SwaRon OS: It Hurts.

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Trupti Tamore

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Nyc Os

luved swayam's POV a lot :-)

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Ayushi.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

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Nishi, this was yet another a brilliant piece of writeup. The way you kept the initial essence of this scene intact was beautiful.

Yes, while reading the oneshoot, i could clearly see images & motion in my head. Swayam in blue checkes shirt (not forgetting that scar on his cheebone) adoring sharon while she danced around in black, beautifully throughout the canteen. The hurt, the pain, the longing in his heart. "I love you so much that it hurts" Oh, Swayam. Sharon on the other hand, doing just similar thing for Swayam had swelled up all our hearts. They are beautiful :')

You wrote those emotions with such ease man! Depicting both of their POVs with such subtle use of words and emotions. This is phenomenal.

I have a complaint- after reading your works, I am always at loss of all damn words & adjectives. You deserve a hug for this oneshoot.

Keep writing.

-Ayushi

Edited by -.wanderlust.- - 10 years ago

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srinidhi94

@srinidhi94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

this is another one of those beautiful oss of yours nishi...

very well written

you deserve 👏👏👏

welldone

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

wow nishi it was awesome
beautifully written

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 10 years ago

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This is gonna take some time, pardon me.

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

^It's alright, take your time. :)

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Once again a brilliant write up... 👏

OMG it was amazingly beautiful...

All time while reading ur emotional write ups i feel a knot in my heart.,..

its really touching and impact full

Loved it...

I loves the style of ur writing and u do great job in emotional piece of write ups👍🏼

Do write more...

~Keechu :)

Edited by --Keechu-- - 10 years ago

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

you just rock girl...

good piece of writing...

ah..i miss those days...

you juz take us to the swaron land...

thnx for the pm..

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Shrisha

@...Shrisha...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

another masterpiece

loved the os

you are a brilliant writer dear

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Sana

@SaNa_sTaR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Another superb piece of work by you :)
Beautifully penned down
Sharon and Swayam's feelings were described really well :)
I still remember this scene clearly
Keep writing!