SwaRon OS: Shards of Glass.

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srinidhi94

@srinidhi94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

wow...this is wonderful...

I was able to visualise their pain in the words you have used...

and the last line...

take a bow...

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Trupti Tamore

@VruShan_FanGirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

both r hurt😔

awsum os luved it😊

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Ayushi.

@-.wanderlust.-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Painful- that's the only word I could think of right now. This had been the state of SwaRon for so long. Too close yet so far. 'You always end up hurting the ones you love the most' although sad but true.

Beautifully penned one this is. The turmoil, the agony and the pain Swayam and Sharon are facing is heartbreaking.

All the memories post Manbasiyo seq came running in. How badly broken Swayam was. They loved each other to bits yet things did not fell into place. When holding on & letting go both become tough- that's the situation. They couldn't judge whether they should listen to their or their heads.

"However hard it may be, sometimes holding on is the only option left."

Perfect end with these.

Keep writing.

- Ayushi

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sanchiswaron

@sanchiswaron

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

I love your writing ^_^

That moment will always be special and this one made it even more intense

Holding back... Deep :') need to read chitra di's post :o

Thanks Nishi 😃

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

loved it..superb..beautifully written..

nd ya loved last line..👍🏼

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Rachel

@.Vrushanholic.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

This is an absolute piece of brilliance :O
I was stuck on each word. Gosh you make emotions feel so real by just using words and I think that is the best quality of yours as a writer.
The pain was so beautifully written down.
Brilliant work.