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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
nice intro
loved kriya gang...
and her group is also good
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
SO HERE IS CHAPTER 1
KRIYA COLLEGE PRINCIPAL HAS INFORM SPARKLERS THAT THEY HAVE TO GO TO ST.LOUIS FOR DANCE COMPETITION THE SPARKLERS THOUGHT THAT KRIYA WILL ARGUE WITH PRINCIPAL FOR NOT LET THEM GO TO ST. LOUIS BUT AGAINST THEIR EXPECTATION SHE SIMPLY SAY YES AFTER THEY LEAVE THE CABIN THE SPARKLERS FIRE THEIR QUESTION ON KRIYA AND SHE SIMPLY ANSWER "GUYS I AM NOT GONNA LET THEM AFFECT ME" SPARKLERS ARE VERY HAPPY WITH KRIYA'S ANSWER BECAUSE THEY ALL WANT KRIYA TO MOVE ON. THE NEXT MORNING THEY HAD TO LEAVE FOR MUMBAI

(SCENE SHIFT TO ST. LOUIS)
VP HAS CALLED THE GANG IN THE CABIN FOR ALOTING THEIR DUTY AND TO TELL THE NAMES OF COLLEGE WHICH ARE COMING WHOLE GANG IS THEIR INCLUDIN TAANI(REY IS GS AND TAANI IS AGS) VP ALOTED THEIR WORK TO THEM AND ALL ARE VERY HAPPY BECAUSE THIS IS HER 1ST PROGRAM
TAANI: REY TODAY I AM VERY HAPPY FIRSTLY YOU ARE WITH ME AND MERA PEHLA PROGRAM HAI WO BHI AAPKE SAAT I AM VERY HAPPY
REY:THAT'S SO SWEET OF YOU AND YA I AM ALSO VERY HAPPY BECAUSE OF DANCE COMPETITION THIS IS MY SECOND PROGRAME AS GS IN MIND HE WAS THINKING WITHOUT HER AND WITH MIXED EMOTION SAD ANGRY SUDDENLY HE THOUGHT WHY IS HE THINKING ABOUT HER
TANNI LETS GO WE HAVE TO DO LOT OF WORK
TAANI: OK

THATS IT FOR TODAY DO COMMENT😆😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
yeh chappy tha ya precap😕
itna chota
next time i want a long long update woh bhi jaldi

coming to this update i like it
bas itna hi comment milega
chote update k liye chota comment😛

update soon


Edited by alisha_arsha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
superb
loved kriya and her gang
her attitude😉 loved it
wow now they will meet
thete that nani...
aghrrhhh hate her😡
but next time give bada vala update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
sorry for small one

CHAPTER 2

Sparklers are preparing to go to mumbai and kriya is thinking something karan ask her:kriya no response kriya now a bit loud
kriya:ha bolo karan
karan: are you fine
kriya:ya i am fine kyu tumhe aisa laga
karan: nahi nas tum kayi lost lag rahi thi isliye
kriya: karan i know you are care for me a lot and you are thinking that i am worry about going to st.louis but i am fine
karan:ya (saying in a low tune)
kriya hug him and say "karan don't worry i am fine par ha agar tum yeh sab sochoge tu mai pareshan ho jaungi
karan leave her and say "arey tum pareshan mat hona mai dekhu ab khush rahoga aur yeh sab nahi sochoga and smiles
kriya: ok andkeep this smile forever

SPARKLERS: awww... so sweet
Kriya : chalo chalo kaam karo subah 9 baje nikalna hai

NEXT MORNING

Aarohi: lets go guys
(i am not writting their journey and all)
They reach st.louis college they are standing outside and inside preparation is going on
Sparklers enter the college kriya by entering college get very emotional she remember the past moments of the college her entry in college the way dazzlers used to rag her how rey help her weaklings first dance rose dayevery moment of her with rey and swayum then the last day with the gang and rey then the worst night of her life tears started make their way out of her eyes karan notice this while other were busy seeing the college karan immediately hug her and say "kriya u have to be strong you are my strong girl na"
kriya rub her tears and say " i know kara this is the last time i have cry for them now i will not cry
they all go to their room to change for their performance
Rey and gang was in another room
rey: today we have to maintain our level because of the last time dance fest expectation are very high so we have to do this also great
GANG: ya we will

so guys sorry for spelling mistakes and give your messages means a lot to me😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
arre wah itni jaldi update😃
thanku 😃
chappy is too gud
loved kriya n karan bond


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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: alisha_arsha

arre wah itni jaldi update😃

thanku😃
chappy is too gud
loved kriya n karan bond


u all are sad na because of a small one so jaldi update ab next mai late dalungi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Superb 👏👏
first one was too short..😭
loved the second one...
kriya with her gang and her attitude loved it...😊


Edited by shivi_17 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Superb concept
Both parts are amazing
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
awesome 😉
but small one
loved kriya nd karan bond
so they r going to meet

yaar i wanna see kriya a strong girl

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