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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ecstasy--

Amazing date.. 👏

Swayam taking out his frustration through dance.
Swayam is confused about his feelings..
He wants to hate her, but deep down he feels for her as strongly as Sharon does.
I liked simi's pov.
So swaron were married..
There is some big Misunderstanding between them.
Update soon..
Thanks for PM.

-Shivani


Thanks vani...
i love ur comments 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ujwalv

hey loved this update

it was awesome n emotional too
update soon..nd reveal wat exactly happend


Thanku so much
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nature2

He look who hare nice update


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OMG u here😆
Thanks yaar 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Frozen_Flames

First of all very very sorry fr being late :(
nw coming to the update, it ws amazing...
Loved it !!
I wonder why swayam left sharon !!
Update soon nd thanks fr the pm


Its ohk dear
no problem , thanku
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: isikashekhawat2

hey keechu 🤗i know i am too late...i read both part together...nd its awesome...its emotional too 😊
but i like first part more than second ...nsecond part is also good ...but first part is ending is amazing ...when u showing a strong sharon...i like this part very much...bcoz i know its hurt her ...but still she is being strong ...ye part pad ke mi feeling strong too...if something hurt u ..doesnt means life stop ..u need to stand up for self ..the positive additute u showing ...its needed..nd here is swayam ..there is something confusion beetween mind nd heart ..may be soon he clear all confusion ..but this time everything going very hard ...bcoz now sharon is not sharon ..she is change ...nd i am wating for what happend between themm.
Update soon ..
Love u
Take care 😳


Aww thanku so much my love 😳
U r my jaan... and i love u for this 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SHA_85

Read in one go

Dii prologue was confusing n wow wala

chp 1 was more confusing (for me) bt after reading chp2 samj me aaya kya ho raha h

swayam's pov was good n Sharon's pov was emotional

SwaRon r married
bt y swayam is dng dis wid sharon n khud b hurt ho raha h

let c kya swayam karta h

dii whnever u upd plz pm me i luved dis


Thanku dear
and yaa will pm u
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Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER THREE


"Rey"

Swayam exclaimed at Rey who was sitting in the side chair of Swayam's cabin. He knew why Rey was here at this time, but he pretended, as if he did not know what has forced rey to come there.

"Yeah, I am here to meet you."

Rey had turned towards the door with a smile to welcome his best friend when he heard his buddy.

They both shared a friendly hug and after that swayam sat in his chair.

The cabin had a huge glass window behind Swayam's chair, and the bright white light from outside was giving a divine look to the cabin. Any disturbed mind could easily clam down here in this peaceful atmosphere. Not only was the cabin but the whole Shekawat office was a wonderful creation. It had its own serenity. One of the most beautiful buildings in Mumbai.

"Shall I order a coffee for you?" swayam tried to behave normally.

"Don't be so formal with me,"

"I am not being formal. Why should I?"

Swayam changed his position from his chair to the couch, which was at the side of that cubicle.

Rey exactly knew what swayam was trying to do. Therefore, he too followed him and did the same what swayam did a minute ago.

"I am going to meet Sharon and let me tell you one thing, that you are accompanying me, I don't want to hear anything from you." Rey told with an angry yet clam voice looking straight into swayam eyes, which had a fear, a fear of losing in front of his friend.

"Never, I will not come with you to bring her back".

"When did I say that, we are going to bring her back?" Rey smirked.

That was a slap to swayam. He never thought he would speak that aloud. He looked up at Rey's face that had a winning smile.

From inside swayam too wanted to bring her back but his bl**dy big EGO never helped him to give a second thought to it.

"No, you did not. But, I mean... I mean." Swayam's voice did not support him to lie.

"You mean?" Rey looked directly into Swayam's eyes.

While he down casted his eyes because he knows he can never lie to his friend..

"I do not want to talk about her".

"That will not help you this time" Rey was at peak of his anger.

He made swayam stand up from the couch, made him to look at his eyes, and asked.

"Why did you do that with sharon?"

"What did she do to you that you played such a dirty game with her?"

"How could you just use and throw a girl away, a girl who loved you?"

Swayam did not reply to Rey's any questions.

Rey took a deep sigh and continued.

"Sometimes I used to feel jealous of both of you. The way you both were in love made me admire you and your love."

"Rey I don't want to talk about it."

Swayam interrupted Rey, he had started to feel guilty again, so he just moved forward by removing Rey's hands which were on his shoulders.

"You can't go like this, I need an answer". Rey shouted.

"Fine! What do you want to know?" Swayam turned back towards Rey and shouted as Rey did.

"I want to know the reason behind whatever you did. And you have to come with me to ask for forgiveness". Rey shouted with the same intensity.

The two best friends were fighting with each other for a girl who just lost everything because of love, the most beautiful yet desirous feeling.

Swayam laughed sarcastically and replied,

"Forgiveness and me, never. I will not do any such things because I was never at fault and the reason why I did that,

Swayam stopped abruptly and masked a serious face and continued,

"It was a play, a well planned revenge play which swayam played successfully, a long revenge of six months." Swayam's serious look replaced with a smile, a hundred watt smile

However, Rey frowned, he was shocked beyond limit.

"Revenge? For what?" he asked when he recollected from his shock which was given by his one and only friend.

"Hmm that I cannot disclose that to you, because it was a private thing of a couple" swayam said that with a naughty smile and winked at Rey, who was standing as the earth slipped from beneath his foot.

"Rey" swayam touched Rey's hand when he felt Rey was shocked to even react.

He immediately held Swayam's shoulders, shook him vigorously, and tried to put some sense to his senseless brain.

"What have you done? You used her, and took revenge from her that too in this way. This is disgusting swayam. How could you stoop so low?"

"Rey now you don't start, I am already fed up with it all." Swayam replied with anger.

Suddenly something strikes Rey.

"But you did love her, right? You both were in love?"

"Hmm... correction! She was in love, not me." Swayam corrected Rey.

"What do u mean?"

"Rey please don't act like a kid. She loved me but I never did. You forgot I am a great actor; it is you only, who taught me to act, Remember?" swayam again winked at Rey. At that moment, he was happy at his win.

Rey was in utter shock. He never expected swayam would come out like this.

"You were acting in front of us?" Rey asked in the flow. He had been in shock since when swayam told everything.

"Yeah! Now you get it." Swayam said with a wide smile.

Rey's face and eyes became red due to anger ... he felt disgusted at himself to have a friend like swayam.

Then he barked at swayam at the top of his voice while pointing his finger at swayam.

"You will pay a great value for it. You will feel guilty soon and at that time do not ever come to me... I will not help you. I will not able to even if I want."

"Hahahaha! That will not happen." Swayam laughed with confidence.

Nevertheless, inside him something was burning. Moreover, each of rey's words did pour fuel to it. It was burning like hell, but this swayam was blind with his anger and his revenge. He took revenge from that girl who has loved him deeply with her every single breath.

"You will repent it soon swayam, I am damn sure about it, and Let me inform you one more thing until the day you realize your mistake I will not think about to bring Tanni in my life, and it is a decision taken by both of us. We will only get married after you realize your mistake and ask for Sharon's forgiveness." Rey informed him, his decision, which he had taken with Tanni last night.

"What the hell Rey? You cannot do this" swayam reacted immediately.

"Why? If you can use a girl then why can't me?" Rey was hell angry but asked that with an unbelievable calmness.

"Because you both are in love and I will not allow you to do this." swayam reverted.

"Even sharon loved you."

"But she was an orphan." Swayam tried to reason him.

"Wow Mr. Shekawat. You used her just because she does not have anyone with her! Ridiculous!

Now you will see me standing with Sharon whenever you see her again. You will have to pass through me to get her. Get that straight in your useless brain."

After that, he went out of the room without giving a chance to swayam to react.

swayam didn't know what to do, he just fell back in his couch and hide his face in his palms not because of the guilt that he had hurt sharon because of the guilt to spoil his own blood, his own sister's life.

******************************************************

"Dad I am going to Delhi at evening to meet Mr. Sharma"

Rishi looked up from his newspaper when he heard swayam.

"Ohh yaa I remember. BTW Take Sharon with you"

"What?"

"I said take Sharon with you"

"For what?"

"What a question is that swayam? She is your wife so she has the right. It has been two months since you both are married and still you did not take her with you anywhere."

"But dad I am going for business"

"I know, but what will I do if my son has only time for business and its ok I will inform Sharma and that's it you have to take her with you. Just like a small honey moon."

Dad said with a smile at his plan to make swayam take her with him. However, swayam did not know even this meeting with Sharma was a plan of his dad.

Swayam never thought his dad would ask him to take her . That too for two weeks. He even cannot stand her mere presence in his life and now his dad is asking to take her with him for a honeymoon.

However, someone was happy just because of getting an opportunity to go out of Mumbai that too with her love.

Sharon's head shoot up when she heard about honeymoon. She was in the kitchen but was secretly listening to dad and Swayam's talk. She blushed at the thought of going with swayam for honeymoon.

Nevertheless, Swayam's uninterested voice squeezed her heart. They both were married since two months but until today, he had never even looked at her with a smile, he always made a good impression in front of his family but in reality, he never cared about her mere presence. He had showed two faces one for Sharon and other for family.

"To where?"

"Huh" Sharon came out of her reveries.

"I asked where are you going madam," The man with a wide spectacle asked with a disgusting look.

"To Delhi" Sharon replied to the man who was sitting in the ticket counter of Mumbai railway station.

"Hmm ok." He then adjusted his spectacle on his nose.

After sometime, he handed over her ticket and looked at her from head to toe. She felt naked at his stair.

"Hey, sir we all are here, let that girl go" Someone shouted from the line that was presented in front of the ticket counter.

Sharon moved from there and sat in the train with lots of dreams and hopes. However, she knew one thing that she was going to learn how to live without swayam.

"Hi" Sharon looked up and saw a kid with a dark green eyes looking at her innocently.

"Hello I am Pia" she forwarded her hand towards Sharon anticipating a shake hand.

"I am sharon" her voice was inaudible.

Sharon shook her hand with the kid who was already on Sharon's lap.

That was a new beginning . A new relation may be as friends or may be more than that.


Love keechu :)


Edited by Keechu_SwaRon - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Me first to comment..!!! yayyy...!!...

@ani--👎🏼 hehe...tui second...jole chai hoy jas na abar...keechu di'r scrap pechilam tai 1st eschi...hehe..😛😛😛
.{ this is fr ani ignore this di }

now coming to the third chappy..

swayam wanted to avoid the convo on sharon..
but rey being the bst buddy knws vry well wat's good fr him..
i donno how can 'ego' win over 'heart'...
i'm sure it'll never...n also hope to see that soon..

I liked these lines
" love, the most beautiful yet desirous feeling."
Why is swayam so bad here..?
it doesn't suit him right...
i hated his character more when he said that sharon was an orphan and so she's different from taani...he's too bad..😭😭
i really liked Rey's character till now...he's doing all he can do to bring his frnd on the right path..
The flashback shows that swayam had always been spacing himself frm sharon..
i really wanna knw why...
"pia" seems to bring some happiness in the story..😃

as of knw swayam's character is totally confusing...
he is guilty...he has a striking conscience...
but inspite of that he's behaving the other way..

i hope i'll get my answers soon...
thanks for pm..

as always beautifully written piece...
pls pls update soon..!!..


Lavanya

Edited by lavanyalaa0 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


ADD THIS ACCOUNT ..Descendant.. TO YOUR BUDDY LIST IF YOU WANT PMS😊
Edited by --Keechu-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lavanya!!!!!!!!
tui bata amar 1st place nie niechis!!!! pocha meye!!!!vablam ami prothom res korbo...aaa😡😡

(sorry keechu di dat was for lavanya in bengali... she took my 1st place😡😡)

okay now coming to the update , as usual the update was super awesum...

love the way the story is shaping up..i so want to know everything right now but i know that's not possible...😭😭

rey's character along with taani is very good.. i love them in this story and totally support them...

and this swayam i tell you.. he should be thrown out of this planet or hung till death or beaten up black n blue...😡

you know i am hell angry on that stupid fool...

but then as you assured me i really hope sharon takes his class later...

she should not forgive him easily.. that would slap the smirk away from his face...

wonderful writing as usual... loved it di...

update super soon...

super duper soon!!!!!!!!

i am biting my nails wondering what next!!!!

love , ani


Edited by flyinghigh_ani - 10 years ago

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