SWARON OS- CRAVED PROPOSAL

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

shiiiniii...😃

wonderful os...

loved it to the core...

so sweet and cute one...

loved swaron tooo muchhh...

sorryyy late cmt and smalll tooo

do write more...

do pm me ...😃

with love

keechu😃

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priya

@priya_sejwal

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Nice os...loved it

It was too sweet n cute...😊

SUPERB!!!!

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Ah...indeed a very beautiful and special way to confess your feelings.

It was very unique. Loved the idea of the proposal and the equation that Swaron shared. Well done :)

Thanks for the pm

Edited by HSFA - 10 years ago

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Wow,, Vei well penned down..😊

The title is vei apt..😃

Luvd their bond... Cute and adorable... 😃

I liked how u showed them as a best friend and how they love each other, now they r getting engaged bt still not confessed..😊

The proposal was beautiful and unique.. 😊

Their confession was beautiful.. 😊

Nice OS Shinni 😊

And thanks Mansi for the PM 😊

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

heya shinu dear

wow!

superb os

and mansi nice title

coming to the os

in the starting i really didnt expect it

to turn out so different and beautiful

sharons dream

their relationship in this work of yours is so cool

i lovd it

swayam toh swayam hai

and he proved it by

confessing his love in front of everyone

and even sharon didnt come to know

and when sharon realised ...

aww the hug

so pure

and finallly they confessed

the ring surprise was superb

thnx 4 d pm

sorry 4 d late cmnt

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

chappals are u serious???

i can throw chocolates at u for this😉

indeed one of the best os i have read

i loved it thoroughly especially their friendship...

i loved how sharon said ' bhad mein jaye ' everytime😆😆

wo bhad mein jayega to mera kya hoga??????😳😳

waise bakwas apart...

loved the entire os... clap clap clap👏...

love , ani

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Sana

@SaNa_sTaR

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Fabulous OS!

Sharon dreaming at the beginning...😆...poor girl wants Swayam to propose

Loved their friendship and nok jhok

Swayam's proposal was truly unique

Loved the end scene where they confess 😳

Keep writing...

Thanks for the PM Mansi 😊

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yoyoaishwarya

@yoyoaishwarya

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

very nice lovi g n cutee swaron os , their love is always cutee n u made it cuteer , do write more dear

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Diya

@diyaswaronholic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Diduuu!!
I need to ask u something!
Aisa mahaan ideas aapko aate kahan se hai huh!!
Haye, itna acha os jo tha!!
I was sooo shocked!!
hehee
Finally!
In the end mai, hamare lover boy ne propose kiya!
Arre wah! mast style se!!
hheeh!
loved loved loved this os!!

Aur sunoo!
Even i want an os!!
Bas mansu keliye likho na aap! *pouts*

chhaloo koi nahi!!
love u!

P.S. Wont comment or read or like or come online on India forums until 11th December. Sorry! Oh and I know sooo small comment. Cant help It!! EXAMS!😭

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Ria

@riachawlalko

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

beautiful os
thanks fr d pm :)

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