A Temporary Goodbye - KriYaansh One-Shot - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: -Girlz-Rule-

Oh Wow, first let me say a Big Welcome Back to my writer Reshma. Gosh Sweety, don't ask how much I missed your writing. Damn!!


Now coming to the OS...
Ahem Ahem, my sweety has became so good in writing romance parts..๐Ÿ˜‰
Dayum, it was a wonderful and cute one.
Rey with his charming eyes and the lovely Kriya..
Awww, their love for each other...You explained it so well.

Ahh, it was sad though how the two lovers had to leave each other even if it was temporary.

This OS was a simple yet amazing one!
Your writing skills have gone so excellent by the time.
I'm proud of you Reshu!!

Please keep writing and yeah Thanks a lot for writing this OS. We at least got a "come back" by you.

Love you loads
-Ur Soha Dii



Thanks Di !!!
I'm glad that u liked it...
and thanks for always giving such heart warming comments! :)
I'm happy that u found improvement in my work.. Yeah i'll try to keep writing more like this...
Thanks for ur encouragement...! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Thank u once again!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Rajeshwari_KR

Reshu this was beatifully written...love it!๐Ÿค—



Thanks a lot! ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: nature-beauty

hey resh after a very long tym u wrote an OS

loved it.๐Ÿ˜Š
sweet and simple one dear


Yup!
Thanks! ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: --megs_arsha--

awesum resh...
Bahot acha...
Bt itaa chotu sa...
Still loved it



Thank u so much Megs di!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: devilishpam

res
unres

amazing tha reshu
i luv it
and i luv u
keep writing ๐Ÿ˜Š



Thanks a lot Miss.P ๐Ÿ˜›
Awieee I love u too :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: devilofevil_KR

amazing os
luvd it
kr uffo



Tune already comment kardi! hehe...
Tha..ks Jaaneman :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: kreyafan

Amazing os ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Short tha but good things come in small packages
kr emotions were awesome
just loved it
do write more :)



Thanks a lot!!! Glad u liked it! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Sanchita_ArSha

Resh ๐Ÿค—

After sooo long u finally writed
one os ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Wowww its cute one shot ๐Ÿ‘

loved it beautifully writen
awesome great lovely โค๏ธ

Thnx for Pm
keep writing yr



Sanchu di! ๐Ÿค—
Yusss ๐Ÿ˜ณ Hayeee bohut bohut shukria!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Thanks for ur lovely comment di! ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: arsha_simran

OMG sweety!!! You noe I missed your writing sooo sooo much Ki kya bolun...
Damn I sooo sooo sooo loved it!!
Few days back I spoke to my friend about one of your stories and today I see you have a story written wooowwwiiieee super coool!!!!
Accha coming to the update!!!
Sweety gosh you know what baby your break has changed you!!!
The way you have written is completely fantastic!!!
The way feelings have been described the way emotions have been portrayed the way of speaking everything is sooo very much improved!!!
Kaun bolega ek 14 saal Ki ladki ne ye likha hai...
Gosh its amazing!!! I love it alot!!
That moment when kri had to tell the news to rey and rey ke feelings I loved it!!!
And the puppy look!!!
And tune ek sentence Mein rey ko define kar dia!!!
"doesn't affect me tag" wala line!!! Soo completely rey!!!
I loved it alot!!! And Haan bahut chotu Tha.. Next tym thoda bada likhna and keep writing more!!!
Waiting for more surprises!!!
Love you lots!!! Muuuaaahhh



Itttaaa bada comment! ๐Ÿ˜†
but i love it! ๐Ÿ˜‰ Yaar tera super awesome wala comment with loads of exclamation marks makes me feel so awesome! ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Awie sachi?? u were talking about my writing work! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Awww Thanks a lot!!! Yus i cud feel that there was a change in the way i write... But i'm glad its coming out well! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Hehehe 14 saal ki ladki! ๐Ÿ˜†
Yup... will try writing more for all of u guyz! ๐Ÿ˜›
nd will increase the size also ๐Ÿ˜›
Thanksss a looottt for ur amazing comment!!! Made me feel so happy! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Muuuaahhh :*
Love u too Sweetypie! ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: arsha_simran

I love the banner alot!!!!
Bahut bahut accha!!!
Something different and unusual!!!
Dono ke emotions and wapas Milne ka waada!!!



Hayeee... u noticed something which none of them noticed!
Banner! Thank u so much dearo! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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