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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Very nice update dear.
IshAv convo was so cute!!
Do update soon.
Lots of love <3


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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Nice concept I really liked It

Glad that raghav is alright

I loved the airport scene very much

And when they scream surprise

I loved bond u showcased

Between raghav and ishika and

Karma and huma

This for pm

Do write mOre

And do pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
m glad u liked it ...maria ... thanku ... and ya will surely pm u ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
So guys her's the next part ...
Just A beginning (os ) Part - 4
Raghav went out of the room and came with a small boz gift wraped in his hand ...
Ishika : yeh kya hai ...
Raghav : taj mehal laya hu tumhare liye ... Shahjahan ne Mumtaz ke liye banaya tha .. toh .. mene tumhareliye bhi banaya ...
Ishika : kyaaa...
Raghav : gift hai baba tumhare liye ... sham ko yeh hi pehenna ... mujhe aacha lagega ...
and went towards door ..
raghav : aur ha ... late mat karna ... me thick 1 hour me aaonga ... tumhare room me ready rehena okkk ...
and went ...
ishika was just smiling there lokkong at the gift ...
she opened the git and and she was shocked as well as happy ...
raghav has gifted her a dress... (http://weheartit.com/entry/149885716 u can see this .. so that u can relate )
he gave her a simple red dress ... not to short and deep neck as he knows she wouldn't be comfortable ...
she was happy seeing these and also overwhelmed ... that raghav knows her better ...
she quickly got dressed and did minimum makeup ... as she likes to be simple ... she put on her heels not too high ... (http://weheartit.com/entry/157374711/search?context_type=search&context_user=LoveCeleste__&page=3&query=heels)
and wore simple earings ... she was now ready and waiting for raghav as he said he will come to call her ..
raghav was in his room was almost ready ( https://fbcdn-photos-b-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-xfp1/v/t1.0-0/1794763_516470588461481_1785277673_n.jpg?oh=1f5450714d6a737376be5a7417523d27&oe=5527B299&__gda__=1430110262_665ab3ffb2d76c26d6959d7d691d9af4 )
... his phone beeps ... it was Karma s message ...
Karma : m going to pick huma and will soon seach at reys's place ... u both also leave k ... don't be late ...
Raghav went to ishika's room to call her ...
Raghav was about to knock at her room's door wen suddenly ishika opend the door ...
Raghav was amazed seeing ishika ... perfectly curled hair ... her simple makeup ... her glossy lipcolor ... which was making him crazy ... he just wanted to kiss her ... the dress was perfectly fitting her and was making her look mote beautiful ... he was still at the same knocking passion when ishika waked her hand in front of his face ... and he came out of the dream land of ishika .. :P
Raghav : beautiful ... i mean .. ishika ... tum bahot beautiful lag rahi ho ...
Ishika s face turned to crimson red by his complement ...
Seeing ishika blussing raghav just bent a little and whispered in her ear ...
Raghav : beautiful toh bahot cum hai .. u r looking hot ... and kissed her on her cheek
Ishika blushed and went outside ...
Raghav : chuai muai ... aaj to mein gaya ... ( winked )
He also followed her ... they both sat in his car ...
Raghav was driving and ishika was in passenger seat ...
Ishika : thanku ... dress ke liye ...
Raghav : ( smiled ) thanku toh mujhe bolna chahiye ... ki tumne isse pehena ... nahi toh mujhe pata hi nahi chalta ki meri girlfriend itni HoT bhi lag sakti hai ...
Ishika : ( blushed ) raghav .. ab bas bhi karo ...
...
On other side ... huma was at her house ... when she heard bike hoarn ... she knw it was karma .. she took her clutch and went out ...
Karma was on his bike ... holding his helmet in his hand ... when se saw Huma coming out of her house .. towards him smilling ...
She was looking dam sexy ... karma's mouth was wide open seeing her ...
(here is the link so u can relate how Huma must me looking)
( http://weheartit.com/entry/157367034/search?context_type=search&context_user=Fashionfantasies&page=4&query=heels )
Huma went hear him ... and said ..
Huma : karma ... muh toh band karo ...
Karma got embarrassed ...
Karma : ummm vohh... ya .. chalo .. hame late ho raha hai ... tum ladkiyann kitna time lagati ho tayyar hone me ...
Huma : ( in mind) how rude ... mujhe compliment bhi nahi diya ...
Huma : mein to kabka ready ho gayi thi tum hi late aaye ...
Karma (in mind ) shayad gussa ho gayi ...
Huma : ab chalein ya yahi rehene ka iraada hai ...
They both went to rey's house ..
Everyone was there ... and was complimenting each other ...
Huma : ohhh myyy goddd ishi ... is that u ... ohhh... u r looking daam hot ...
Ishika : thanku ... ( blushed )
Rey : ha ... ishika ... tumne toh aaj kamal kar diya ... u r looking beautiful ... kriya don't mind but aaj i would like to exchange my date ... mein ishika ke sath jaonnga ... ( he was purposely saying so to tease raghav )
Kriya got that and she too joined Rey
Kriya : ya okk ... i don't have any problem ...
Rey forward his hand towards ishika ...
Seeing this raghav came in front og ishika and holded Rey's hand ...
Raghav : rey sir ... apki date toh hai na kriya maam ... so plz meri date ko chod do ...
Everyone laughed ...
Kriya : don't wory raghav ... ishika .. tumhare sath hi jayegi ... and plz ... don't be so formal ... sir aur maam mat bulao yarr hame ... we r not dat old ...
Vickey : ya rite ... abhi toh mei shadi bhi nahi hui hai ...
Nil : shadi kya ... isse toh abhi tak girlfriend bhi nahi mili ...
Everyone laughed ... and vickey rand after nill ...
Swayam : ohhhk guys ... aab chale ...
...
Rey , kria , simmi and nill and amar was in one car ...
Swayan , Sharon , bharat , vickey was in one car ...
Raghav , ishika was in raghav car ... and huma too joined them ...
Raghav: huma tum hamare sath aa rahi ho ... ??
Huma : ha ... mujhe nahi jana iske sath bike par ...
Karma (in mind): ohh shit yeh abhitak naraj hai ...
Karma : ohhk den mein bhi aata hu car se ...
Raghav : ( in mind ) : dono bhi na jhagadte rehete hai ... ab ... kabab mein haddi ban gaye hai ... akele rehene hi nahi dete
Ishika : ha ha .. aajao sab sath me jaenge .. majja aayege ...
Raghav just lokked at ishika ... but she did'nt understand anyting ...
Raghav (half heartly ): aacha thick hai aajao ..
Karma was about to sit next to Huma .. suddenly she screemed ..
Huma : nai mujhe nahi bethna iske sath ... ishika plz tum piche aa jao ...
Raghav was now giving dead look to karma ...
Karma : ( making puppy face ) are donoko sath mein bethne do na ...
Raghav : ha ha ... plz ..
Huma : ok fine ...
They all sat in car ...
Ishav was full on romantic mode where they were looking at each other smiling ... and on other side Huma was still angry on him ...
Karma ( wisperd ) mujhse naraz ho ...
Huma didn't replies ...
Karma : vese aaj me kisiko kuch kehena bhool hi gaya ...
Huma : looked at karma ... and was waiting for him to say ...
Karma : u r lookind daam sexy ... ( holding her hand )
Huma trying to be angry but melted seeing karma's pledging face
Karma : aab toh maaf kar doon ... sorry ...
Huma : its ok ...
Karma : pakka tumne mujhe maaf kiya ...
Huma : ha ...
Karma : aaj toh mujhe kiss toh chodo .. mujhe ek hug bhi nahi mila ( making puppy face)
Huma (blushed ) and kissed on karma's cheek ...
Ishav saw that through rear mirror ...
Raghav: uhmmm uhmmm ...
Karma : kya hai tu gadi chala na ...
Raghav : kash koi mujhe aasa kiss deta ..
Ishika and huma face turned to crimson red ... they both looked out of window to hide their blush ...
Raghav and karma smiled ...
Soon they reached ...
All d3 gang went inside the club ...
Everyone was chilling ... having drinks ... dancing ...
A soft music played
Swaron , kriyansh , nimmi , ishav and KaHu went on the dance floor and was dancing slowly into each other's arms ...
And on other side vickey , amar and bharat was on barr counter ...
Vickey made 2 drinks for bharat and amar ... adding alchalhol in it ..
the dance was over everyone came towads bar counter ... ishika and huma by mistake ... dranked spiked drink which was for amar and bharat ... both og them started to behave wiredly ...
Swayam : vickey ... tumlogone drink me kuch milaya hai na ...
Vickey : vohhh mene toh amar aur bhart ke liye ... par indonone ...
Rey : aab .. voh sab chodo .. and raghav and karma .. sambhaloo dono ko ...
Music played ... ( one direction - C'mon C'mon )
Listning to this huma and ishika went on the dance floor ... they were both dancing like mad
The one that I came with,
She had to go
But you look amazing,
Standing alone
So c'mon, c'mon
Move a little closer now,
C'mon, c'mon,
Ain't no way you're walkin' out
C'mon, c'mon,
Show me what you're all about,
Yeah,
I've been watching you all night,
There's somethin' in your eyes
To say, "C'mon, c'mon,
And dance with me, baby."
Yeah,
The music is so loud,
I wanna be yours now,
So c'mon, c'mon,
And dance with me, baby.
Other gang members were also enjoying ...
Raghav was with ishika ... and was adoring her while dancing ... and karma was trying to handle Huma ... when suddenly glass of juice which one guy was holding sips on huma's dress...
Huma: yuukkk ... u idiot ...cant u seee ...
Guy : u were dancing like maniac on the floor ...
Huma : tumne meri dress kharab ki aurr tum mujhse jaban lada rahe hu ... tumhe toh mein nahi chodungi ...
Karma comes and handles her ...
Karma : huma ... let it be ... tum jao .. washroom yeh clean karke aao ... jao ...
Huma : tumhe chodungi nahi ... ( to that guy )
Huma goes in washroom ... it was outside the dj room ...
There was some group was 3 guys ... drunked fully ... and saw Huma going towards the washroom ...
Seeing her alone ... they also went in ...
There was an outer are of commen both for men and women were there were place to sit and from there inside was washroom ...
Huma went inside the washroom and cleaned her dress ... and came out ...
But when she came out she saw 3 boys sanding there and looking towrds her ...
She tried to go outside ...but one guy trapped her way ...
Guy1 : arree .. itni jaldi bhi kya hai ... ruk toh jao ...hamare pass...
And other two boys laughed ...
As huma was little drunked she was not able to walk properly ...
She was trying to dodge that guys from her way but they were not ready to leave her ...
She was not hell tensed ...
So guys thats it ... hope u guys like it .. do like and comment ... happy reading ...
Edited by roysanjana2 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Ress

Unres
hey,this is a swt os ...
i just read all d parts in one go
& its lovely

but wy u posts chotu se parts 😔
long long post karna nxt part

Waise toh,i am not a d3 fan ...
but i reads some of tarrey stories her and now vl read stories written by u too

Thanx for pm
update asap
Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Nyc update
Ishika n huma drunk
Thankz for d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Its my favourite os . And I appreciate your effort I mean u are posting even the pics just that we can relate it with the characters superb job . Please kabhi end mat karna and update soon👍🏼👏👏
roysanjana2 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Thanku so much ... Alll ... N soon i wil update the nexr part ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Hey . That was an awesome update loved it !!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
So guys here is the next part ...

Just A Beginning (os) Part -5

Huma was trying to dodge the guys so that she could go outside .. But the guys was not ready to leave her ...

Guy 1 : Are .. Baby just calm down ... Don't worry we r there .. Just cooperate with us ...

Huma : U .. U just shut up .. N .. Leave my way ...
She was hell nervous and afraid ..

Guy 3: Are .. Hum itne pyaar se baat kar rahe hai aur aap hamse itna gusse se kyu ...
And he grabs her wrist ...
By his action .. Huma felt that this situation will anytime go worst .. So she struggled to ungrip her wrist...
But the guy holded it as tight as she was struggling...

Huma : How dare u ... Leave my hand .. Or else. ...
Guy 2 : Or else what ha ...
Huma stamped on the guys feet was was holding her grip .. And she some how ran outside ...
Guys followed her ... As huma was drunked she was not able to run fast .. And she fell down ..
Guys reached near her .. And guy 1 caught her ..
They were near the parking are where no one was there ...
Huma : Please.. Please leave me ...
But they seems that they were not going to do that ... They slowly were comming near her .. She was on ground .. Moving backwards and begging to leave her ...
As she was moving backwads .. Guy 2 came near her .. And was about to touch her ... When she picked up one stone and hit that guy on his head ...
The guy fell on ground in pain .. And she got chance to run ...
But ther luck was not on her side today ... Other 2 guys caught her and pinned her nearby car ...
Guy 2: Salli .. Tu mujhe marige .. Abb dekhta hu .. Kese bachke jati hai tu iss bar ... And he came close to her and grabbed her sholders .. She was now started to scream...
Huma : Please.. Koi hai ... Help me ... Karmaa ... Please... Help me ...
Guys 3 : Yaha koi nahi hai tumhari help karne vala ...
And othe two guys laughed...
Tears were flowing from her eye ..
She was struggling to get rid of the guys grip .. Which in result .. One of the guy tored her dress sleaves ... And scratch her sholder ...
And she scremed in pain ...
Guy 2: Kesa laga ha ... Dard hua na .. Abhi toh yeh bahot kum hai ...
Kuma kicked that guy in his stomach...
Guy 2: Sali tu aase nahi bannane vali. ... And he slapped her hard ...
Huma was screaming for help ..

On other side ...

Sharon : Are karma tum yaha akele ... Huma kaha hai ...
Karma : Voh .. Huma ke dress par drink gir gayi thi .. So voh usse clean karne gayi hai ... Par usse gaye bahot time ho gaya ... Abhi tak ayyi nahi ...
Sharon : Ek kaam karte hai .. Chalo .. Dekhte hai ..
Karma : Ya .. Chalo ..
Karma and huma came out and went in the commen area ...
Sharon : Karma tum yahi ruko .. Me washroom me dekhti hu .. Ok ..
Karma : Ya ok ...
Sharon went to washroom.. But nobody was there inside ...
Sharon: Karma .. Undar toh koi nahi hai ... Yeh huma gayi kaha ...
Karma was now worried... Achanak se uski nazar .. HuMa ke earring par padhiwhich was lying on the floor ...
Karma : Are .. Yeh toh huma ke earring hai ..
Sharon : Kuch toh wired hai ... Chalo bahar dekhte hai .. Shayad voh dj room me gayi ho ..
Karma and sharon were about to enter in dj room when they heard someone screaming...
Sharon : Yeh .. Yeh toh huma ki avaz hai na ...
Karma : Ha ...
And karma ran towards the direction .. From where the voice was coming...sharon also followed him ...
Karma reached near parking and saw that 2 boys were there holding one girl towards car and one guy on on her ... And then he saw that the girf was none other than huma ... And his blood boiled ...
Karuma : ( screamed) Humaaa ...
And ran towards her ...
Sharon saw that from distance...
Sharon : (in mind) ohhh shit .. Huma ... Mujhe sabko bulana chahiye ...
And she ran inside the dj room to call for help ...
...

Seeing karma coming the guy who was on top of huma left her and stood there ...
Guy 2: Who the hell r u ... Go away .. We r busy. Now ...
Karma came and punched that guy hard on his face ...
Seeing this other tow guys left huma and started to fight with karma ...
Huma just fell down as no energy was left in her body after all struggle she did to save herself ...
Seeing huma karma became more angry and were fighting with that guys ...
Guy 1 : Aree .. Hai kon tu ha ... Apne kam se kaam rakh ... Samjha ..
Huma : How dare u ... And he agaib punched one of the guy ...
Huma : How dare u toched her .. Bl***y ... I will kill u ...
But before he could do anything.. Two boys grabed him ...
And started puncing karma ... He was injured... But still waas fighting with them ... He was broken.. Seeing his girl .. In this situation... He blamed himself for this ..
Soon d3 gang reached there .. With security guards ...
They all stopped the fight .. And the guards took 3 guys with them to police station...
Sharon , kriya , and simmi .. Went towards huma ...
Rey : Karma .. U r injured ..n tumhare mooh se khoon bhi aa raha hai ...
But karma was not in his senses ... He just rand towards huma and helped girls to make her stand ..
When karma saw her .. She was badly beaten ..her left cheek was swolen .. It sseemed like she have been slapped really hard .. Blood was also comming from her bouth ...
Her sleeves were tored ... Scratches marks were there on sholder ... And hair full messed up ... Bite marks were there on her neck ...seeing her like this he started crying ...
Huma just said one word ... Karma ... And she fainted ...
Kriya : Guys ... Yeh toh faint ho gayi .. Jaldi se isse hospital le janna hoga ...
Rey : Ya .. Guys chalo jaldi ...
Karma carried huma ...
Raghav : Karma .. Aaja jaldi ...
Swayam : Nai .. Raghav tum ishika ko sambhalo .. Mein gadi chalata hu ...
Raghav : Ya ok ...
Raghav helped ishika to get in car and he also sat besides her .. As her head was paining ... Because of the drink ...
They all soon reached hospital ...
Huma was in Icu ... Doctors were examining her ...
All were outside the icu ... Waiting for doctor ...
Karma was standing in the corner and was crying ...
Raghav went to him ...
Raghav : Karma .. Tumhe bhi chot lagi hai dressing karvalo .. Hum sab hai yaha ...
But karma was not responding... So raghav put his hand on his sholder ..
Karma hugged him .. And cried ...
Karma : Yeh sab meri vajh se hua hai ... Sab meri galti hai ...
everyone came towards him ...
Swayam : Tumhari koi galti nahi hai isme ...
Sharon : Ya... N aaj agar tum time par nahi pohochte toh pata nai situation aur kharab ho sakti thi ...

Doctor came out ..


So thats it guys ... Do like and comment.. Happy reading
Edited by roysanjana2 - 10 years ago

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