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Hello guys, 🤗

Many of you know me and new members doesn't know me but like many of you I am a small KR Fan!!!!!!!!!! 😉 😉

So after reading so much interesting and brilliant FF/SS/OS from you all here I am giving one of my small effort!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳

Hope u guys will like it and appreciate it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳

Thanks and love u all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Mere Humsafar-KR OS

The day has been started and when sun rays fall on Kria's face she got disturbed. Someone was watching her so longingly, he did not want her sleep to be disturbed by the sun rays so he blocked the path and Kria again got busy in deep sleep.


Tu Hi Haqeeqat Khaab Tu,
Dariya Tu Hi Pyaas Tu
Tu Hi Dil Ki Bekaraari
Tu Sukun Tu Sukun

Jaau Main Abb Jab Jis Jagah Paau Main Tujhko Uss Jagah

Saath Hoke Na Ho Tu Hai Rubaru Rubaru
Tu Hamsafar Tum Hamkadam Tu Hamnawa Mera

He was the luckiest man on earth today when his love was with him in his arms. After a long struggle of past three and a half years more time passed in misunderstandings for each other he got successful to have her in his life once again. All he could see his life in form of her, she is the only person in his life now and she is the whole world for him now.


Aa Tujhe Inn Baahon Mein Bhar Ke
Aur Bhi Kar Loon Main Kareeb

Tu Juda Ho Toh lage Hain Aata Jaata Har Pal Ajeeb,

When he looks in all past three and a half year he finds that as soon as he met her for the first time he felt so special about her in Dehradoon in New Year Eve. The day when he met her first time and gave a new name to her Baatcutter because of her nature of not listening to anyone which always showed him that she is really too much different and unlike rest of the girls who are crazy for him just because he is the great Reyaansh Singhania a dude and heart throb of college.


Iss Jahaan Mein Hai Aur Na Hoga

Mujhsa Koi bhi Khushnaseeb
Tune Mujhko Dil Diya Hai
Main Hoon Tere Sabase Kareeb


"Kria tum kab merei zindagi ban gayi pata hi nahi chala aur aaj mai ek pal ko saans lena bhool sakta hoon par tumhe apni dil ki dhandkano se ek pal k liye bhi door nahi jaane de sakta. Na hi tum kabhi apni dhadhkano se mujhe ek pal k liye door kar sakti ho."


Main Hi Toh Tee Dil Mein Hoon,
Main Hi Saanson Mein Basu

Tere Dil Ki Dhadkano Mein Main Hi Hoon,
Main Hi Hoon

Kria took a turn and hugged him this time tightly and it reminded him all the special moments when she hugged him in different situations when she felt either low or either too happy for any of the reasons. Rey had that cute smile on his face when he remembered those moments and he too hugged her tightly. How Kria supported him and the important thing there was that how much trust Kria had over him and same goes for Rey when she without caring about her future and carrier came to India just to fulfill Rey's dream and she did as much she could.


"Subah ho gayi kya?" she asked cutely.

Once again Rey felt an urge to kiss her and when he looked at her wrapped in the white bed sheet he recalled the day when both of them were coming back to her home after the passionate performance of In Lamho k daman me and she wore that beautiful white dress in Fest. Rey tried his best to stop Kria by telling her the various excuses that why can't they lie down on the road and it's not good for them but Kria and her zidd, she knew very well how to turn a no in to yes.


Kab Bhala Abb Yeh Waqt Gujare
Kuchh Pata Chalta Hi Nahi

Jabase Mujhako Tu Mila Hai
Hosh Kuchh Bhi Apna Nahi

"Yes mam, aur agar aap uth jaayengi to mujhe bahut accha lagega u know." He teased her and in return Kria gave a smile.


"Good morning Rey."


Rey was again bowled to see her face and the innocence on her face which makes him once again woo over her. He can't forget that beautiful night when he for the first time went to propose her on pre Valentines eve. That was the first day when he realized that which type of importance Kria has in his life more than love. First time he was able to identify his feelings for his Kria or his love. This was the most memorable night of his life till the moment she denied him and rejected him. And when he forgot that chapter of his love life completely she returned in to his life giving it a meaning and completing it.


He once again looked at her angelic face and now he was unable to stop himself from admiring Kria's sharp features. Often he found himself loose in her eyes and when he once again saw her pretty face he could not help to kiss those beautiful features of her.


Uff Yeh Teri Palakein Ghani Si,
Chanv Inki Hai Dilnashi
Abb Kise Darr Dhup Ka Hai
Kyun Ki Hai Yeh Mujhpe Bichhi

She felt his touch on her face, "Rey ...kya hai sone do na." and Rey was loving her innocent beauty. Those eyes which opened a few second back and immediately shut reminded him the day when they were disheartened when they came to know that their dance Academy cannot take plac. The moment when Rey hugged her close to his heart making her feel like she is not alone when they were fighting for their Academy. The hug when Rey conveyed her a silent support and a feeling of being an important part of her life. A silent hug who gave a lot of courage to Kria.


Or the day when first time Rey carried her in his arms after their performance of Khuda Jaane when no one of them has expected her to reach on time there. All of them thought that she betrayed once again just like her past when she did the same but she proved them wrong and reached there on time inspite of getting hurt and her injured leg.


Tere Bina Na Saans Loon
Tere Bina Na Main Jiu

Tere Bina Na Ek Pal Bhi Reh Saku, Reh Saku


And now Kria has become his destiny and her breath. How can he forget those days when he found her practicing alone in RH when none of them tried to either talk to her? All of them were so angry with her just because of her betrayal. After the Fest when they danced before Kria left her first time. The music was created and played by their hearts and the rhythms were fantastic. Anyone who can observe them dancing can say they are made for each other.


And the memorable Rose Day when she won the title of Ms. Rose Day, where his Kria looked stunning in that pink dress. He was unable to take off his eyes from his Kria. They spoiled that moment and dance because of utter confusion they had just of Sharon and later both came to know that it was her plan and Rey got angry with his best buddy. He danced with her in fury as he apped her on rose when he didn't even know his mistake. He always used to think how could she trust that he can say such cheap things about her knowing him a bit as he was not that bad by heart.


Tu Hamsafar Tum Hamkadam Tu Hamnawa Mera

Tu Hamsafar Tum Hamkadam Tu Hamnawa Mera


They don't know what has made both of them so close and comfortable in each other's company. Kria sometimes behaved like a typical mature person and other time she was so stubborn like a school going kid. The day when he came to know the fact the main reason of their close bonding of their relation, their eternal love for each other. He came to know the fact at that day why she left them without saying anything to them that it was all because of her mother who didn't want her to dance. She hated dance and when she was on death bed she took her promise back from Kria as she was unable to fight with the guilt that her only daughter in soul less because of her promise giving her responsibility to her sis.


The only person was Swayam who knew her very well that where is she and why she did that. How can he forget those days when he was avoiding Kria because of her mistake which she did unintentionally. He felt a pain remembering those moments when he hurt her without thinking how much she suffered there and how much pain she gone through in absence of her mother. She was broken completely but her massi gave her all support and soon she started to live life normally getting her life in dance back.


He realized the feelings of her when he came to know the truth of Kria's betrayal. He was shocked and hated himself to the core that how can he misunderstood his love? Was his love for her that weak that he was unable to trust her? Is that his so called love for which he felt hurt and rejected? Wasn't it his duty to try to know the secret about Kria's exit. How could he not notice why all of a sudden she started avoiding him? Why was she missing for so much time and her team mates went to her home to bring her and her mother lied that she was not in home.


All the time he was there when her foot got hurt. He took the overall responsibility to make her fine and fit soon and took care of her. He fulfilled her all wishes. The moment she was again about to leave the country when the date of her passport and visa expired he was hurt but hide his emotions as he didn't want to accept his feelings. He still felt that all Kria did to him was wrong. But when she left he missed her like hell. He missed her and felt so much bad when she called n talked to Swayam but not him from NY. He felt rejected once again when he came back to India but avoid talking him. But now all has changed n he can never imagine a single moment without her.


"Kria kaafi der ho chuki hai ab uth jaao na, sab log neeche humara wait kar rahe honge."


"Kaun hai neeche?" she asked.


"Vo sabhi log jo tum se pyaar karte hain."


"Accha, mujhe to laga tha bus aap hi mujh se pyaar karte hain" and without opening her eyes she traced his features with her fingers. Rey was unable to understand what is she doing, but he was enjoying the feeling. He knew that if she would continue that he will not unable to control himself and his desires as her single touch passes current in his body and his mind stops thinking about it. But he knew that his surprise would be spoiled if it continues so trying to divert her attention he said, "So any doubts? I do love u the most but aur bhi log hain yahan who wants to see you soon." He said in her ears.


And now Kria's fingers have reached up to his lips and she immediately placed a peck on his lips and said, "Ok sweetheart as you say." And she left the bed quickly taking her clothes from the wardrobe and Rey was still lost with his close eyes in her touch. She smiled at him and went in washroom. She came back after half an hour looking extremely beautiful in this saari.


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Rey has just entered in room and found her combing her hair in mirror, he was once again bowled by her beauty and just keep on staring at her face. Soon Kria realized his intense gaze at her and blushed. He moved closer to her and pulled her near him to stand.


"Kria..., tumhe pata hai saari me tum kitne kamal dikhte ho?"


Kriaa smiled and looked at her, "Thank god Rey, aaj aap kuch keh to paaye na varna yaad hai na vo din jab aap ne pehli baar shaadi k baad mujhe saari me dekha tha..." And Rey had an instant smile on his face remembering those moments in which he was damn nervous as everyone was around and seeing Kria in that sexy attire was taking his breath away and he so wanted to bring her in their room right than and have her fulfilling his desires.


"Yeah sweety, pata nahi jab tum saamne aati ho na to kya ho jaata hai mujhe. Sab kuch bhool jaata hoon kuch palon k liye mai. Us din na jaane kya hua tha mujhe, ya phir yu kaho ki mujhe achanak se tumhare aise saamne aa jaane k baad kuch palon k liye kuch samajh hi nahi aaya. Jab tum chali gayi tab mujhe ehsaas hua ki mai shayad keh bhi nahi paaya tum se ki us red saari me tum kaise lag rahi thi. Sach kahoon tab bus yahi man kia ki."he stopped and looking at her whistling sang...

Hum tummm, ek kamre me bund hooon...

Aur chaabhi kho jayeee


Kriaa circled her arms around Rey's neck and asked, "Bahut badmassh ho gaye hain aap..", moving closer to him she said huskily, "aur ab?"

"Ab..." And Rey had these words on his lips..

Tu Hi Haqeeqat Khaab Tu,
Dariya Tu Hi Pyaas Tu

Tu Hi Dil Ki Bekaraari Tu Sukun Tu Sukun


This time could not avoid the fact that Rey has sincerity in his voice and this words seem to her coming directly from his heart.


After half an hour Rey and Kria were downstairs where all of their friends were waiting for them.


"Hey Kria tu to aur kamal dikhne lagi hai Rey k saath reh kar baat kya hai?" This was Vishakha.


Kria gave a smile to her and asked, "Oye mera rehne de. Ye bata tera aur Bharat ka kuch hua abhi tak ki bus confuse hi ho dono."


Vishakha gave a big smile and said, "Kal teri baat maan kar maine Bharat ko bol diya seedhe ki agar kuch sochna hai to bolo varna mai aur kahin set ho jaaon."


Kria laughed at her."To kya bola us ne?"


"Bola hai kal mere se milne ko akele me dekhte hain kya hota hai?"


"Par koi kahin dikh nahi raha hai, gaye kahan ye sab?" Kria tried to search everyone.


"Chod na, chal vahan baithe hain. Vaise bhi bahut din ho gaye hain tujh se dher saari baatein kiye hue." And both the ladies engrossed in their talks and after sometime Rey interrupted them.


"So ladies chat haan?" he asked.


"Nahi aisa nahi kuch. Vaise Rey baaki k log kahan hain?"


"Are haan mai to batana hi bhool gaya Kria, baaki k sab us room me hain aur tum ko vahin pe bula rahe hain." Rey informed.


"Vahan kya kar rahe hain sab?" she asked.


"Pata nahi."


"To chaliye, vahi chalte hain." And all three entered in room where complete darkness around was. "Ye sab kya hai, yahan itna andhera kyoun hai?" she was surprised and soon she realized that the door behind her has been closed and no one is with her neither Rey nor Vishakha.


"Rey..", she called him but got no response. Again she called his name, "Rey kahan hain aap,aur Vishakha kahan cahli gayi?"


"Oye to tu bus ab Rey ko hi yaad karegi?" lights were on and Kria saw Bharat standing in front of her.


"Aisa kuch nahi hai Bharat aur tum logon ne yahan andhera kyoun kar rakha tha?" she asked in a single breath and in response she got warm wishes of a song.


"Happy Birthday to you, happy birthday to u...

Happy Birthday to dear Kria, happy birthday to u...


May god bless you, may god bless u with our children..." The last line was added by Rey naughtily. Kria blushed listening this actually Kria didn't say that loudly. He just made his voice able to listen by Kria only but Swayam and Sharon too heard that and both laughed at it hiding their faces.


"Happy birthday Kria, my dear friend." Sharon said hugging her tightly.


"Thanks a lot Mrs. Shekhawat." To which Sharon smiled widely.


"Happy birthday to my best buddy Kria." Swayam said giving her a friendly hug.


"Thank u lover boy." She said winking to which everyone laughed.


"Happy Birthday Kria,"said Vicky and Nilesh in union and Kria laughed responding them.


"Kria," Rey called her, "One more surprise for you." And she saw to people entering in the room and was shocked to see them. Rinni was with them.


"Simmi, Neha; tum dono yahan?" she was surprised and overwhelmed to see them.


"Haan, tumhara itna special birthday tha kaise nahi aate? Rey ne request kiya aur hum aa gaye." Simmi told.


"Aur mujhe to aana hi tha akhir ab mera aur Vicky ka final settlement hone jo jar aha hai." Neha said blushing.


"Wow guys it's indeed superb. Thank u both for coming and making it special for me." She hugged them.


Everyone congratulated Vicky and Neha and the party seems awesome when Rey pulled her a side and said,"Shukriya mere humsafar mere zindagi me aane k liye aur is ko khoobsurat banae k liye." His these words made her more than happy today and she was feeling herself blessed to have such life partner in her life. Life has become complete for her on her this birthday which gifted her Rey already and a lot of blessings of her parents and love of her friends and soon their child.


Jaau Main Abb Jab Jis Jagah
Paau Main Tujhko Uss Jagah

Saath Hoke Na Ho Tu Hai Rubaru Rubaru

Tu Hamsafar Tum Hamkadam Tu Hamnawa Mera

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was such an amazing os
Kria n rey ki poori kahani fresh hogayi
N the way rey felf
His pov
All arr really sweet
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ur this work took me back to the memory lane of kriyaansh story
b'fully described... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww... that was sooo cute...
i seriously got all those memories.. back :)


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Originally posted by: kriapatel

It was such an amazing os

Kria n rey ki poori kahani fresh hogayi
N the way rey felf
His pov
All arr really sweet



Hi dear thanks a lot that u liked my small effort. 🤗🤗🤗
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thanks dear 🤗🤗🤗
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thanks 🤗🤗🤗
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Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

ur this work took me back to the memory lane of kriyaansh story
b'fully described... loved it



thank u that we are able to recall those moments.
🤗 🤗 🤗
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thanks 🤗🤗🤗
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thanks dear 🤗🤗🤗

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