Wait Did End || A Kriyaansh One Shot

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Sridipta

@sri_crazlacious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Res..
Unres..
Yaar kya krti hai tu..absolute treat fr all d kr fans..haaye kash ye asli mein hota.. 😳
i mean too gud yaar..rey's excitement nd then again their nvr endng cute fight..loved it!

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Mruganka and Anushka

@Arshalicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Wow this is beautiful

Loved the way u have described the scene in the fire exit

Awesome os...thanks for the pm

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shreya

@luvuKR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

fantastic os...awesome..

bichari kria ws so confused n d way her reaction wen rey asked her to stop if she luvd him even once

I had a big smile all d tym while reading d FE scene👏👏

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-Monika-

@-Monika-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

AWESOME...
i wish d3 mein bhi aisa ho jata...
beautifully written..

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Rupanshi Garg

@PunjabiKudi_17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Mannu hayeee again it was a blast... 😆
Superb OS..
Loved it really.. 😳
Mere ko to faltu ka credit mil gya..Thanq thanq.. 😃
Haye seriously it was too good..
Hayee kaash d3 mei b aisa ho jaye..
I lovd d scene whn rey says 'I Missed You' Hayee those thre wrds touchd me.. 😳 👏
Kitna pyar krte hai dono ek dusre ko..
And bichari kria k pair par chot lag gyi.. 😲
Pyaar ka punchnama... 😉
Well done Mannu.. 👏
Love u darls.. 😳

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alex754

@alex754

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Ah-mazing oneshot
Sooo good
I totally loved and i could completely imagine throughout the os
Thanks for pm
Btw u have amazing writing skills

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow sch a lvly one.. Thnks for the pm..

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Greeshma

@pulu1995

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Woahh !! this is awesome.. hope something like this happens

Its really good, thank you for the PM

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

it was lovelyy!!!!!! airport mein jab rey hugged kriya it was soo sweet!!!!! then the fireexit scene,always my fav ones!!!!! rey smirking and coming closer to her,and kriya gettng nervous these are the best things!!!!!! superbbb!!!!!!!

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

wow...beautiful os maanu...
plsss dont say sorry for such a beautiful work...
it waz really good...
thnk u for writing dis for mee...
n rups thnks to u too...
since u helpd maanu do dis...
lovd d entire one shot...
d way Rey imagining Himself n Kriya in d couple dat he saw at d airport...
yaaa..actually d old Rey is back...
he waz soo jus lyk I wanted it too b...
Rey helping Kriya to tke out d lugage n dn dey fight over it...I remembered d village wala scene whr dey wer doing d sme...
ek ek scene padh k purane KriYaansh scenes yaad aa rahe the...
n not to forget d Confession wala part...
I soo wanted it to b in d Fire Exit...its such a spcl place for KriYaansh...
Kriyas happiness knew no bounds when she heard dose 3 words frm his mouth...OMG...!! beautiful moment...
KriYaansh always leave us spellbound...

THNK U MAANU...for writing such a beautiful os on my demand...
THNK U RUPS...for helpin her...
LOVE U BOTH LOADS...MUAHZ...