The Proposal- 3 Shots (Updated Part 2- Page 6)

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Angel_ishq

@Angel_ishq

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

awesome 😃

waiting for next update...

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Sonia

@princessSonia

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

well well Hillarious wuld be

an understatement my dear...🤣🤪🤣

my stomachs aching wid

all the laughter all thnks to u...😆

awesum..

i mean the parties name...🤪

i want an update soon plz..

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sky_fighter

@sky_fighter

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

i would get back to u when i stop laughing
that would be within a day or two

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mir_mishti

@mir_mishti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

🤣

It was hilarious..😆

being a KR fan I'm always found of agrassive KR & in your story Kriyansh posess that touch..😳

Your story seems realistic.. & I loved it.😃

I wonder from where u think such names..😆

Rambharose College😆

Angutha Chaap Party👍🏼...😛...🤣

Khao Aur Khane Do😆

Sab Chor Bhai Bhai 😃

Kamchor Students' Association..🤣

Loved it seriously..😆

Edited by mir_mishti - 11 years ago

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

OMG...
this is damn hillarious dear...
yar tell me ine thing, from where you got these names?..
I m laughing like maniac...
bechara swayam, has to propose shar,
aakhir bhn ki izzat ka swal h...
update soon n plz pm me..

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jahnavi

@Jahnavi_KRAS

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Hmmm...

I DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY !!

Stupendous fantabulously fantastic

Amazing...super fun :):):)

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

OH MY FREAKING GOD!

This was so much fun to read, and an awesome concept. Loved it.. :D :D

Please continue sooner.

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tara_vm

@tara_vm

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

gud one... liking forward to reading further...pls do continue very soon...

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

That was awesome! No wait it was HILARIOUS!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣

Those party names 🤣 Kaam chor party , angutha chap party, khao aur khane do, Sab chor bhai bhai...god seriously idea kaha se aya! damn good!

I still can't believe what I read...parties, paper leaks, equal share...Rey and Kria doing that...uff!

Bechara Swayam...uskeliya Kria sachme rani lakshmi bhai bangayi hai 🤣 🤣

Waiting to see how our Shy swayam gathers confidence to propose the Diva!

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muzzy_sk

@muzzy_sk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Ye kya tha behen? XD

From the point of fight to the 'Rambharose' college [ The first time I read the name, I thought I had mis-spelled it!] to the Party names! Kahan se aaya ye idea?!. Jo bhi ho..mast hai! :D.

Swayam was saved fron the ragging because of Kriya's position and power! XD. So looking forward to SwaRon and KriYansh here.
You gotta update this phast and PM!.

Anyhoo HOW are you're works so distinctly apart? I mean the genres and styles are so different and yet all of them turned out be great. You should consider writing as a career again, well apart from bus-conducter- thats way to cool! :D

-S&K.