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riddhima.r.

@riddhima.r.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: -bLEu98-

<font color="#ff0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">thank you so much Riddhima for your comment. And yes,the next update will be up very very soon.😛</font>

😳 😳 😳

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

lovely update..
so it was all planned...
nd must say.. well planned..
sharon noticed him that well...
wow...
update soon this time plz...
nd do pm me

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Rini

@-bLEu98-

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
lovely update..
so it was all planned...
nd must say.. well planned..
sharon noticed him that well...
wow...
update soon this time plz...
nd do pm me

hey thanks, for waiting around to read this update and my ff as well. I'm experiencing some issues with I-F, hence pm-ing is difficult. 😒 I'll try to, but as of now, no luck. When I update next, I'll edit the title and try to make it as conspicuous as possible.

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@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

wow

too gud

i loved both the chp dey were awesome

sharon noticed swayam

i think she z in love with swayam

do update soon

shini

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Saal bhar baad update diya hai,Have to read from starting again..Till then reserved..

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Khizar Ali

@Khizar_SWARON

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Okay well I never saw it before but just read both the chapters and they are so great and superb, uff the 1st chapter from Kriya and Rey's challenge and convincing Swayam for the challenge to the 2nd part where he was in Bharat's garage trying to call him but in vain Bharat knew his intention and did not want to talk to him as he might back out having even one chance as Swayam imagined this day like he would talk to her by not manipulating her as Bharat did some work in her car to make it bad enough for Sharon to go to the garage and get it fix where Swayam will do his part hahahaha

The blunder by him for talking about the weather and then the shock to him that she noticed him from the start

Great story hope the next update is soon and it's really superb