The Proposal- 3 Shots (Updated Part 2- Page 6) - Page 3

Originally posted by: muzzy_sk

Ye kya tha behen? XD

From the point of fight to the 'Rambharose' college [ The first time I read the name, I thought I had mis-spelled it!] to the Party names! Kahan se aaya ye idea?!. Jo bhi ho..mast hai! :D.

Swayam was saved fron the ragging because of Kriya's position and power! XD. So looking forward to SwaRon and KriYansh here.
You gotta update this phast and PM!.

Anyhoo HOW are you're works so distinctly apart? I mean the genres and styles are so different and yet all of them turned out be great. You should consider writing as a career again, well apart from bus-conducter- thats way to cool! :D

-S&K.

Originally posted by: austen_TanHa

OMG!! this is hilarious🤣 🤣..this is a masterpiece rini🤣

everything from the names of the parties to the characterisation is a laugh riot. i love how you've kept all the characters true to their personalities on the show but twisted the circumstances to bring out the comedic contrasts among them. kriya is aggressive and passionately impulsive, rey is the cool customer, sharo😉n, the narcissistic diva and swayam the nerdy paplu...all the traits that made these characters so watchable in 2011. special commendation for neha's 'behen ki izzat ki raksha' line. in one line you've shown both the innocence and ability to manipulate that made her so lovable. 👏

this is fantastic..looking forward to reading abt swayam's proposal. i have a feeling this is one bet rey is about to lose

Originally posted by: -Blind.Dance-

Okay then update the second part I will read it too ( considering the fact I always skip SS parts :P ) but isme I wanna see how it goes and will be waiting for part 3 !!😳

Originally posted by: Kunta_tanha

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Originally posted by: -bLEu98-

You do the same Kittu. You don't read KR portions in my other works. 😳