SwaRon OS: Sensuously Haunted - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Shennzziii! :D :D :D

Oh my goddd! You deserve an award for this piece of writing! :D <3
Just brilliant. I actually got goosebumps reading it. :) So beautifully written. So intense. So passionate. You should definitely write more on Swaron. You are amazing :)

Waise, i don't know how but i unknowingly played Laal Ishq song while reading this. I swear i didn't realize until i finished reading half of it.. :P And when that line in ur OS came..."Incidents of previous night"...in the song it was "Ye kaali raat jakad loon"...i'm like what a connection.
I know i'm blabbering a lot. Par u know me na...I'm so excited with anything that has to do with Swaron.
This is definitely Swaron's song. <3

Amaazing OS, again. Please please keep writinggg many more OSs ,SSs and FFs on Swaron. <3
Love you.

Edited by -Snehaa- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
different and scary yet very beautiful
i liked the way u have described sharon's beauty
and swayam attraction towards her
it was amazing

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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
it was an awesum update
super spl n intense
you Made that sensuous moment of two lips meeting
explode out of the page
ensuring that i was panting for more,
desperate to turn the page and melt into your words
you Wrote the scene with as much detail
tat i cud actually picture the environment.
Reflecting parts of the environment
as facets of the characters inner turmoil n uncertainty
you made me feel this tension tat heightens
the urgency and immediacy of the scene
tat it made my own heart race faster
take a bow gal for writing sumthing
tat emerges so directly from the heart.
i know i m just rembling like crazy
but u cant blame me can u
do rite more 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Sensuously haunted os😳
Laal ishq have the same effect on all swaron fans.N this is the outcome of the effect☺️
Loved this os
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Loved it a lot. Different yet appealing!
Too good. 👏 The reason given at the end was just simply amazing. Logical and apt.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
so sweet and lovely...
unexpected end...

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