KR SS:I AM SORRY*part 3 updated*8/3/15

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Posted: 10 years ago
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HEY guyz..i came up with dis two shot...i couldnt stp myself frm imaging kria's re-entry..so wrote it...its based on d current situation
P.s.-plz dnt judge me aftr reading this prologue..i dnt hold anythiing against rey;s character..infact i myself is a big big fan of kriyaansh..
plz plz give ur reviews...tell me whether i should continue it or not..


PROLOGUE


Rey..rey where d heck r u dude?...said swayam as he came barging in rey's house only to find rey working out vigorously.

SW:"dude..wat happened?

R:nothing yaar..tu bata..tu yahan abhi..n dat too this excitd..sharon se patch up hogya kya

Sw:buddy..i m nt in a mood of teasing..well its nt abt me n sharon...bt sumthing abt u..i m sure u ll jump lyk a maniac aftr listening to d news..

R:kya hua?

SW:kria..she is cumng back to india..swayam said this expecting rey to jump in happiness..bt all his predictions went doen the gutter when he saw rey standing there pale n still like a dummy

Sw:kya hua rey..arent u happy??...

R:no response

swayam repeated his questions twice bt on gettin no rply he shaked him making rey come to his senses
Sw:kya hua rey..u arent happy..tell me kya hua

R:"sw..sw...swayam..vo main..he strts stammering making swayam even more confused n tensed
Sw:buddy..tell me..wat d matter..

R:swayam actually..main tjhe batana chahta tha..par tu already itna pareshan tha..toh i thought ki i shouldnt disturb u..par

Sw:par kya

R:vo..uss din..n rey told d whole stry to swayam.."..n ab i think ki sara his pregnant..main kria ko kya bolunga

Swayam stood there numb listening to all dis..he never in his dreams imagined rey to do such a thing..he ws angry..super angry n felt protective abt kria..he dere n

den decided that he wont let rey hurt her anymore

Sw:gud

R:"huh??"

Sw:acha hua..i came here..i came to knw who actually reyaansh sighania is..rey listen to me carefully coz i m nt gonna repeat it..this tym i wont let u hurt kria..dat

grl has sufferred a lot..a lot..i never expectd dis frm u...n i thought i knew u...dis tym kria wnt suffer..n dare u cum near her..

Rey ws shocked ws an understatement..he never expectd swayam to react in such a manner..his reaction made him guilty of his actions..he composed hiimself n managed to

speak..

R:swayam meri baat toh sun

Sw;kya sunu rey..kya sunu..jab i gt to knw ki u were in a relationship with taani..main isliye tensed nhi tha ki taani is my sis..i ws tensed ki how will I answer

kria..ki u moved on..ki d guy she luvd soo much moved on withourt even thinking ki how she is..when i told her i knw she ws broken bt she nevr ever shed a tear in frnt

of m..she ws happy coz u were happy...bt u..u again made d same mistake..u knw who u r..a cassnova...instead of convicing kria...showing ur love to her..u..u.. he

left d sentence incompleted unable to say..

R:i..i m sorry

Sw:sorry..yaa..u should b..bt i m nt gonna forgive u even if kria does...tmrw i m gonna go to pick kria up frm d airport..when she cums here dare u cum n apologize..n

yaa dnt wrry..i ll save u d trouble..i tell kria everything...i never expectd dis frm u..he said dis n strting walking towards..before gng he turned back n said

Sw:u knw..rey..wen i got to knw dat kria broke up with u..i so wantd to make her believe dat breaking up with u isn't always a solution..n i ws admant on dng so once

she ws here..bt now i m glad she did dis..sayng dis he left leaving a crying n disturbed rey behind.


INDEX

Part 1-page 3
Part 2-page 6
Part 3-page 8
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
awesome prologue
love it
emotional
love swayam for sticking up for kria
love that bond
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome prologue
really wanted to read something on current situation
n u r writing on it
thank u sooo much for that
waiting for update
continue soon😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I so wanted to have some idea abt kriya's return...
Thanx for writing this ...
Nice prologue...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice and good concept ...do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesomeee 👏 👏
Sooo perfect Part loved it totaly ❤️

Thank u for this
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi... Awesome concept...
Plz continue soon n pm me !!!!!
Really liked the Reyam part...
Update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey it was AWESOME girl 👍🏼
a story on the current track was much needed
thank u so much 4 thinking abt it
reyam convo was amazing
swayam angry with rey and being protective of his best friend
totally loved that 👏
but also felt bad 4 rey 😭
kriyam bond aise hi strong rakhna
but reyam ka bi patchup kar dena
aage kya?
kaun batayega kriya ko yeh baat 😲
jaldi jaldi updt
n thnx 4 the pm dear
love u
Edited by kreyafan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazinggg prolong😃
Really wnted to read sumthing on current track
dis concept ws actually in ma mind😊
I Love kriyam alot so it ll b grt to see swayum being protective 4 kriya😆
Bichara rey😭
Bt ab galti ki hai toh phugto
KRiya ko zaada mat rulana plz
N kriyam bond ko ishi tarah strong rakhn

Hw ll I w8 for d nxt update😲
Plz update soon n pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesomee prologue, really wanted to read on current track loved kriyam, do cont soon n pls add me to ur pm list 😛

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