SWARON OS: UNLOCKING THE HEART OF LOVE - Page 2

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sonali saraswat

@cutelove

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Posted: 10 years ago

Very nice n sweetly written ...

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 10 years ago

OMG.
It was such a cute OS.
I really liked the bond between the Shekhawat's.
And the way Swayam is just like his dad.
And Sharon ko manaya with a sweet kiss. 😳
Beautiful OS. Thanks for the PM.

Will reply late to all your works due to studies.

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wao wat an os gal phele toh sry

fot not reading it wen u wa it to me

N then thank god i din read

becoz it was such a beautiful surprise

I hav to say u did really well wit the

Situation sharon was almost gonna burst

Herself out n poor swayam he had to just go wit

The flow N then cums the best part

U described each bond wit such clearity

Tis one shot was more abt relationships

Swayam n father the coolest bro's

Swayam' parents the coolest frns

N swayam n sharon the coolest luv birds

All in all a very well formed one shot

I loved the last part becoz

Naughty swayam is my fav facet of swayam

The kiss did its work n sharon ab woh jaati bhi

Toh kaha beechari ...😆

Do keep up wit such creativity ☺️

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shaaz23

@shaaz23

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Posted: 10 years ago

This was a great to read
Funny,romantic,loving and cute

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Fatima

@HSFA

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Posted: 10 years ago

It was a lighthearted OS that I enjoyed reading to the core.

Loved how they patched and the bonding between Swayam and his parents was simply amazing. 👍🏼

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

heya shinu

nice os

swayams and his dads bond was a real treat to read

swayams parents love sharon too

thats cute

sharon avoiding swayam

and he trying to manofy her

the climax is superb

sach bataun tho

i had a huge smile reading the last part

wish it was longer

thnx 4 d pm

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Rachel

@.Vrushanholic.

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Posted: 10 years ago

beautifully written...
loved the swayam and parents ka bond
and the last part was <3

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

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Posted: 10 years ago

m so sorry fpr being so late...

the os was awesum...

as expected from u...

i loved it to the core...

sorry for the short comment...mai batati hoon tumhe

kya hua...

love ani

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome chap shini.. loved it😃

sharon in siren mode.. poor swayam.. she bursted on him

loved the bond between swayam nd his dad

Swayam manofy Sharon with a kiss😳

overall it was sweet, cute nd beautiful

keep writing

sorry for late😔

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