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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: rinku95

Superb concept
Both parts are amazing
Continue soon

thanks😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Thank you for all your feedbacks and i am not expecting that you all will love it so much thank u... very much leaving all this i am here with chapter 3 so read it and give likes and comments and those who want pm add me in buddy list😆😛

CHAPTER 3
All the college perform one by one finally its turn of sparklers (ps d3 gang is in audience)
first all the boys come and perform on the song desi boys audience enjoy their performance then all the girls come and boys leave and perform on the song radha firstly their back is facing the audience then they all started turning one by one at last kriya turn and stared dancing
Gang was shock seeing her rey and swayum were feeling very emotional swayum was very happy seeing her bestie in front of his eyes after 3 years he was feeling like go and hug her and ask her of her sudden departure without even thinking about him and then he thought she don't consider him as her bestie that's why she only leave a letter on the other hand rey was felling happy, angry, sad question are running around his mind swayum look at rey and keep his hand on her shoulder rey realize that he is thinking about a girl who ditches him Kriya while dancing saw the gang and their expression he saw rey and swayum angry faces
Their dance get over they went to their room karan saw kriya to know her satae but he is shock kriya instead of being sad and tensed was happily talking to girls about performance and kriya notice karan confused face and go to him
Kriya: karan i am very much fine you don't need to worry and hug him
karan: pakka na
kriya: ha baba
Aarohi: tum dono na kahi bhi kabhi bhi chalu ho jate ho romance karne ki bhi koi jagah aur time hota hai yaar
and they both leave each other and karan smiles a bit
kriya: aarohi toh zyada nahi bol rahi aaj kal
arjun: acha ye sab chodo aur chalo result time hone wala hai
and they all leave when they are going towards the hall all are ahead and kriya waslittle behind she was moving through the corridor when she heard a voice
Boy: kyu aayi ho wapas
kriya turns and seeing him he felt a little weak but control herself because she knew that these people doesn't desrve her teas and answer "tumse matlab"
Boy: matlab hai jab tom hume chod ke bina humari parwah kiye bina ye soche ki tumhare bina hum sab kaise rehge chali gayi tu ab kyu wapas aayi ho jab hum sab apne life mai tumhare bina move on kar chuke hai to kyu aayiho
kriya : listen swayum (yes the boy is swayum)mujhe koi interest nahi hai tumhari faltu baate sun ne ka so please! mai sirf yaha dance competition mai apne college ka]o represent kar rahi ho so i don't care ki tum log yaha ho ya nahi tum sabki life maikya chal raha hai kya nahi ya phir tum sab mere baare mai kya sochte ho mai yaha sirf apne college apne new friends not new kyuki tum log mere friends kabhi the hi nahi so sirf apne friends aur most importantly apne dance ke liye aayi ho so please don't talk to me and she goes from there with full attitude
and here swayum is so shocked to hear this all and especially the last lines he was completely broken butthought that he should not be caring about this because she left them she is noting to him and leaves form there
Precap: there is someone listening this all so who is that person

phewww finally over for next please do comment and likes
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
swayam n kriya k bich mein fight mujhe bilkul pasand nhi😭
but it was needed i know that
awesome update😃
the persom listening to kriyam convo... hmmm kon ho skta hai... rey😕
jo bhi ho i m excited to know that😃
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Superb
Krina gave right answer to swayam
Please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: alisha_arsha

swayam n kriya k bich mein fight mujhe bilkul pasand nhi😭

but it was needed i know that
awesome update😃
the persom listening to kriyam convo... hmmm kon ho skta hai... rey😕
jo bhi ho i m excited to know that😃
update soon

sochte raho and thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Awesome Update...

I liked the way kriya answered swayam...

And about the person listening kriyam's talk... i think its rey...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
concept asnd all three chapters finish reading together... kriyaansh story...
and it was simple given to answer the question that where asked and does not want
to give any troubles either in gang life... do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Nyc start
Update fast
Pm me whn u update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
looks interesting...continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
CHAPTER-6
RECAP-THERE is someone listening the kriyam convo who is he

The person who is listening all this was hurt that the girl he fell in love don't care about him (yes the guy is rey) but knew that all this she has said that night but was confused that she has said that she like swayum so why is she talking to him like that and thoughts that it was also a lie she can never love someone and leave from there with anger.
when kriya reach audi
Karan: kaha rahe gayi thi
Kriya: washroom gayi thi
karan: okay!
soon there is the time of results of the competition
host:the winnig team is...none other then st.xaviers college team
sparklers are very happy about their victory they all go to stage hold the trophy and all clapping expect the d3 gang then the vp sir arrives to say some word
vp: me and all head of st.louis are very glad and impressed by the performance of st xaviers and we have decided that that this team will remain here and will do workshops with our dance teams all started clapping and both the teams are hell shocked to hear that sparklers are not gonna do that they hate d3 gang the vp continues and we have talked about this matter to their college heads and they also agree to it there will be 5month workshop and then both the team will perform together for a big international dance competition so are you all excited all the crowd shout "yes" but both teams are quite then the vp congratulate the sparklers and left.
sparklers also left for the house that st louis has provided them
here the d3 team go to meet vp sir and tell him that they will not do workshop with sparklers
so what will vp sir say ????


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