swaron ff-tujhse naraaz nahin zindagi part 1 pg 9

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Vishi-

@Vishi-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

res
unres

Sorry for late unres

Awesome update
This story will be masterpiece
in love wid sibling bond Swayam call tia barbie doll awww 😳

Sharon k sath much galat hua hai kya 🤔
I hope SwaRon heal each other's pain

Gunjan is right she ll meet her soulmate soon 😉

Edited by Barbievishi20 - 10 years ago

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

woww

finally u updated

nice

swayams love for his young sis

was well penned

sharon shares a really

gud bond wiith sajan

want to knw swyams dilemma

regarding his health condition

waiting for swaron meet

and wud love to read how their story wud progress

sharons nightmare

wat cud it be?

sharon gonna shift to mumbai

please update the next part soon

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Loved it .nice update

Swayam and tia ka bond cute hai..barbie doll and superman..aww...I liked it.

Update soon.

Edited by ujwalv - 10 years ago

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shaaz23

@shaaz23

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Great update
Emotional and loving
Update soon will be waiting

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i_yatharthk

@i_yatharthk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

firstly would like to say about the VM...the song selection is awesome( one of my fav songs) and the scenes...rather the moment shared by swaron were perfectly fiting to the song's lyrics..the VM is great to watch and thn about the concept its unique and would love to read it...and the characters to are nice and those which are legends for youth on televisons...swaron. gunjun and samrat. simmi, and tia...

about the 1st part of the ff...the way in which feelings of both the brothers( swayam and samrat) for there sisters is shown is too good...sharon gunjun bond too...will be very eagerly waiting to read it further..and witness how the things unfold futher...