SwaRon OS:A walk to remember

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GlamourousPearl

@GlamourousPearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

KHOOBSURAT...BEAUTIFUL is DA word...fosure...
Da walk,deir thoughts...Sharon's fear of loosing him...very well written...
I loved how u brought out DA unpredictable lover boy...lovely...most beautiful was DA last part...happy familyyy...
X10000 thumbsup...

:),...thanks for pming such awesome work..

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

nice os
cute one
at first i couldnt believe it and reread then the ultracute twist u brought in was just PERFECT
thanks 4 d pm

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Vishi-

@Vishi-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Amazing OS...
I was like how can Swayam do this?
but he was manipulating her 😉
❤️ed it..

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Fabulous OS Chitra..
Loved it totally <3
somewhere i felt that it would turn out this way with Swayam proposing her but nevertheless i felt so pleased while reading it :)
you are improving heaps with every work. i dont think i can comment on your quality henceforth. you have surpassed yourself :)
keep writing :D
Nishi

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bhumika gaur

@minimini66

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

heyyy girl 😛

u write beautifully 😳

the way their emotions were described ... awesome 👏

looking forward for some more os's from you 👍🏼

MINI

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Diya

@diyaswaronholic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Am not commenting big one dii

Me gussa with u

Bas will say it was awesome

Hmmph😡

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Oh! So I finally made a place. I finally sneaked out some time to review this one.! Well, Is there even a bit that I could even think of some drawbacks about this.. I wouldn't be able to recollect. Because this one was a pure bliss to my eyes. To me.. to my reading experience after such a long time. it seems ages that I haven't read something. Though that isn't the case. But it does seem so.

But this walk to remember was a perfect blend of emotion, fear, anxiety, nervousness, and so much more that even words fall short to fit for a description for the same.

You surely have the talent to hold the readers with the amazing write ups.

Keep writing! Amazing JOB.

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