The lovely reunion- Vrimar TS *completed* Writer's NOTE PG14 - Page 4

nice cnspt and perfectly written, bonding b/w ranveer and vrinda was shown beautifully, small argumental debats b/w amar and vrinda was also nice.

awesome as usual di...
loved it..
ab jaldi jaldi update karing.. 😃

Originally posted by: ONLYTAAREY

Amazing start...loved your concept...update soon...

thanks updating soon😊

Originally posted by: princess_tara

wow yar vrimar ts
awesome start
do continue soon

thanks dear😃
will update soon

Originally posted by: anaghchavan

a very different concept.

update soon and pm me

thanks
will pm you for sure😊

Originally posted by: ..Neha..

Love it!
Vrinda posing & amar spoiling it!
Continue soon..
Eager!

glad you liked it neha😊
will continue this soon

Originally posted by: poorni_vishali

nice concept yr

vrinda and ranveer were so nice

snd vrimar were so cute

thanks a lot

Originally posted by: yoyoaishwarya

wow!!! hyee meri vd maddo u back 😭 😭 😭 actually kushi ke aasu hai tumhe vapus dekhker, vah !!! kamal kar diya vd ko yashraj ki heroine bana diya, ranvir bg time flirt okk, now amar not bad , waiting 4 next part sooon , n u said ki Hume tumhare os ki ends acche nahi lagte not right, recent vala taj valaos tooo, good n perrrfect end , soo, update karo aur apne chote dimag per jor mat do , as hume tumhare dil or dimag se abhi bahout kaam hai, okk bye

arre ro mat...😆 samajh nahi aa raha khushi ke aanso hai ya gam ke😉😆
Oo next line padi khushi ke aanso hai😃 To phir theek hai😆
Kamal karte ho pandey ji!! Mere dimag mein to ye sab toofan chalta hi rahta hai😛
You like my os endings, great😃
mein apne dimag ko band kar dungi to update kaha se aaegi

Originally posted by: anatomy_nerd

abb kya kahu iss ke baare mein??
Ok i loved how u described vrinda's part...mashaallah kya khayali pulau pakati hai aap, vah maja aagaya
Vrimar convo n selfie part was nice
If possible then plz do include a song in next part...!!

kya kahu matlab😕
khushi ke maare nahi samajh aa raha, ya itni kharab hai ki samajh nahi aa raha
mujhe bachpan se hi pulau bahot pasand hai😆
tu to meri judwa behen hai, mein already next part mein song include karne ka plan kar chuki hu😉

Originally posted by: pinal_TaaRey

Nice concept
And superb update
Update soon

thanks
will update soon😊😊