FF: To Be or Not to Be. [Chap4. Pg 24]

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@riachawlalko

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

gr8 start
the prologue was very well penned down
the concept seems to be really interesting
update soon
w8ing eagerly to read further
thanks fr d pm :)

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Really nice start
Lovely prologue
Best friends swaron getting married..
Interesting

Thanks 4 d pm

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Oasis in a desert this is :P
Well firstly thank you for writing this. Only thing of SwaRon left is the fanfictions by you writers. Kind of brushes off the missing qoutient. :P
Coming to the prologue its seems the marraige part is already here. :P And nicely written. I have always loved your writting style and the subtlety you maintain which I found in the update as well. I liked how you wrote Sharon. The weightlifters line :v Looking forward to the Chapter. Post it soon ya.
Good start over there. :)

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

prologue sounds so interesting
ohhh they r getting married wow
update soon

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

loved d prologue... sounds interesting... 2 besties & der marriage... excited to knw further... plz do update soon...

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Nicki_vrushan

@Nicki_vrushan

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Nice concept 😊
Really looking forward to read more.
Please do continue.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

I have become quite reluctant at reading SwaRon things, and understandably I don't like the mush in the stories that usually revolve around the marriage and pretty much what is before it and after it. But the fact that I have read quite a few of your works, and they seem to be different than the usual. I am up to reading this.

This sounds like a good fiction. And you have a crisp flow of writing and have a good grip on language. I am pretty much interested in reading ahead, though time constraints may deter reading and commenting sometimes.

But nevertheless, count me in and keep me in the loop whenever you update. I will read as and when I have time.

-N

Edited by NocturnalBeing - 10 years ago