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Its feels so good reading ur story after so long :D
loved this drabble series, every part u written so beautifully.. Keep it up :)
ps - hope u r well now, take care :)

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This was really awesome...
The way Swayam proposed Sharon was just lyk fairytale...
Luvd this whole drabble series...
Keep writing...
Thanx fr pm...

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"The same
way you know about my love of
dance. The same way you know that I
like 5-Star more than Cadbury. That
is how I knew the unfulfilled desire of
yours to learn to ride a bicycle."

These lines were beautiful :) This is writtenso graciously! And the setting. . .The description was mind blowing. It had a certain calmness which just suited this piece so beautifully. This was amazing. The funny one liners, the feelings, the romance!

Great Job Nishi!

P.S. Really Sorry for my late replies! Hogwarts is keeping me busy! Reading the fifth one!

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Read all 4 drabbles 😊

it was awesome awesome awesome awesome

Chocolate Day Drabble- Simply hot & best ☺️
aah Chocolate isn't that bad 😉

Promise Day- It was deep & emotional [:'(] Loved it ❤️

Kiss Day- Yaa finally French kiss happened..
you know when I read love in Paris & there French kiss didn't happened .. I wanted u to write sequel to it & yo u did it babes.. love you fr writing this 😃
it was cute ..

Valentine's Day - Perfectly Perfect..
when Sharon felt like titanic scene scene oh my god beautifully written ..

And I love lover boy he knows his Sharon more thn anyone else..
He will fulfill her unfulfilled wishes ❤️
Confession was magical
loved it ❤️

Thanks for writing this 4 drabbles 😳

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Read it all in one go.

Wow...Out of the world.

I loved how you gave each of the 4 days its own special feel.

Chocolate day...Swaron in Canada enjoying the snow with Sharon's favorite hot chocolate and Swayam's Shraon😉 haha and he hates chocolates too good!!

Promise day... Awww it was too emotional 😳 loved it to the core. The promise to love each always...be with each other no matter what.

Kiss day...It was too cute and naughty. Sharon being herself does everything in style 😆 Loved the way she shocked her newly found love

Valentine's day... No words for it literally 👏👏 It reminded me of the chai date and all these times Swayam took Sharon for a ride. "Your wish is my command.."

I loved how you kept it all unique. Fabulous!!

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