OS : THE TRUTH IS OUT PART 2 PAGE 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Guys,
I have been writing a long OS about another show...this is my first try on this show...i hope i got to know and understand well the character to represent them at their best here...feel free to comment and give me advices it will help me a lot in progressing thank youuu😊, here we go :
Ruhi was feeling so happy..she was finally staying at Swayam's house, she would finally be able to spend some time with him, Ruhi was still smiling alone when Swayam enters the room and ask :
S - Ruhi are you ok ??
Ruhi was lost in her though and didn't notice that Swayam is there
S- Ruhi...
R- Swayam...sorry woh me apne khealon mein ghum thi...aap kab aaye ??
S - No don't say sorry it's ok..baas abhi ayaa..are you ok ??
R- Jii Swayam, aap doston ke hote hue...hum baas theek hi hosakte hai 😊
Swayam looks down, God knows why everytime Ruhi said something like this..he was feeling really weird...as if...as if something...he could'nt complete his thought :
R- Kya hua Swayam ??
S - Nahin..kuch nahin..actually i have to go see you in college
Swayam leaves for college, still reminding Ruhi's words, she was soo sweet so gentle..poor girl..
On the other side, Sharon reach college thinking about Ruhi, she was really angry at herself, how easily Ruhi fools Swayam, she was thinking about making a new plan when Rey interrupt her ;
R- Hey Sharon...what are you thinking about ??
S- Kuch nahin...you tell ??
R - All fine...
S- Good...Rey listen i see you later
R- Sharon wait...do you...do you have some news of...
S - No sorry Rey...no news of Kriya...i guess she is busy..but don't worry i am sure she is fine 😊
R - disapointed yeah hope so 😊
Sharon goes to girls locker room, she was putting her stuff lost in her though when... :
R - Hi Sharon 😊 with an evil smile
Sharon turn around and see her biggest ennemy : Ruhi
S : Hi Ruhi...no need to be so happy...because soon your game will be over...so be ready Ruhi
R - Sharon apko pata hai apki problem kya hai ?? Aap hamesha over confident hoti hai..iss liye apke plans kam nahin karte..
S - You know what Ruhi ? Think whatever you want because it's a matter time..soon you will go back to Indore..and Swayam ? Swayam will be mine, dekhna tum mera pyar ki jeet hogi
R - Aap sapne dekhte rahiye Sharon...tab tak me Swayam ke aur kareeb jayoungi 😊 apko pata hai Sharon, Swayam pehle se meri itni fikar karte hai...baas pyar karna baki hai..or yeh bhi dheere dheere hojayega or aap...aap kuch nahin karpayengi..
S - Let's see 😊
Sharon was about to leave when she stopped shocked, Ruhi looks at her expressions and wonder why the so called " diva" looks was like that, she turn around and the same expression went on her face...because behind them, from the door Swayam was looking seriously at both, Sharon and Ruhi exchange a look surprised both were wondering the same thing :
R and S : Kahin Swayam ne hamari baat to nahin sunli ?
End of the OS..
I know it's far to be perfect but...it's my first try so please don't mind if i didn't do justice to the characters thank youu and feel free to give me your point of view about it 😊
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unishaz thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome.. Two shot banado pls isse.. Love it..
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😊I wil try thank you

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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is not fair...galat tym pe stop kyu??????????
pls pls continue...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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To keep your guys interest 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os
cont soon
pm me whn u updt nxt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here i come with a new part i am glad you all like my story as i am improving as and as i write, i just put down what comes in my mind and i am glad that the magic works on you 😊
Let's go for the new part please do leave comments
⭐️PART 2 :
Sharon and Ruhi exchanged a look wondering if Swayam hears anything, but both couldn't find the courage to ask this to him, Sharon starts walking away when Swayam stops her :
Sw: Sharon..mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai..
Sh : looking everywhere but not at Swayam Later, i have to go
Sharon starts walking but Swayam stops her again :
Sw : Important hai
Sh : Aww ok😳
Sw : Ruhi i see you later 😊
Ru : Theek hai Swayam 😃
Swayam and Sharon walk away from the girls locker room, Sharon was a little worried wondering what he will say to her, what she will reply to him, maybe it was the right time to tell him the whole truth about Ruhi...she took a deep breath and stops when Swayam's phone ringtone stop their walk :
Sw : Haan Rey..
R : Kahan hai tu ?
Sw : Me college mein Sharon ke saath kyu ? Kuch kam tha ?
R : Sharon ke saath haan ? 😉😛
Sw :standing far from Sharon Dude jo tu soch raha hai aisa kuch nahin hai...
R : Haan haan kuch nahin hai baas tu Sharon ke saath...
Sw : Rey tu bol raha hai kya kaam tha ke me rakhoun ??
R : Arey rukh na, acha seriously mujhe poochna tha tune Kriya ko dekha kya ? College me kahin dikhayi nahin de rahi
Sw : Oh oh Kriya haan 😉😛
R : Swayam yaar aisa...acha beta meri baat mere saath
Sw : 😆
R : Saleee 😃
Sw : Ok seriously nahin maine usse nahin dekha i think woh abhi tak college nahin aayi maybe raastein mein hogi
R : Ok see you
Sw : Chal bye..
Swayam turn around saying : Sharon sorry woh Rey ka phone...
But Sharon left already, he has to find her he has to get to know the truth she has to tell him if what he saw was right or not, she has to !!
Swayam looks for her everywhere in college but couldn't find her, so he called Simmi to asks her but couldn't help even her didn't know where Sharon was, he was about to call Sharon on her phone when suddenly comming from behind him a voice call him :
? : Swayam
Swayam turn around and see Ruhi standing behind him with a bright smile, Swayam though..Sharon wasn't maybe ready to give him an explanation...so he will have to ask Ruhi..
Sw : Hey Ruhi 😊
Ru : Aap theek ho ?
Sw : Yeah or tum ? Ab tumhari chaut kaisi hai ?
Ru : Thori si better 😊 thank you...Class mein chale ?
Sw : Urh yeah...
Ruhi pass by Swayam and start walking toward class hoping and crossing fingers for Swayam to stop her and tell her that he loves her, this was the only dream for which Ruhi was fighting against Sharon, Swayam was her, he deserv only her ! He has to be her only !
Stopping her thoughts :
S : Ruhii
R :stops and turn back Ji Swayam
S : Mujhe kuch poochna hai tumse
R : Kahiye na Swayam it was the time Swayam was about to tell her that he loves her, the best day of her life has come Swayam will finally be hers, times to lost for Sharon Rai Prakash..
S : Tumhare aur Sharon ke bich mein saab theek hai ?
R :broken and shocked Kya ??
S : Haan..woh..maine tum dono ko baat karte hue dekha and aap dono hi upset lag rahi thi...koi problem hai kya ?? Agar hai to batado i will help you
R : Nahin Swayam wait wait wait Ruhi why not taking advantage of the situation ab kya batayoun me apko Swayam...
S : Batayo na kya hua ??
R : Woh Swayam...Sharon ne phir mujhe dhamki di ke me aap se door rahoun unko hamari dosti achi nahin lagti 😔
S : Sharon ne ? Really ? 😲
R : Haan mujhe kuch samaj mein nahin araha...akhir me aisa kaun sa galat kaam kar rahi houn ke woh mujhse itni upset hai...pata nahin Swayam me aisa kya karoun ke woh mujhe like kare 😭
She hugs Swayam and starts crying with a hiddeng evil smile
S : surprised Waow calm down Ruhi calm down...me me Sharon se baat karounga
Ruhi break the hug and says Nahin Swayam aap unse kuch mat kahiyega warna woh kahegi ke maine apko unke khilaf bharkaya hai
S : Lekin Ruhi
R : Please Swayam
S : Ok ok baas tum tension mat lo saab theek hojayega or please rona band karo...mujhe samaj mein nahin araha ke akhir Sharon aisa kaise karsakti hai ? I mean she is not like that so..
R : To kya me jhoot bol rahi houn ??
S : Nahin nahin mera matlab woh nahin tha..mujhe Sharon ka behavior samaj mein nahin araha...anyway don't worry saab theek hojayega
R : Ji...chale ??
S : Haan chalo
They start walking toward the classroom when Swayam stops :
S : Ruhi tum class mein jane se pehle girls locker room mein moon haath dholo..
R : Aap theek keh rahe hai me abhi ati houn😊
S : Ok 😊
Swayam waits that Ruhi left to call Sharon :
Sh : Yeah Swayam with a fear voice
Sw : Sharon tum kahan ho ??
Sh : College me fear voice
Sw : Yeah i know but exactly kahain ho ? Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai urgent !
Sh : Me..me woh...
Sw : Tum abhi mujhe rehearsal hall mein milo ! Mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai
Sh : Can't it wait after the classes Swayam ? Hum class ke liye late..
Sw :interrupting her No it can't !! I am waiting there for you
Swayam cut the call and start walking toward the rehearsal hall thinking this time Sharon has to give me an explanation, this time she has to be honest with him and tell him the whole truth...she has to !!! Swayam was angry inside how could Sharon do that to him ?? How could she hide from him the fact that...that...he was even afraid of thinking of this...how could he ?? How could he not see ?? How could he not see what he heard ?? How could he not see that Ruhi was in love with him...Sharon has to give him the explanation, she has to tell him why she hides the fact that Ruhi told her that she loves Swayam.
End of the part 😊
Please do leave a lot's of comments, i will write the next part if got comments from people who want me to continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome part... please update soon... cant wait for the next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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just waiting for shar to tell the truth to swayam...
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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update soon
want both o them to patch up asap

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