Changes and more!! (SwaRon post)

Okay, so a scene was given today. Or at least Ameeta tried to give a scene today. Yes. Appreciated. Really appreciated... We don't know whether she gave out of compulsion or because of realizing that SwaRon have to move ahead.. I guess the second one makes me happy although it's utopian so I'll go with the second option!

I came online and the first thing I see happy faces everywhere saying awww Swayam was so caring Swayam was sooo concerned etc, but I'm someone who believes in substance, REAL substance... And being a science student, I have that tendency to go in depth of a situation, not only me, everyone wants to. Because in terms of characterization and realistic scenes illogical stuff won't work!

What I expected in the least from today's scene was reason. A reason to every action. Why this happened, why that happened etc.

1) Is THAT what you call intimacy? My definition of intimacy is something different and for god's sake Swayam and Ruhi scene was much more "intimate" than this pathetic llhh which didn't even make sense. Okay yeah, it was cute, it was kind of intense, but it didn't make sense. Neither was it intimate. Swayam said tum bohot achi lag rahi ho, and he has probably given her a compliment after ages and did not even say khoobsurat??? Which he ALWAYS uses?? Huh? My definition of romance , of intimacy is wayyy larger than this crapfest . Yes, that was crap, it lacked SwaRonish essence I don't know why. It would have been normal for any couple -_- So yeah, even SwaRon eye locks are different.. This scene didn't have the SwaRonish feel and for me it's a fault on the writers and the director's part. Sorry, but it didn't make even the slightest sense according to me.

2) Sharon's asthma. Fine, she had an attack. It's cool! But later on Swayam mentioned that she has attacks during the time of stress... How is it possible? She was stressed even when Swayam was unwell, she was stressed even when Ruhi had challenged her, she was stressed even when Ruhi threatened to leak her hacking secret out... And her emotions didn't look like stress at all.. Instead she seemed confident... Still she had an attack??? She was confident like 10 seconds before and 10 seconds later she starts suffocating, which I have to admit Vrushika Mehta did BRILLIANTLY. But again, her attack didn't make sense at such a point of time. Had it been in the midst of some intense argument, I'd loved it... And yeah, I'm really really happy that the CVs are making use of Sharon's asthma which was not used in the past few months... So I guess that's the only good thing.

3) Swayam!!! Yesss like others even I loved when he said no to Ruhi for staying with Sharon... It was amazing, it was swayamish... ^_^ And like all others this got a smile to my face... My main concern is WHY wasn't there a monologue? I know the scene isn't over yet but I think there'd be NO monologue tomorrow either because letting SwaRon fans down is the CVs best time pass!!

4) Swayam again. Caring Swayam always carried Sharon's asthma pump with him. Where was it today? Now I don't need lame excuses like maybe he didn't carry because she didn't have asthma because both of us know that these kinds of attacks can't be predicted or prevented! And even Swayam does... He carried it ALWAYS... Why didn't he carry it today??? Wasn't that out of his caring image???

All in all, I'm disappointed today. Now my only hope is tomorrow's SwaRon scene. Let's hope it doesn't lead to a disappointment.

P.S I'm not cribbing. Taking out flaws will help in making future SwaRon scenes better. I hope you understand and work on it. I'll appreciate you if you impress me and draw flak from your work when needed.

agree with all the points. god cvs are doing so much carelessness in writing SwaRon. High time they start writing SwaRon authentically. God that crap of ruhi Swayam was done in a close way but this pathetic llhh is termed as intimacy??? ridiculous.

And yes Swayam should be carrying an inhaler as he knows she does gets attacks while under stress. And situations like attacks cant be predicted. We have known Swayam carrying an inhaler with him. Why was it not shown that way? we always expect Swayam to be there as his protector and cautious than general in asthma case. No monologues is also annoying now.

The only good point cvs thought of bringing aasthma track but shuruwaath mein hi ithne loopholes.

nowadays swaron scene though there bt really lacks dat basic essence n dis result comesout wen writers dnt put it on perfectly..had dwy been focussed over swayams character n swaron such basic elements need to be reminded every now n den..fr monologue it has become ritual dat cvs will try to avoid it no matter wt ..
bt its need of d hour...swayams very elemental qualities r put on stake..his nt carrying inhaler s something major .i really want cvs to.look into.dis matter.

Bangon post Mihi. I completely agree with you. Basically both the scenes were written half heartedly it was just Vrushan's acting that made Scenes good else everything was lacking. They gave asthma scene for the sake of it to show Sharon's asthma in front of Ruhi that's it. The main feel was absent in the scene.

No asthma attack , when swayam was lying on the hospital's bed

Vrushan are both brilliant actors but sadly they can't do a damn thing about dialogues or script.

Originally posted by: Jensenrocks

Vrushan are both brilliant actors but sadly they can't do a damn thing about dialogues or script.

There is absolutely no sense in what they are showing for SS or for D3 as a whole.

They only showed Asthma coz Ruhi has to find out and use it against Sharon otherwise it doesn't exist.

I agree the way it was shown was just rubbish so many more major things have happened with Sharon but those didn't trigger her condition but some stupid dialogue from psycho Ruhi gets her all hyper

and the biggest blunder was how casually Swayam is sharing Sharon biggest weakness with this nobody character, Swayam is gonna suffer badly for this.

About Swayam not having a pump on him like before , I dont know how to react to that

Thumbs down to CV, she truly is brainless 👎🏼

so basically,

Yesterdays epi was a👎🏼 with a very lame script...sharon ko achanak se kese attack aaya? pehle bhi ruhi ne bahut kuch kaha hai sharon ko tab kuch nai hua..moreover swayam not having inhaler nd swayam says to ruhi abt her asthama...agar ruhi ko sharon ke asthma ke bareme batana tha then their r many ways to show..which would have been looked little realistic