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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awesome OS...Loved it

U described Sharon's worries beautifully and the way Swayam's love freed her from those fears was beautifully written

U definitely have a thing about expressing emotions...totally enjoyed reading it...keep writing more

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JensenVruShan

@JensenVruShan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Terrific update. Loved the OS

Sharon's loss and pain and Swayam's concern and love were beautifully penned

Keep writing

Thanks for the PM

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sonali saraswat

@cutelove

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Amazing !! dear..u wrote it so beautifully .. All emotions n feelings were actually written flawlessy...brillant work...enjoyed thoroughly...do write more..

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

WOW..this is an amazing piece of writing..seriously..
the way you wrote down the emotions were simply beautiful..
loved the way Swayam was there with Sharon during her hard times..
simply amazing..

P.S. are there any underlying emotions in the death of Sharon's mom? :P

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Nishi.Kss
WOW..this is an amazing piece of writing..seriously..
the way you wrote down the emotions were simply beautiful..
loved the way Swayam was there with Sharon during her hard times..
simply amazing..

P.S. are there any underlying emotions in the death of Sharon's mom? :P

Thanks :)

Answer to your PS: Well not really. I wish I could have had those intentions. But this concept is something that I had thought of writing months back. Even before the buzz of Sharon's mother entering.

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Thanks :)

Answer to your PS: Well not really. I wish I could have had those intentions. But this concept is something that I had thought of writing months back. Even before the buzz of Sharon's mother entering.

ohk.. :)
well i was just wondering.. :P

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farryy...

@farryy...

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow...ur os was really very good...👍🏼

Loved the way u described sharon's pain nd fear nd how swayam helped her overcome it

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LittleBitOfAlexis

@LilBitOfAlexis

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Woah !! You penned down the whole OS so beautifully <3
Loved the concept !!
Amazing work !!

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

A different OS from you.
It was touching, and clearly portrayed how much Swayam cares for her
and how much he loves her.
Sharon, like this was different to picturize, but her character had that darkness and the brighter side too.
A very good Os, shenzi :)