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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

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srujana

@srujanahpvr

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice os
the emotions are potrayed well
good job

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Pray_For_Peace

@Pray_For_Peace

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Posted: 11 years ago

this was really good

loved the pace and continuity and you expressed the emotions so beautifully😊

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aditi yaar __/\__
Charan kaha h aapke?
Itne dino baad darsha diye.. But really.. Bang on yaar..
Loved d os..
Thoda senti senti types tha..
But mast tha..
Loved it..

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akshara

@--Akshu--

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Posted: 11 years ago

I was shocked Adiii when I saw ur username it was luck I was going through the forum and saw u
Will comment later after reading

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 11 years ago

IT WAS WONDERFUL BUT A FABULOUS OS... LOVED IT

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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Posted: 11 years ago

its beautiful...neither romantic nor tragic...bt peaceful...loved it

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PseudoWriter

@..Evanescent..

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Posted: 11 years ago

i just love these neutral write ups!!!

and this one was awesome!

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blah.

@santiagosentyou

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Posted: 11 years ago

Remind me to read 🤣

UNRESERVED.

This is only because you threatened to disown me Maasi, otherwise mera kabhi unres nahi hota 🤣

Onto the OS,

You've managed to compile the story into such a short OS really well

Though I found it way too short, I'm not disappointed with the size because it had everything.

Also, I'm glad you haven't put in the whole reason but just the silent understanding between the two.

The first and last paragraphs are the best coz they are just soo philosophical <3

I wish we got to see this in the show but then, I wished so many other things too.

But thank youuu for writing this! 🤗

Edited by ARandKJFan - 11 years ago

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akshara

@--Akshu--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#10

I am loving short OS's man!

I loved ur's too Adiii,short and pretty😆

loved all ur descriptions and all!

the way you should the having coffee everyday and ending their day together!

and then finally she speaks up the baggage!

I oved the convo the way he had no courage to talk abt this but he asked his Q which he wanted to ask since ever!

and he comes to know all of it was a lie?he just walked off and they dint sleep!

the last lines were beautiful!

amazing Adiii I loved it!

khush?i commented😆😆

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