TR OS - If That's What You Wanted

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello , guys . I am here with a new OS .
First things first. This OS is inspired by John Green's 'The Fault In Our Stars.'
Do credits to him. It's an amazing book. Recommended to everyone.
I don't know i have done justice to the book or not. But i have written it in a very different way from the book. And the storyline is a bit different as well. As i said, it is just inspired. Not adapted. And , this is TaaRey version of a RaHi OS i had written
Here is the OS .
TaaRey OS - If That's What You Wanted

She stepped on the stage. Dancing had always meant the world to her. Until the doctors told her it was not good for her. And until she met Reyaansh Singhaniya .

Song Name - What You Wanted

Song Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p9LDnPyY9zA

[Sincere request, if you want to enjoy the OS do please play the song. It is very important]

*Music starts*

She took her right foot forward and pointed it on the ground and turned around daintily like a ballerina dancer. Her hands covered her as she bent down as if she never wanted to get to know anyone or make any friends. Then as a sudden move she just skipped to the left side of the stage and her arms on her right as if she never wanted to let anyone come near her. There were bruises on them. Her doctors had told her it was all a part of her disease. It was all a part of her cancer. She never wanted anyone to come close to her. She called herself a Grenade. For one simple reason, she was going to blow up one day.

I'll find the places where you hide
I'll be the dawn on your worst night
The only thing left in your life
Yeah I would kill for you, that's right

It was BEFORE she met him. Suddenly a light flashed on the right side of the stage. His eyes always spoke the things he felt inside. From day one he met her he was deeply in love with her. But she always ignored her heart and the feeling she felt inside. Taani turned around and took a step forward tried to express that she didn't want him to close to her as she would only give him pain.

If that's what you wanted
If that's what you wanted
If that's what you wanted
If that's what you wanted

He took a step in front and kicked his feet as he jumped and tried to tell her that just because of her cancer she should not stop herself from living. She was dancing the same moves as him. Only her face was full of pain. She just wanted to hug him tight. But her mind continuously was telling that he will only get hurt if she agreed to be with him. She turned again this time facing and forwarding her hand of friendship. He smiled a small smile. He jumped a little and ran around the stage as if to say that there is a lot more to life than she thinks there is. He stopped behind her. Her eyes got wet for he only wanted her to be happy. He did some actions with his hands and stepped back one as if to tell her to forget about everything and live the life the way she likes it.

I'll put your poison in my veins
They say the best love is insane, yea
I'll light your fire till my last day
I'll let your fields burn around me, around me

She was in love with him. She knew she was. But whenever she thought about opening up she just pictured him on her funeral and stopped. But his affection and care towards her was just melting her heart and now show to keep her feeling within her was just too difficult for her. She just closed her mind and opened her heart and did what it told her to do.

If that's what you wanted
If that's what you wanted
If that's what you wanted
If that's what you wanted

She turned and intertwined the fingers of their right hand and caught his left hand and placed it on her waist. Their feet were moving to the rhythm of the music, their hearts were dancing and their eyes were fixed on each other.

*Music*

She left him and leaped in front. She pirouetted and performed arabesques... Her hear was just too ecstatic and she just wanted to express it to him.. He stood there in awe as she danced to her heart content.. She ran across daintily and jumped up high .. before she could fall on the ground she felt his hands on her waist. He had saved her. He slowly brought her down and kept her as they looked into each other's eyes with intensity. He moved behind and started moving his hands as if to say that he was too cool and he knows it and she laughed. He turned around doing silly dancing. She hugged him from his back. It felt she was breathing life in him. She felt a tear on her hand. He turned and held her hand and they went back to their initial position and started dancing. She realised that he was suffering from the same thing. He had cancer too.

I'll run now, cause this time
Oh, my love is true
Tell me, something I wouldn't do.

They continued to dance. Their foreheads touched.

If that's what you wanted
If that's what you wanted
If that's what you wanted
If that's what you wanted
[x2]

He hugged her then and she hugged him back and they felt each other deeply.

*Music*

He suddenly smiled and held her waist turning her round and round. She smiled thinking he wanted to dance and continued to move with him. She suddenly stopped when she realised that his touch wasn't there anymore. She looked here and there. She slapped her forehead. It had been two months since Reyaansh had left her forever. But whatever time they had spent with each other was beyond everything. It was like there little memories. It was their little infinity.


The End .

Do please leave your reviews :)

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.Shanaya. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
YAY! Me first.
My like button is blown. 😡 But nonetheless, a very big like to this one. 👍🏼
I loved the OS.
It was so beautiful and deep.
Keep writing more of these.

And oh yes! I love the song. The song was "sone pe suhaaga" 😆 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing superbbb

never read like this

its too good

n different dear

nice song selection

thanx for pm

keep writing

take care!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Wonderful OS 👏
Very emotional and deep 😭
Loved how you described each and every part 😊
And nice song too 😊
Keep writing more and more 😃
muskaataarey thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Awsum os grl.. 👍🏼
I luvd d song... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Awesome :')
You left me teary eyed!
Much love ❤️
prtn thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Wonder ful ...rey left meaning? ??

Am going to tead the book
..Deepkriti.. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Wow!!! Diya, its beautiful
Completely awestruck after reading this
Great job girl👏
---angelmaria-- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Wonderful.work girl

Anyway I was reading

Fault in our stars

And u gave me a

Glimpse of it tnx

U really wrote it

Very beautifully

U should keep writting

Like this not only from

Novels but ur own

Imagination also

I am sure it would be awsome

But still tis one was also

Amazing

Tnx for pm

Keep wwritting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Aww.. Such a cute n emotional os...
Loved it..
Keep writing

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