Concealed Desire- A Reyaansh OS ||Happy BirthDay Deeth|| - Page 2

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

happy bday dee...🤗..
ankii...commenting on ur work after so long...i missed doing so...bt circumstances u see... And I missed your comments badly too..😭
such an old phase nd u relived it...dat too so mesmerisingly...i bet only u can do that..u always go out of the box...i dont understand y i am always surprised...??? aww, me ish flattered..😳😳
the rage..pain..helpless feeling..jealousy...nd second thoughts on bringing another quilt...marvellous...guilt for hurting her ...both directly nd indirectly...dat is rey...u said u cant understand him...girl u do understand him...atleast i think so... nahi re, he is bohot compleca😕
loved this another masterpeice of yours...good job

Originally posted by: reyaditi

its not lame...its ausome...
lovd it...
beautiful writing...
hospital track again...nyc...I personally lovd that track after Kriyas return...coz it showed Reys true concern for Kriya...
sooo very well done girl...

Originally posted by: FrozenTeardrops

It was beautiful...
I loves the way you described Rey's emotions...
The way you compared the two girls in his life was mind blowing...
God I'm in loved with this...
Please write more and more...

Originally posted by: Painted_Sky

Dare u call it lame! It was so beautiful.
the way u described every feeling. It was truly beautifulll.
and u know what, even though I hate d3 storyline, i still loved it.. so damn muchhh!
And the last line :') shittt.. anoher quilt! The way you connected d stry, amazing man.
The confusion amongst his thoughts, the way he tried to relive moments and makehimself hate her, everything was penned beautifully!
i love u fr thisss! <3

Originally posted by: So_Naley

Reserved! :)

Unreserved!
Whoa Anky!That was intense!
The desire and longing that Rey felt for Kriya was very well captured by you in this one!

Also,what I felt was that it was such a Complete OS!
As in you portrayed every bit of emotion he felt in such a messed up phase of his life!

The pangs of anger he felt towards Swayam,his bestie,maybe out of jealousy or bcoz he felt betrayed and they way he tried to counter his own feelings by restating Swayam's defence...so beautifully put!

The feeling of responsibility he felt for NiCky's actions just shows what a pure soul he is!

The best part was the beginning!
It was awesome!The way you described the ever-so-charming-Singhania and his charismatic presence!
Sure made me drool! 😆