FF: To Be or Not to Be. [Chap4. Pg 24]

Rachel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

Ah! This is such a cute chapter!
These too are so adorable! Phineas and Ferb :v I liked that part :P
What more can I say? The usual.
Update soon :P

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LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

So sorry i took much time to unres... Was damn busy...

Loved the part... it was a filler update as one of our friend said. like nothing much to do with the story but still it was nice to read... loved it ..

I'm adoring this swaron... they are with so much life ... enjoying couples... still behaving like kids.

nice time pass..they singing that song 😲... they both are crazzyyy😆

but i like this childish swaron... naughty swaron 😉..

and i loved the way u penned that awkward situation.. so something is in the air😉

Loved it...how his family will react to this???😆😆

Lets see

update soon...waiting

~Keechu

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Ananya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

its adorable... cute... bt very short. plz update soon... & love u...

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Chitra.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

The opening scene was awesome :P I dont know I just liked it very for some unknown reason.

Imagining SwaRon sitting decked in proper sophisticated clothes after creating more than just a mess out of kitchen was hillarious :P

Sharon felt ticklish when Swayam was draping her saree and that she never felt that when her Mom used to do it. *Evil smirk*

Swayam and Sharon, a married 'couple' singing kids song, not wierd I do that too, LOL! It was lovely in my imaginations ^_^

Nothing much there but still I loved it.

Chitra :)

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ujwal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

it was cute

i liked it

it was fun reading it

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LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

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gsk4

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Nice storyline. Please upload. Why cant these people hire a cook? They always have a kakka or a chacha to do the house hold work. Please upload, waiting to see what happens next.😃

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Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Hey Nishi.

Read it all in one go. And I must say I have enjoyed it to the core from the story layout till Chapter 4. Everything is so beautifully penned. Loved the relationship that Swayam and Sharon share.

Your description adds cherry to this cake 😆 Too good. You really inspire me, girl.

Fab. Do continue soon :)

Muah

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