||MONTE CARLO||- A D3 FF , chap - 3 on pg. 19 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Hey
dis is great
Looking forward to read further
Continue soon
N yus pm me plz
n 3rd couple according to me should be viha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Baatcutter-

Hey

dis is great
Looking forward to read further
Continue soon
N yus pm me plz
n 3rd couple according to me should be viha


thank u...
No problem.. will pm u
ok
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Hey..nice start...eager to read the rest...pls pm me tooo...i like viha than sandir..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrushanlove

Hey..nice start...eager to read the rest...pls pm me tooo...i like viha than sandir..


hey thankx a lot dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
prologue looks interesting
u should continue thisss :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramya.reddy

prologue looks interesting
u should continue thisss :)


Thank u.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hola ppl, here is the Character sketch, it's a brief description about characters as I don't want to disclose everything now.

Hope u like it!!!

CHARACTER SKETCH

Kriya Ghai :- Sweet , simple , cheerful and kind a tomboy.Eveready to take up challenges.Dance is her passion.Lives with her nanu.Swayam & Vicky are her life.If u say a word against them, u'll definitely get a black eye.

Swayam Shekahwat :- He is a total charmer bt the most mature in his group. Always ready for partying with his best friends. Loves dancing.Always tries to protect kriya and Vicky from troubles.Best friends with Kriya & Vicky since childhood.

Vikramjeet Singh(Vicky) :-Everyone calls her Vicky. Naughtiest in his group , always try to light up everyone's mood.


Sharon Rai Prakash:- Kind, sweet and bubbly but this side of hers is only reserved for her best friends- Rey & Neha. For the whole world, she is arrogant, mean and Dancing diva.She has everything ,lavish lifestyle, branded clothes.But that isn't she wanted.

Reyaansh Singhania :- Fondly called Rey. Handsome hunk , but sumtimes act like a little kid. Can do anything for Sharon & neha.

Neha Kapoor :- Filmy is the world that can define her completely.innocent, cute & simple.Love her bestfriend Sharon & Rey more than anything.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here comes the first chapter.

Hope u like it!!

MONTE CARLO

CHAPTER -1

An old man in his late 60's was peacefully sleeping on his bed , suddenly he heard some noises , outside the room."Who it can be??No one in the house wakes up before me"He exclaimed. He decided to find the source of these noises , but as soon as he stepped out of the room, he started laughing seeing the view in front of him.There stood his only granddaughter and her two bestfriends juggling or better to say wrestling with the dishes ."what are u doing , dear??"asked the old man controlling her laugh. "ohho nanu, We were trying to make breakfast for u"said the young girl cheerfully." What!! Am I DREAMING. You three making breakfast for me Impossible .Tell me what u want??"mocked old man."I am not that mean , nanu, Kya hum aapke liye kuch bhi nhi kar sakte" said the girl innocently."Kriya, comeon out with the truth" commanded nanu. suddenly one on the guy, who was helping kriya , fell into nanu's feet and said"nanu, kriya had applied to St.Louis, and wants to join that college"."Firstly get up ,Vicky and secondly ,whose stopping her to join the college"said nanu."nanu, this college is in PARIS"said the other boy with his zulfein falling on her forehead."What ???swayam, No what's wrong in India, "shouted nanu."Nanu please, for kriya's happiness, she wants to go there ,dance is her passion u know na" requested swayam.Now nanu can't say a word, he can do anything for kriya."Ok fine, but u all will call me once in a day"said nanu half heartedly.

"Whooohooo, thank u nanu, Love u" said kriya hugging nanu."By the way nanu, before going to Paris , we all r going to MONTE CARLO on a tour" said swayam."You didn't told me earlier "said nanu tensed at the mention of Monte Carlo." we r going in a week"s aid kriya dragging Vicky & swayam to her room.

In kriya's room

"so all set for our trip "Said sw excitedly."Yeh, spacious bars, beautiful landscape and what not .We r coming Monte Carlo"said Vicky excitedly.

Here Kriya was busy finding something in her cupboard, suddenly a photograph fell.Swayam picked up the photograph , it was pic of a lady holding to babies and a man standing behind her, the pic was blur and torn frm sides preventing the man's face to be shown and at the end of the pic "MONTE CARLO was printed in bold letters."You still have this pic" asked a concerned swayam." Yup , I have it and bracelet too" whispered kriya."So u r going Monte Carlo to find ur dad" asked swayam angrily, he was tired of all this." No No, u r getting it all wrong , I have bracelet as the memory of my mother , I know I was crazy about finding him earlier, but now I don't want to find him, if he cared for me ever then he would have found me earlier but no he never tried, so I why should I try to find him"said kriya , tears threatening to fall from her eyes."U sure"asked Vicky genuinely concerned." Yup I m sure and moreover , I don't want to leave nanu, he was the one who adopted me at the age of 3 when I barely remembered my name ,He gave me his name ,provided me a lavish lifestyle, showered all his love on me, and because of him I met u guys, so u 3 are my only family" Said kriya remembering all her happy moments with them.swayam gulfed her in a comforting hug." I m also here"said Vicky pretending to be hurt."tu bhi aaja nautanki"said swayam. Nanu, secretely was listening all their talks and smiled seeing them.

My torture is over, guys.Pls , do read it and let me know how's it.

Love

Anshika

Edited by Frozen_Flames - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res..

Unres..

Awesome update...😊

But too short😭

loved kriya's bonding wid swayam and vicky...😆

Nanu is too loving and cute...😊


Edited by shivi_17 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
nice update
but
it's too small pout
so small comment
luv d kriyam bonding
wauh... st louis mein entry...
vicky as nautanki baaz
naanu rockzzz...
wauh... she gonna find him cool...
when rey gonna enter

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