Restart Of A Love Story|| A Kriyaansh One Shot|| Based On Precap.

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k.sweet

@k.sweet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

amazing os

superb one

n loved d way u described thier feelings

thanks for the pm

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Mruganka and Anushka

@Arshalicious

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Simply beautiful and heart-touching os 👏

Loved the way u have portrayed both of their emotions so well

Rey is obviously shattered, he has had his heart shattered and smashed so many times 😭

Personally I loved Kria's reaction more bcoz Rey's feelings are obvious but Kria's point of view needs to be described properly or else she'll appear as a ruthless heart-breaker

You two have done a great job with that...the way she feels that she doesn't deserve him has been written about so well

Amazing work overall 😃

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Gis...shakti

@Gis...shakti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Superb os
Plzzz...ek aur part..
Mujhe happy ending chahiye... 😊

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David

@arshafan94

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

A bit sad but very nicely written

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Rupanshi Garg

@PunjabiKudi_17

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

OH MY GODNESS.. 🥱

Itna bada jhtka ek surprise OS.. Waah..

Jhappiaann... 🤗

Coming to the OS.. 😉

Yar sad vala kyu likhte ho..
Rula dia fir se mere ko...
😭

Daya krlia karo mere upar thodi si..

Baki the OS is super fab.. 👏 👏

Mannu tu to hai hi best aj to Aditi ne b sone par suhage ka kaam kia.. 😆

I Hate Sad Endings.. 😭
Jyda e rona rona ho gya na..
To abi big vali smile.. 😃 😆

Jeeti raho dono balike.. 😳

Sada aisa likhti raho.. 😛

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Mahnaz Gul

@FrozenTeardrops

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Sada sad likhti raho... Okay 😃

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Rupanshi Garg

@PunjabiKudi_17

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: FrozenTeardrops
Sada sad likhti raho... Okay 😃

Hayee na na aisa nai bola maine.. 😲

Hmesha romantic vala likhti rho.. 😳

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Mahnaz Gul

@FrozenTeardrops

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: PunjabiKudi_17

Hayee na na aisa nai bola maine.. 😲

Hmesha romantic vala likhti rho.. 😳

Pata hai mazaak tha...

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Bhumi06

@Bhumi06

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Very nicely portrayed emotions...jst luvly!!! 😊

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

beautiful os!!! loved the part when rey held her wrist,and tears were flowing from kriya's eyes!!!!!! they both love each other soo muchh!!!!! then kriya was hurting herself,then rey is also hurt,they r soo sad but one thing i like u guys didnt stop the story their rather its just a beginning,so loved that!!!!!!!😊