Swayam OneShot- Life...goes on! *Done wth PMs* - Page 3

beautiful os❤️

This was a different take and you guys managed to pull it off real well👏. It was really interesting. Do write more. Thanks for the pm.

Wow!! Wow!! Wow!!
it's Beautiful.. one sided love, something different.
the writing style was really good.. from first to last, the emotions the love the purity maintain really well. . .
I really loved the last bit when its reveled that, he z talking about Sharon to his fiance he tell everything to her... the Best thing ''He n't want to gain her but he z happy just seeing her happy'' ...
Loved this os to the core.. it might not be connect to SwaRon but mannn it had some different aura, the aura which i really loved :D
great job by both of you for this amazing piece of writing & Ritzi/Tillu it was ur first time than ur really great in ur first attempt... Good job, keep writing...
ps - the banner, goshhh this guy that to in white... lovely :D

I liked it..beautifully written..

Bt swaron nt together😭😔

Beautiful OS!! loved it .. ❤️
Great work..👏👏

swayam one shot

oh sakshi,this story is so so so so beautiful,so heart touching,so emotional.