SwaRon SS- Clandestine

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Nirvana15

@Nirvana15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Guys I have been a silent reader on the forum. However thought of getting myself registered and writing a Swaron SS.

Concept Note:- Clandestine

The story begins with the entry of Mrs. Raiprakash. However in my story Sharon's parents are divorced and Sharon's mom is based out of Delhi and New York. Sharon has a younger sister Natasha Raiprakash who lives with her mom. Sharon and Natasha have not met in years but however know of eachother's existence.

The story will focus on Sharon, Swayam, Natasha, Kriya, Rey and the gang.

As the story progresses a lot of details will be revealed about Sharon's relationship with her mother and sister and also Natasha and Kriya's equation.

The main focus will be on SwaRon and Kriyaansh and how both Swayam and Rey help their respective girlfriends deal with new developments in their lives.

Please do let me know if you would like me to continue...

Cheers!!

Index

Character Sketch- Page 1
Chapter 1- Page 2

Chapter 2- Page 2

Chapter 3- Page 3
Chapter 4- Page 4

Edited by Nirvana15 - 11 years ago

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JensenVruShan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Interesting concept, do continue it

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armaanasadksg

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Posted: 11 years ago

loved the concept pls PM me

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apy_swaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome concept... Seems different...

Plss continue would love to read how the story progresses

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pooja123456

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice idea...
Do continue and update soon

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Nirvana15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Character Sketch:-

Sanjana Malhotra/Raiprakash

A businesswoman, a diva who has made it big in the fashion industry. Lives with her younger daughter Natasha in New York. Her business often takes her to India. New Delhi is home to her. Loves her daughter a lot, however is not too keen on Natasha coming to India. Has a secret lodged in her heart and wants to keep her daughter away from it.

Will she be successful in shielding her family from that dark secret or will it tear her life apart?

Natasha Raiprakash

A bubbly 18 year old girl. Is a tomboy unlike her glamorous mother. An all rounder Natasha or Tashu as her close friends call her is a basketball player and a dancer.

She is all set to enter St Louis College, Mumbai on a student exchange program against her mother's wishes. She is here on a mission to reunite with her estranged sister and unveil a secret that tore her family apart.

Will she succeed? Will her sister accept her?

The characters of Sharon Swayam Rey Kriya and the gang are the same as D3

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Nirvana15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you guys for the encouraging response.

Will try and update the first chapter as soon as possible.

Cheers!!

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

Great concept continue soon..😊

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Manisha Bhardwaj

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Posted: 11 years ago

interesting concept n cs...
plz continue n pm me..

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Nirvana15

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Posted: 11 years ago

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There you guys go! Hope you like it!

Chapter 1

Abandoned Corridor

"Ok dad, but I really don't understand why is this even important? I mean do I need to do this?" sighed Sharon over a phone call as Swayam watched her intently.

"Fine! I do not wish to argue about it. If you have decided I am sure you have given it some serious thinking. I am in the middle of something right now will call you when I get home in the evening. Bye." Sharon didn't wait for her father to respond and cut the call, her eyes red with rage.

All this while Swayam stared at Sharon wondering if it would be right to probe her about the phone call especially when she was so upset. He thought about it for sometime and then just moved from his spot a little closer to her and planted a kiss on her right cheek. They were in the abandoned corridor and he could afford to get a little cozy with his girlfriend.

Sharon was taken by surprise and the cute gesture made her blush.

"Swayam, kya karr rahe ho tum?"

"Apni girlfriend ke saath romance." quipped Swayam, coming a little closer to Sharon.

"Swayam I need to go . There is something urgent that has come up. I will call you in the night. " Sharon picked up her bag and ran out leaving the door open and Swayam wondering.

Rehearsal Hall

Rey and Kriya were setting a routine for the gang.

"Kriya mujhe lagta hai ki humein zyada lifts include nahin karne chahiye."

"Hmmm..."

"Kriya? Kya hua tumhara dhyaan kidhar hai?"

"Haan... sorry Rey woh main kuch soch rahi thi. Aap kuch bol rahe the?"

"Main toh kab se bol hi raha hoon! Listen is everything ok? Main dekh raha hoon tum subah se thodi lost ho."

"Woh kuch nahin Rey. Actually mujhe maasi ko call karna tha kal raat mein aur main bhool gayee. So..." Kriya trailed off.

"Ok. toh ismein upset hone walli kya baat hai? Aaj baat karr lo maasi se."

Kriya looked a little restless. "Rey mujhe kuch kaam hai main aap se baad mein milti hoon."

Kriya picked up her bag and dashed out of the rehearsal hall.

Rey took a minute to register that Kriya just left in a hurry and when he did all he could utter was, "Kriya meri baat toh..."

New York- 4 a.m.

A cellphone kept on the side table blinked and the automated voice announced 'You have got one new message"

It was loud enough to wake up Natasha who was expecting the message at this hour. She woke up and checked her cellphone to confirm that she had indeed received the message and it was not a dream.

She smiled as she checked the message and muttered to herself, "One step closer! Hold on to your horses Tashu and go back to sleep. We have a long day tomorrow."

Natasha kept her cellphone aside and dozed of peacefully. She was finally going to Mumbai. A first in 18 years and she had mixed emotions and the consequences of her actions could wait until morning!!