AS LONG AS I LIVE(poem on kriyansh)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Holla guys...
m here back with something new... My first ever self written poem... that too on kriyansh...
hope u all will appreciate my work...

It is the same poem which I posted on facebook on 11th jan. n after such an awesum response I received there m posting it here too... 😳

P.S. poem is in 3rd person's P.O.V.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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As long as I live

Your saline mischievous actions,

Your faces full of rage.

Your eyes caring for each other,

Your lives submitted for one another.

I'll remember this forever.

At least till, As long as I live...

As long as I live...

You decided to leave everything,

You turned your shadow face pale.

You never dared to glance this way.

You, I will not forgive.

At least till, As long as I live...

As long as I live...

Your care free dancing in rains,

Your getting jealous on small things,

Your small childish roguery fights.

I'll remince them all...

At least till, As long as I live...

As long as I live...

Your false vows and promises,

Your tormenting dreams,

Your heartless wishes.

I'll hate them always...

At least till, As long as I live...

As long as I live...

You returning back in our lives,

You making our dreams hit reality,

You compelling us to dream more.

I'll never forget you for this...

At least till, As long as I live...

As long as I live...

You leaving us again though together,

You returning back repeating the history again,

You promising of being together, this time for forever,

You making each kriyanshian rejoice in happiness...

I'll always love you for this...

At least till, As long as I live...

As long as I live...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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poem with caps coming soon...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omggg
Ap poem bhi likhte ho
it ws..it ws SUPERB
loved it

Dis short n sweet poem describes kr's life
Loved it alottt

Update ur stories
N plz pm me



Love
radz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This poem was freaking awesome megs!

I never knew you wrote poems! Although even I wrote a poem perhaps once, I don't think I still have the guts to post it :p

Keep writing more poems! Would love to read them!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsme yr

It was beautiful
U penned it flawlessly


Loved it

Luv u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Megs u wrote amazingly... Awesome.. Keep it up..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...just wow..i got no wrds..its too gud fr frst tym..srsly awsum
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome poem

beautifully written

loved it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wowww megs😲
this was damn brilliant👏
do write moreee😳

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