SwaRon SS- Clandestine - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

28

Views

5k

Users

13

Likes

92

Frequent Posters

SanskritiS thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Interesting start
A lot of suspense
Rockingbhardwaj thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#12
suspense...
great...
krisha left reyam in a haste...
why..
update soon...
thanks 4 d pm
Nirvana15 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Chapter 2

Sharon got home and locked herself in the room. She placed her bag on the bed and darted towards her study table. After fidgeting with a few books and magazines she opened the drawer and took out the latest magazine of Cosmopolitan and turned to page number 50.

"Sanjana Malhotra - The Diva who dared to be different." Sharon read the headline aloud and then scanned the article.

"Sanjana Malhotra was recently named as the CEO of Panache, the biggest fashion house in New York. A single mother Sanjana dotes on her daughter Natasha and claims that her mother is her pillar of strength. Sanjana believes that she sees herself in her daughter, the same courage to be different and the same conviction."

Sharon shut the magazine and threw it on the floor. She had done it several times since she had bought the copy from the stands. She shut her eyes.

Several miles away Natasha shut the magazine she was reading smiling to herself thinking "Nani will be impressed."

She was staring at the picture on the cover of the magazine now. It was her mother Sanjana Malhotra. She thought about the woman whom she loved the most in the world. Someone who was different and so strong willed. She was proud of her upbringing and her mother, but why didn't she mention her?

Natasha had questions and she needed the answers. She looked up when Jenny her mother's PA told her that she could now go in as her mother was done with all the important calls. She stood up placing the magazine on the table and took a deep breath. She was going to face a woman who was not in a good mood. The worst part was that the reason for her foul mood was her.

Swayam was pacing up and down waiting for Sharon to call back. He knew she was upset about something, but didn't know what. He had had enough, he picked up his shirt and walked out of his room.

Kriya on the other hand was calling a number but couldn't get through. She took a deep breath and murmured tp herself, "Universe ji! Bass sab theek kar do. Jo kaam hona hai bas woh ho jaaye."

Natasha knocked on the door and heard a faint yet stern voice, "Come in."
shaaz23 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#14
I really liked it
Plz pm me when u update next
armaanasadksg thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#15
I loved it Plz pm me when u update next
HSFA thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Awesome start. Loved the concept.
Its filled with a lot of suspense.
Continue soon and do pm me.
sweetydiyafrien thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#17
i finish reading your concept asnd both the chapter together... it was fabulous and brilliant
and there is lots of mysteries and truth hidden which hope will be reveal as update ...
do continue soon and pm me
Rockingbhardwaj thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#18
again full of suspense...
great update..
update sion
n plz do pm me
Nirvana15 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Chapter 3
Natasha knocked on the door and heard a faint yet stern voice, "Come in."

Natasha opened the door and saw her mother standing near the window staring out towards the skyline of New York City. Sanjana Malhotra's plush office was located on the 118th floor of a corporate business park. The view was the best part about this office, one could see the entire city from here.

Natasha walked in taking one last look at the cellphone and putting it on silent mode, her mother didn't like calls interrupting important conversations and today's conversation was very important for both of them.

"So how was your day?", Sanjana asked her when she heard her footsteps. She turned around and smiled and sat in her chair motioning Natasha to sit across the table.

Sanjana hated having conversations with her daughter in the office. She liked to chat with her over dinner or a cup of coffee no matter however busy she was. But today maa had called Sanjana telling her that Natasha had called her up to have a quick chat with her. After finishing her call with her mother Sanjana was wondering about the conversation when Natasha had called asking her for her time. Sanjana called her to office to chat up with her.

"Great mom. Met Jazz and the gang over breakfast and now we plan to go out for coffee in the evening." Natasha said dryly. She was a little worried as she knew her mother a little too well. Sanjana Malhotra never asked her how was her day! She just knew it that it would go awesome. Her mother was indeed in a bad mood.

Sanjana picked up the magazine kept on her desk and looked up to Natasha and said, "Are you sure you want to do this?"

"Yes mom. I am very sure about this", said Natasha

"Ok. you are an adult and I cannot stop you from doing anything. It is choice that you make. I will put you on to your father in Mumbai. He should know that his daughter has become big enough to take her own decisions." Sanjana smiled picking up her phone.

"Mom I am going there on a student's exchange program for god's sake! Will you stop over-reacting?."

"I am not over-reacting. I don't think this matter even deserves my reaction!." Spat out Sanjana with a firm voice.

Natasha knew this was coming and was prepared for an emotional outburst. She had spoken to naani and convinced her to call her mother and convince her to come to India. But now she thinks it was a wrong decision. She should have spoken to her mother herself and tried to convince her. This was heading no where and she loved her mother too much to hurt her.

Sanjana softened a little when she saw the emotion on Natasha's face change.

"Natasha I love you and it is just that I don't want to lose you. I have lost a lot in that country and I can't afford to lose you too. If you think you can survive on your own for 6 months in India you can go. But only on one condition."

Natasha was shocked that her mother agreed to it so easily. But she was not too sure what the condition was.

"Mom I love you too and you know it. It is my dream to go to India. My birth place and this is a great opportunity. That's about it. I am ready to listen to any condition you put forth."

Swayam was standing below Sharon's window and was wondering whether he should go through the door or the window.

"Door se chala jaata hoon. Window bahut predictable ho jaayega! But hold on door se jaane mein surprise factor nahin rahega. Window se hi chala jaata hoon."

Rey on the other hand was a step further! He had already climbed through Kriya's window using the pipe!
Rockingbhardwaj thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#20
nice update yar..
sanjana is a strict as well as a loving mother too...
what swayam is gonna face in sharon's room?
uodate soon..
thanks 4 d pm

Related Topics

Channel V Dil Dosti Dance thumbnail

Posted by: Mystic_Muse · 4 months ago

Hello, I don't know what came into i pen it down. Hope you like it. COVER BY @EXOTICDISASTER It was supposed to be just another evening at...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".