man-Hater Vs Hot Hunk updt on 27/7 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Hi ash superb new concept
Great dear
Totally loved new concept
Extreme pole wow
Awesome idea dear

But can u pls add SWAYAM too pls pls

Thanks for pm
Cs was fabulous

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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Jasmine_ash

Hi ash superb new concept

Great dear
Totally loved new concept
Extreme pole wow
Awesome idea dear

But can u pls add SWAYAM too pls pls

Thanks for pm
Cs was fabulous

_/\_

no yaar! even if i add also he wont be having much role!!
i will add few scenes of him if u want
but for CS purpose he doesnt play imp role!!
Edited by WillyWonka - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
hey are u a sidyali fan?
there is a sidyali version of this story!!! please check warrior high forum!!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
awsmmm cs
nice cncpt
thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Interesting concept and CS
Please continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
nice prologue nd cs dear..
waiting to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Part-1(A)

Scene-1

St.Xaviers boys were trying to get to the basket,as the crowd was waiting for the star player of the team.Girls were depressed watching their college boys missing every single basket competing with Welhams boys.Vicky called one of his team-mate and asked something which he denied saying he doesnt know.
Vicky- Yaar Rey! where the hell are you dude? If you are not gonna come in next 5 mins you are so gonna be dead,he said cursing his best friend cum captain of the team.He excused himself for a minute to call his Casanova friend who would be busy with girls.

Scene-2

A guy was sleeping peacefully with a girl on his side who slept all over him.His peaceful sleep was interupted by the loud beep of his phone.Cursing the caller,he opened his eyes to check his phone and answered the call without even looking at the caller-id.
Vicky-Reyyy!!! where are you? Dont tell me your sleeping.Here we are losing the game bro against welhams.How could you ditch us?
Rey instantly woke up with a jerk pushing the girl away who woke up because of the phone call.
Rey-Damn Bro! Im sorry i dint even realise.I will be there in 2 mins,he said looking at his watch and hung up the call.
Girl-Rey baby! where are you going?,she asked as he pulled up his clothes.
Rey-I gotta go! You better get lost from here by the time i come back from the game,he said standing up to leave.
Girl-What? You cant leave me like this.I thought you love me Rey and we are Gf-Bf right?
Rey-Wrong!Anyway we had fun last night right,he smirked at her while he left the room.
The girl cursed herself for being stupid knowing him and falling for him.

Scene-3

The girls in the BB court instantly got so much energy looking at Rey entering into the court.They started hooting and jumping when they saw their hot hunk dressed in red BB attire looking as hot and handsome as always.Vicky was relived when he saw as he knew they are gonna win this match now.Rey immediately gave a flying kiss to his girl-fans and starting playing his fav game in his style.Girls were cheering them as the score of Xaviers increased its pace.Finally Xaviers won against Welhams,girls came running to rey to hug him and all.Vicky was like"he would never change" when he saw rey giving a pride look asking him to see how girls drool on him.After a great effort,he could get away from the girls and went to congratulate his friends.Vicky and Rey stood there talking.
Vicky-If you wouldnt have come at that last moment na,we would have lost the match,he said hugging his bestie because of whom they won.
Rey-Why fear when im here? huh,He said smiling on his filmy line.
Rey-Dont worry yaar! we are gonna win every damn game,because rey never loses a game,he said pulling up his invisible collar.
Vicky-Over-confidence dude! It isnt good for us.
Rey-Chillax bro! we are never gonna lose while im here and by chance if i ever lose a game,i will become a one-woman man,he said challenging him.
Vicky-You and one-woman man! Must be kidding because this will never happen.
Rey-No! Im challenging you and see i always stand by it when i challenge something because Reyaansh Singhania never breaks them,he said kicking the BB which was in his hand.

Scene-4

A hand caught the ball twirling it in on one finger and finally caught the ball.She dressed in the same attire as boys sport shorts instead of short skirts,hair pinned in a short bun stood their tapping ball on court.She was wearing men's sport shoes as well complimenting her tom-boy image.


Rey approached to take the ball when the girl who caught ball started playing with it.She seemed least bothered to notice him who stood there for the ball.Vicky looking at the duo was scared to see the girl.
Rey-Hey ball please, he said causing her to stop and look at him.
She looked at him with a careless attitude.
Girl-When you dont know the difference between basketball and football better dont play.You dont kick these balls and how would you know about basketball when you kicking it and when u dont know how to handle this ball,she answered mocking at him.
Rey-Hello!Excuse me,you are telling this to me.Im the captain of this Boys BB team.Nobody knows about BB better than me,he argued irked with her.
Girl-Yeah! thats why you are kicking it na,she said least bothered
Vicky started coming to them sensing with whom Rey is messing with.
Vicky pulled rey to calm him down as he said,"Hi Taani! Long time no see" he said stammering as taani rolled her eyes.
Vicky-Dont mess with her,she is Taani,girl's BB team captain,he said whispering in Rey's ear.
Rey-So what? is she a hitler? No na,he said giving a chill bro kind of look.
Vicky-Thats the problem na, she isnt hitler but more dangerous than that,he said
Taani-Now if you are done just get out from here,she said pointing at Rey who looked amused at her behaviour because no one ever talked to him like this.Especially girls with which he was quite impressed.He stared at her for a minute but came out from the trance when she asked him to get out.
Rey-What do you mean by get out? This court is ours,why should we go? he said though vicky was stopping him.
Taani-Yes! this court was yours 5 mins back but now this is ours as this is girls BB time now.Your Boys time is over now go!
Vicky-Yes taani! you are right infact you are always right! We are going,he pulled rey along with him out of the court.
Taani joined other girls who came there to play,talking and laughing with them
Rey stared back at her,"what is she? how dare she answer back?.
He too joined his friends as soon as he came out of the court.

Scene 5

Vicky and other boys from the team retired to locker room discussing about the game.Rey suddenly barged in his face covered with lip-stick marks.Boys were shocked to see him like this and started laughing at him.Rey started wiping them with a towel.
Vicky-Dude! These many kisses? how do you manage to get girls so easily bro? we have been trying so much but not even a girl looks at us,he said
Rey-Yaar! its so easy vicky! it takes maximum 5 days to get a girl.I can get any girl in 5 days and you know its been 149 girls till date, he said proudly.
Boys-Dude! this is too much yaar any girl within 5 days? not possible,you are making it up,they said disagreeing with him.
Rey-No guys! im serious, Girls are so easy to deal with, you talk with her sweetly,praise her and get her some gifts that's all she is yours.
Vicky-You are my love-guru dude! Give us also some tips to get girls,he said as all the boys bowed down to Rey.
Rey laughed as they did that and acted as if blessing them.

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Edited by WillyWonka - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
res/unres
awesome one..!!!
loved taarey encounter..!!!
update soon..
Edited by __nidhi__ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
just awesome yaar
each scene was superb
just loved it
egarly waiting for nxt part B
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Awsm prt
Thanks for PM

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