Wait Did End || A Kriyaansh One Shot

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Okay guys I wrote a one shot. This is written for Aditi. She requested and I wanted to write something like this.

Thanks to Rupanshi. She gave me ideas and because of that my mind cleared a bit. Thank you darling.

So, Try and Enjoy!


He waited for her, hoping wishing that she comes as soon as possible. He was waiting for more than a half an hour and she still wasn't her. He was so happy when Swayam told him yesterday that she was returning.

"Guys, Kriya ka message!" He yelled as they were assembled in Rey's house to think of what they were going to do about the dance academy.

Rey got alarmed and he asked Swayam to read it aloud. "Dekh kya raha hai! Jaldi padh na." He said to Swayam, eagerness clearly visible in his voice.

"Tu itna kya be chain ho raha hai... Swayam tu phone mujhe de." Vicke said with the intentions of irritating Rey.

"Mere bhai... Please. Yeh sab baad mein kar na... Mei" he was interrupted.

"Swayam. I am coming back to India tomorrow. My flight lands at 9 o clock at night. Bye." Swayam read the text aloud. Rey was overjoyed. He smiled from ear to ear. That sparkle evident in his eyes as he thought of Kriya coming back.

"Abe tu kya itna khush ho raha hai?" Nil asked Rey.

"Rey ko na pyaar ke keede ne kaata hai." Vicky replied, placing his arm around Rey's neck. Rey looked at him. And he immediately pulled his hand back.

"Keeda, you know bug." He said to Rey, nervously laughing while Rey shooted daggers at him with his eyes.


He just laughed at how silly he was behaving last night. And tonight he's here standing at the airport waiting for Kriya.

He looked around and saw that a girl was rushing out of the exit doors wearing a pair of cropped pants, a plaid white shirt and a blazer upon that. Her hair pulled into a ponytail. He saw her as she ran towards something. His eyes trailed her as she ran, her hair and that bag on her back bouncing along. And she ran into the arms of a man, 'she must love him' he thought. And by the looks of it they looked married. The way they were hugging and kissing each other left him to imagine if that could ever happen to Kriya and him.

He smiled and snapped out of his thoughts. He hit the back of his head lightly and smiled again, goofily. He had decided that when he sees her today, he will tell her about his feelings and express his love. He was no longer scared. The old Rey was back and no one is suppressing him now. Not even his own self.

He waited for another fifteen minutes and was about to walk towards the door but his steps froze.

She came out of those glass doors, struggling with her luggage trolley. Her hair were being blown by the wind, disturbing his view. A small smile came on his lips when he saw that she was blabbering to herself, probably complaining to Universeji. He was lost in her, her beauty, her serenity, her everything.

He wanted to touch her in flesh and blood, since he didn't get the opportunity to do it the time she was leaving. He walked towards her and tapped on her shoulder.

As soon as she turned, he hugged her with all his might. She was shocked at first but she was aware of this touch. She thought for a while and placed her hands on the side of his waist, almost clutching his t shirt. She was nervous. But this sudden action of Rey's made her more nervous.

"I missed you." He whispered in her ear. Her eyes widened. Is he really telling this. Has he accepted his feeling. The questions ran in her mind. She realized their positions and pulled away. They stood their looking into each other's eyes for the longest time.

"Chale?" She asked him breaking the eye lock. He softly nodded and smiled. He took her luggage and walked towards the car.
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An hour or so later, they were still in the car, no body dared to say something. The whole ride they did not speak. Kriya was too lost in thinking what occurred to Rey all of a sudden. Whereas Rey on the other hand debating whether he should tell Kriya about his feelings or not.

He halted and Kriya looked at him, confused. "Your house." he indicated with his eyebrows lifting towards the house. Kriya looked at the guest house in front of her eyes.

"Yeah, I'll take the bags." She said.

"No I will." He said as they both got out of the car at the same time and headed towards the car's boot.

Kriya extended her hand towards the bag and so did Rey. Their hands touched for a moment when Kriya withdrew her hand.

Rey took a suitcase and they started fighting over it.

"Rey it's okay, I'll take it." Kriya said holding the suitcase by the other handle.

"No Kriya let me.." He pulled the suitcase to him.

"It's okay. I'll manage." Pulled to herself.

"Kriya let me.."

"No Rey.."

"I'm telling right."

"It's okay Rey"

"Listen to me..."

"No let it be."

In their game of tug of war, the suitcase slipped from their hand and landed straight on Kriya's feet.

"Ouch!" She screamed in agony.

"Kriya." Rey called out, holding her by the waist and placing her on the seat.

"See I told you not to do it. You're so careless." He said to her while crouching down to examine her leg.

"Oh really." She started but he interrupted.

"Shh!" He said placing his finger on her lips. They looked at each other. A little while later, he moved his hand.

"Come on, I'll take you inside." He said as he picked her up bridal style. They were looking into each-other's eyes and he went in the house and inside her room. He placed her on her bed and was setting the pillows for her. When they just looked into each others eyes and the world stopped for them. It was only the two of them who existed.

"Rey?" She asked.

"Hmm..." He replied, still lost in her, while she was trapped in between his arms.

"Mera luggage?" She asked innocently, a smile waiting to come out.

His trance was broken and he remembered the reason he came there. "Yeah I'll get that." He said embarrassed.

While Rey was out to get the luggage, Kriya was thinking just one thing.

Is this real? But why is Rey acting like this. Does he?? No Kriya Rey doesn't like you, it's just a friend thing for him. Stop thinking like this. Remember you are going to behave professionally with him.

"I'm back." Rey said as he kept her bags at the corner of the room. "Okay I need to go but I'll meet you tomorrow okay?"

Kriya just smiled and turned her back to him, pretending to be sleepy. Rey smiled at her cuteness and went home.

That night both of them slept just lost in the each others thoughts.
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The next day, Kriya was walking in the corridors thinking about the affiliation. Who is she kidding after all that happened yesterday. Her concentration was just on Rey.

Suddenly, she was pulled by her arm. She winced as she knew who the person was. Rey pressed her against the wall, her eyes closed.

"Baatcutter." He called out. Her eyes shot open at the word. It's been ages since she heard that. She was over joyed and tears formed in her eyes. She looked down, indicating him about their closeness. He moved back, biting his lip nervously.

She waited for him to say sorry, but he didn't unlike the last time this happened. But the last time they were in the girls locker room. She smiled a bit as she remembered that.

"Kuch kaam tha." She asked him, she turned her back against him, trying to avoid looking at him.

"Kaam to hai." He said, coming close to her and whispering in her ears. The hot breath of his made shivers run down her spine.

"Kya?" She asked her lips trembling by their contiguinity.

"Kriya..." He said in a husky voice to nervous her more. He was having a lot of fun doing this.

"Ji Rey." She moved down the stairs to get away from him. He caught her wrist midway.

"Rey mera haath... 'Beep' 'beep'." Her cell rang indicating she has got a message. When she checked her phone, it was from the dean of IDS. All of this while Rey held her hand and read the message peering over her shoulder.

"Rey Mujhe..." She started to turn but stopped when she noticed the close proximity between them.

"Bolo Kriya." He said.

"M..Mujhe...Mujhe.uh." She started.

"Tumhe?" He asked enjoying that trembling face thoroughly.

"Mujhe jaana hai... Dean sir ne.. Message kiya hai." She said and made an attempt to run out if the fire exit. But Rey pulled her towards humself, crashing her into himself, and clutched her waist.

"Main nahi chahta ki Tum jao." He said.

"Rey chodiye mujhe." She started struggling in his arms. He held her more tighter causing her to stop.

"Rey..." She said as she looked at him. Their faces inches apart, she started breathing heavily whereas he just smirked. He leaned down a little when she couldn't take it anymore, the torture was killing her, what did he think that he could tell her that they are 'just friends' and then kiss her.

She pushed him away, leaving him shocked for a second and she took her plight to the stairs.

"Kriya, if you loved me even once, stop." He closed his eyes and said in a stern voice, voice which begged for her to stop.

That made her stop dead on her tracks, she couldn't walk any further. She knew that she lied to him once but she couldn't do it again, that was the main reason for ignoring him. But now after he actually asked her. She couldn't lie to him.

She felt him moving closer to her, while she stood there unable to make any movement. With every step he took her heartbeat increased. As every second passed she just wanted to vanish from there. But a part of her also wanted him to confess his love for her.

He wrapped his arms around her waist nuzzling into her neck. He could sense her closing her eyes as one single teardrop fell on the floor, and there was a sharp intake of breath. She placed her palms in his as he left a kiss on her shoulder.

"I love you." He whispered in her ear as soon as she did.

She turned around in his arms, shocked and just hugged him tightly, letting the tears fall. She finally got the love she was yearning to experience. He pulled away and cupped her face, leaning in a bit then looking at her asking for permission.

She just closed her eyes and he leaned in more.

Finally, their wait did end.

Done.

Okay I know it must've sucked I'm really sorry...

Aditi really sorry if I did not match your expectations, really.

Please comment and tell me how it was.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing OS ...!
Beautifully written
Loved the ending confession ...!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome os!!!
Beautifully written!!!
D excitement...d hesistation...d nervousness...everythng is carved so beautifully!!!
D sudden pull in FE!!! Oh how i miss it!!!
N d confession in d end!!!
Simple slow emotional romantic lovely!!!!
D hug!!! Divine!!!
I just love it!!!
Fantastic!!!
Keep writing such stuff meh!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovelu os love it rey enjoying krias reaction old kr yaad aagaye
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear.. SImply love it.. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os
i love it..

thanks for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this was truly beautiful...
his anxiety excitement nd desperation to confess his love...
amazingly written...then their never ending fight...i missed it...
nd the oh so amazing confession...typical kriyaansh style...
well done naaz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

this was truly beautiful...
his anxiety excitement nd desperation to confess his love...
amazingly written...then their never ending fight...i missed it...
nd the oh so amazing confession...typical kriyaansh style...
well done naaz



Oye Tera already res tha...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing os
beautifully written
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome it is

nicely written
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