A Temporary Goodbye - KriYaansh One-Shot

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey everyone!!! I'm back after a long... infact a very long time with a new One-Shot. 😃
Its a KriYaansh's one so strangers do leave this post 😛
Have a good time reading!!! 😳




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There was a bang at the door as if someone was closing it. I could feel someone nearing me.And i knew it was Him. I could just smell the essence of his chocolate flavoured perfume, which always made me get tempted.

Soon i felt his hot breath on my left shoulder and his masculine arms around my waist. A smile waved on my face and i turned around to respond to his hug. As soon as i pulled myself back from his embrace i couldnt help but get lost in his charming eyes. Those dark brown orbs used to send a shiver down my spine. He came near me and whispered '' I'll miss You'' .. A teardrop rolled down from my eyes as soon as i listened to it.. The thought of being away from him made me get goosebumps.

But He always used to smile and console me by saying that its just the matter of 6 months .. But i know ..this Guy who wraps himself with a Not-being-affected tag is actually the most sensitive person I've ever met. I know, He has a fear of losing me.. Fear of being Alone.
But i too can't help it. It's such a big opportunity that I've got in my life and i cant afford to loose it.
He understands this and thats the reason i love him more. It was terrible to tell him that I wont be there for 6 months with him. But i somehow blurted it out.

It was a pleasant evening. But not at all pleasant for me until i got a phone call from the Board of Directors of my college.
I was being given an opportunity to go to Sydney for my career opportunites in dance. My college had always considered me as an awesome dancer and it was my name which was suggested for any dance event. This time it was again me. But it wasn't any event but an opportunity to learn more dance for 6 months .

I was just so excited to get the news that i was being selected but equally disheartened as i dint wanted to leave Him.. Rey!

The door bell rang. I quickly went downstairs and unlocked the door. I saw it was Rey. He stepped in and gave me a peck on my cheeks and moved towards the couch.
i thought i should say about the dance opportunity to Rey. And I started speaking.

''Hey Rey.. Wanna have some coffee? ''

''Uhm, yeah sure'' he nodded.

I brought coffee for him as well as for me.
Sipping the coffee.. I said '' Rey... I've got an opportunity to go to Sydney from the board of Directors of my college. Its a course of 6 months that i learn dancing.''
I said with my head down.

'' Oh Gosh Kria! This is Awesome!!! I mean a career opportunity is such a big thing!!! '' He exclaimed with his face filled with Cheerfulness.
I had my head still put down in sadness.

Yes. Sadness of leaving Rey. I cannot even think of living my life without him. Even if its for my career.. i would choose him over my career.

He asked looking at my emotionless face.. '' Hey dear..Whats wrong?''
'' I can't live without u'' I said in a go.
'' Have you gone nuts?'' He asked. He continued '' Listen Kria , its ur life ..Live It! Dont worry about me ... I'll be fine''
He made his cute puppy face for which i can never say NO...!
And this time too it was the same. I couldn't say No to him and it was decided that i will be going to Sydney.

Now, I was packing my bags when he uttered '' i'll miss You'' . After leaving out a teardrop i said '' I'll miss you too Rey''
He fetched me up and swirled me. He dropped me down and planted a kiss on my forehead.
He moved aside the strands of hair on my face and said '' Shall i drop you to the airport''?
I looked at the watch and realized that it was the time for me to leave.
I carried my bags and strolled towards the car.
Rey offered me a seat and we headed off to the airport.

I got my tickets at the counter and was about to board my flight when i turned back and lipped ''I love You '' to Rey, with my moist eyes.
He too responded by saying ''I love you too Kria''.
And i went inside my flight waving a temporary Goodbye.


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Done! I know a short one :( ... Hope everyone liked it.
And Soha Di... I did write an OS after a long time 😛 (If u remember that u said me to write an OS)...
Sorry if it was boring and not upto the mark.
Please do comment a lot!!!
and Yus.. Don't forget to hit the like button!!!

Love,
Reshma
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reshhuuu... 🤗

I so missed your writings re..
This One Shot is really short..
But so sweet yar.. 😳

Beautifully written barbie.. 😛

And yeah so now you are officially back..
Shall I expct somthng more.. 😆

I missed you baby.. Huggsss..!!
I seriously loved it..

Love Ur Khudi...!! 😉
Edited by PunjabiKudi_17 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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heyyy
short and sweet one..
loved the bond of kriyansh..

do write more...

with love
keechu

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Posted: 10 years ago
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woww reshu u r back😊
this os was soo amazingg👏
beautifully penned down👍🏼
and love d title of this os😊

Edited by aishu3003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Grt os!!!
Kriya given the chance to make it big!!
She underrstands rey!
She knows his fear of losing her... so its hard for her.
Just grt!!!
Want another one soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG sweety!!! You noe I missed your writing sooo sooo much Ki kya bolun...
Damn I sooo sooo sooo loved it!!
Few days back I spoke to my friend about one of your stories and today I see you have a story written wooowwwiiieee super coool!!!!
Accha coming to the update!!!
Sweety gosh you know what baby your break has changed you!!!
The way you have written is completely fantastic!!!
The way feelings have been described the way emotions have been portrayed the way of speaking everything is sooo very much improved!!!
Kaun bolega ek 14 saal Ki ladki ne ye likha hai...
Gosh its amazing!!! I love it alot!!
That moment when kri had to tell the news to rey and rey ke feelings I loved it!!!
And the puppy look!!!
And tune ek sentence Mein rey ko define kar dia!!!
"doesn't affect me tag" wala line!!! Soo completely rey!!!
I loved it alot!!! And Haan bahut chotu Tha.. Next tym thoda bada likhna and keep writing more!!!
Waiting for more surprises!!!
Love you lots!!! Muuuaaahhh
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love the banner alot!!!!
Bahut bahut accha!!!
Something different and unusual!!!
Dono ke emotions and wapas Milne ka waada!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Resh 🤗

After sooo long u finally writed
one os 😳
Wowww its cute one shot 👏

loved it beautifully writen
awesome great lovely ❤️

Thnx for Pm
keep writing yr
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing os 👍🏼
Short tha but good things come in small packages
kr emotions were awesome
just loved it
do write more :)
Edited by kreyafan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing one shot...

beautifully written..

loved it..

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